Super Sequence

Share your personal thoughts: I feel that this book is more of a plot-based work that describes the grudges and hatreds between characters, as well as conspiracy struggles, rather than an imaginative work that expresses various strange superpowers. The writing style of this book is normal, the characters are vividly described, and they are flesh-and-blood. The interactions between the characters are also very interesting (compared to other novels, it makes me feel like a living person). Everyone in the protagonist group has different personalities, and they all have something that attracts me. The key to keeping the character's IQ online is that the character is stable, the protagonist has a certain growth line, and other members of the protagonist group also have their own stories. This feeling allowed me to find the immersive, novel and interesting experience I felt when I first entered the world of online literature. In terms of world view, the author uses traditional superpower settings, but there are no new ideas. Moreover, the author's writing on the setting of super powers is not particularly complete. The author did write about the battles and conspiracy struggles between superpowers, as well as the reactions after gaining superpowers, and the struggles and compromises with the country. However, as an imaginative setting of superpowers, the author did not write in detail how these characters develop superpowers, how to explore the use of superpowers, what are the weaknesses of superpowers, or what is the relationship between restraint and restraint? How he integrated his understanding of superpowers into combat and then performed amazing operations was only briefly mentioned in the work. Moreover, the number of superpowers described by the author in the article is also very limited. In fact, people may want to see more weird superpowers, and then how the protagonist uses his own wisdom on superpowers to deal with them. For example, let's say that the protagonist group met a time rewinder one day. This person may have encountered something, and he used the ability to go back in time to go back to the past. The original scope was very small, but then the ability got out of control and affected other people, so the protagonist group came to recover him and help him control his super powers. Including superpowers that can pull people into a virtual space, and superpowers that can control various marine and land creatures. There is a lack of superpowers in the works that have a wide range of influence, and superpowers that can use cards to affect the fate of others. (Well, although this superpower is a bit too strong, you can find ways to weaken it. For example, what I just mentioned is their ultimate form. But I will give you an example. Personally, I think superpowers should dare to think and do, and pursue more possibilities. I can't go on.) This is just a humble opinion of a reader who pursues imagination. If the author just wants to express the plot, then treat it as if I didn't say anything. But I think that the whole text of the work is quite concise, without any nonsense. The author's description of the plot is quite good, the look and feel is very good and smooth, and the description of the emotional foreshadowing is also in place. In short, it stands out as solid. However, the theme is limited to the relationship between love and hatred. If the author is a person who pursues plots and wants to write more diverse and in-depth plots, then it is recommended to enrich the types of superpower settings, how to develop natural weaknesses, etc. Superpowers are a kind of imaginative setting. In online novels, superpowers are almost equal to reality. Then, it will inevitably