Reincarnated Death Spider King, Sacrifices Bibi Dong at the Beginning
by Mu Ze El
About This Novel
... This book is also called "Shock!" Have I become Bibi Dong's martial spirit? Nan Feng traveled through Douluo Continent and faced a hellish start as soon as he opened his eyes. He became the 100,000-year-old soul beast destined to be hunted by Bibi Dong, the Death Spider King. Moreover, he was still idle with residual health, and could only watch helplessly as that crazy woman named Bibi Dong came to kill him! Run? There are all enemies outside, and they are in boxes on the ground. Beat? There is only one drop of blood left, and death is certain. "Can't beat it? Then join!" "Want my 100,000-year-old soul ring and soul bone? No problem! Brother, sacrifice it yourself!" "But I have one condition - take me to become a god!" Bibi Dong thought she had gotten a huge bargain, not only getting a hundred thousand year soul ring, but also an extra top quality soul bone. However, just when she had finished absorbing it and was about to show off her ambitions, she was horrified to discover-- Her hands had a mind of their own. "Although the body is a bit brittle, it's still pretty good." "It's just that I'm not used to it." Bibi Dong collapsed: "Didn't you say you are in the soul bone? Why can you control my body?!" Nan Feng: "Are you surprised? Are you surprised? Our martial spirits have the same origin, and I put myself into your martial spirit!" From then on, the style of the Pope of Wuhun Palace changed. In front of others, she is a noble and cool iron-blooded pope; As a queen, she had to fight for control of her body with a shameless soul. Nan Feng: "Is that trash Yu Xiaogang here? Don't move, let me scold you!" Nan Feng: "Xiaoxue is back? Come, mommy hugs me!" Bibi Dong: "... Get out of here!!!"
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Official(574)Scraped 3d ago
The character of the protagonist is too disgusting. He is ruthless but not cruel to the end. He is a very artificial image. He thinks he is very calculating, but he has the advantage of the script. Can the author not make the character of the protagonist seem to be very scheming, but in the end he feels like a irritable child? It is really very dramatic. If Then help Wuhun Palace wholeheartedly, move towards victory together, win over the Pope's lineage, can't it be a win-win situation? It's as if it's only for Bibi Dong and yourself, and everyone else in Wuhun Palace is your enemy or servant. You are not really the 100,000-year-old Death Spider Emperor. The writing is too weird. The character of the protagonist
The role of Nanfeng compared to Bi Dong is like putting a swimsuit on a fish or a scarf on a lion. Apart from treating Qian Renxue a little better, the main plot has not changed at all.
The idea is very novel and the writing is very pure
Readers who have seen the paragraph review I posted will probably not be surprised by this score. The entire article is a dialogue between two people, and similar words are repeated over and over again. Other shortcomings have not been mentioned. This alone is enough to persuade people to leave. If we can't figure out our own selling point, we need to watch them work together to find something, watch the mother and daughter get along, watch the protagonist and Bibi Dong understand each other amidst their differences, and become gods under heavy restrictions. I don't want to read all the trash talk. It's not only unskilled but also very brainless, like a shrew scolding the street. If there really is no outline, let's not update it. Can we write a book with peace of mind and create a good book that is worthy of both readers and ourselves? I really beg. (The book has been deleted. If any readers see that it has been changed later, please do not come back and criticize me. Thank you)
Awesome, awesome
Awesome, Kangkangkangkangkang
The first few chapters were fine, but in the end, the combat power completely collapsed. Level 97 Bibi Dong couldn't destroy Tang Xiao's combination of a Titled Douluo and several Contras with his own martial soul fusion skill? Moreover, it is outrageous to say that a Contra's self-destruction means that even a level 97 Soul Master will have to shed his skin if he does not die. If a self-destruction of a Contra can seriously injure a level 97 soul master, then wouldn't a self-destruction of a level 91 titled Douluo be able to seriously injure a level 98 or even level 99 soul master?
No, the protagonist pretends to be a good guy, Bibi Dong, and then goes crazy, and then deceives the little girl's feelings. It's so, so disgusting. There is a book next door. Something is not right about this Bibi Dong. He directly seizes the body, plays with reason and technology, and gives Qian Renxue a good childhood. Qian Xunji's revenge is repaid by his own way. Now that he has the power, status and family, he will continue to abuse the three of them steadily. You see, the original work has no protagonist. Bibi Dong killed the teacher and became the pope. The protagonist steps in, pretends to be wise, deceives people's feelings, and also takes the main mission? Does destroying the Haotian Sect appear to be very smart? You are the soul of a sojourning spirit beast. Bibi Dong asked the Rakshasa God to destroy the protagonist. What ability does the protagonist have to resist?
Then the war started, what did you write about? Like shit. A titled Douluo must be at least level 93. By a Contra and several Soul Saints. You are suppressing and beating, and there is a Soul Douluo who uses his martial spirit avatar to hit you. It takes three titles for a Douluo to be able to block it? Damn, Bibi Dong is level 97, can't he stop a Contra's spirit avatar? This can also allow Haotian Sect to take advantage of the loophole and take away people. Okay, you said that the protagonist is here and you thought of it in advance. Now you write Bibi Dong like a fool, asking the protagonist everything. I also know that Bibi Dong has not grown up now. You should at least give him some brains. Why are you asking everything? Give you advice. Don't you listen? Also, you were asked to pretend to be a good person in front of Qian Renxue, but you didn't let him die. Why can't you accept it?
I watched the video from Douyin. I felt that the author had failed in writing. The protagonist seemed to be quite scheming at first, but in the end, he couldn't even figure out his own position. Then there was a chapter about the quarrel with Bibi Dong, and Bibi Dong seemed to be irrational. The author's personal emotions had already changed. The characters have been suppressed. What you are writing is a fan novel. If it is an original novel, you can write it any way you like. You can even write it better if you have personal emotions. But fan fiction that allows personal emotions to gain the upper hand in the battle is definitely not good. Just wait, there is more than a 70% chance that this novel will be unfinished.
At level 97, I was hit with a hammer by 93 and vomited blood. You are the author who likes to overwhelm combat power the most. The Haotian sect is a god. Every soul fight has a title. The force clan is invincible. 500 Will fight 2000. The enemies are all fighting to the death. I will collapse at the first touch. Haotian sect is nb anyway. Anyway, I am weak and I can't beat it, so I am defeated. Okay~_~ The author is great~_~
From now on, the more I write, the more I feel that the protagonist is aggrieved. There is no sense of satisfaction in your novel.
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Official(574)Scraped 3d ago
The character of the protagonist is too disgusting. He is ruthless but not cruel to the end. He is a very artificial image. He thinks he is very calculating, but he has the advantage of the script. Can the author not make the character of the protagonist seem to be very scheming, but in the end he feels like a irritable child? It is really very dramatic. If Then help Wuhun Palace wholeheartedly, move towards victory together, win over the Pope's lineage, can't it be a win-win situation? It's as if it's only for Bibi Dong and yourself, and everyone else in Wuhun Palace is your enemy or servant. You are not really the 100,000-year-old Death Spider Emperor. The writing is too weird. The character of the protagonist
The role of Nanfeng compared to Bi Dong is like putting a swimsuit on a fish or a scarf on a lion. Apart from treating Qian Renxue a little better, the main plot has not changed at all.
The idea is very novel and the writing is very pure
Readers who have seen the paragraph review I posted will probably not be surprised by this score. The entire article is a dialogue between two people, and similar words are repeated over and over again. Other shortcomings have not been mentioned. This alone is enough to persuade people to leave. If we can't figure out our own selling point, we need to watch them work together to find something, watch the mother and daughter get along, watch the protagonist and Bibi Dong understand each other amidst their differences, and become gods under heavy restrictions. I don't want to read all the trash talk. It's not only unskilled but also very brainless, like a shrew scolding the street. If there really is no outline, let's not update it. Can we write a book with peace of mind and create a good book that is worthy of both readers and ourselves? I really beg. (The book has been deleted. If any readers see that it has been changed later, please do not come back and criticize me. Thank you)
Awesome, awesome
Awesome, Kangkangkangkangkang
The first few chapters were fine, but in the end, the combat power completely collapsed. Level 97 Bibi Dong couldn't destroy Tang Xiao's combination of a Titled Douluo and several Contras with his own martial soul fusion skill? Moreover, it is outrageous to say that a Contra's self-destruction means that even a level 97 Soul Master will have to shed his skin if he does not die. If a self-destruction of a Contra can seriously injure a level 97 soul master, then wouldn't a self-destruction of a level 91 titled Douluo be able to seriously injure a level 98 or even level 99 soul master?
No, the protagonist pretends to be a good guy, Bibi Dong, and then goes crazy, and then deceives the little girl's feelings. It's so, so disgusting. There is a book next door. Something is not right about this Bibi Dong. He directly seizes the body, plays with reason and technology, and gives Qian Renxue a good childhood. Qian Xunji's revenge is repaid by his own way. Now that he has the power, status and family, he will continue to abuse the three of them steadily. You see, the original work has no protagonist. Bibi Dong killed the teacher and became the pope. The protagonist steps in, pretends to be wise, deceives people's feelings, and also takes the main mission? Does destroying the Haotian Sect appear to be very smart? You are the soul of a sojourning spirit beast. Bibi Dong asked the Rakshasa God to destroy the protagonist. What ability does the protagonist have to resist?
Then the war started, what did you write about? Like shit. A titled Douluo must be at least level 93. By a Contra and several Soul Saints. You are suppressing and beating, and there is a Soul Douluo who uses his martial spirit avatar to hit you. It takes three titles for a Douluo to be able to block it? Damn, Bibi Dong is level 97, can't he stop a Contra's spirit avatar? This can also allow Haotian Sect to take advantage of the loophole and take away people. Okay, you said that the protagonist is here and you thought of it in advance. Now you write Bibi Dong like a fool, asking the protagonist everything. I also know that Bibi Dong has not grown up now. You should at least give him some brains. Why are you asking everything? Give you advice. Don't you listen? Also, you were asked to pretend to be a good person in front of Qian Renxue, but you didn't let him die. Why can't you accept it?
I watched the video from Douyin. I felt that the author had failed in writing. The protagonist seemed to be quite scheming at first, but in the end, he couldn't even figure out his own position. Then there was a chapter about the quarrel with Bibi Dong, and Bibi Dong seemed to be irrational. The author's personal emotions had already changed. The characters have been suppressed. What you are writing is a fan novel. If it is an original novel, you can write it any way you like. You can even write it better if you have personal emotions. But fan fiction that allows personal emotions to gain the upper hand in the battle is definitely not good. Just wait, there is more than a 70% chance that this novel will be unfinished.
At level 97, I was hit with a hammer by 93 and vomited blood. You are the author who likes to overwhelm combat power the most. The Haotian sect is a god. Every soul fight has a title. The force clan is invincible. 500 Will fight 2000. The enemies are all fighting to the death. I will collapse at the first touch. Haotian sect is nb anyway. Anyway, I am weak and I can't beat it, so I am defeated. Okay~_~ The author is great~_~
From now on, the more I write, the more I feel that the protagonist is aggrieved. There is no sense of satisfaction in your novel.
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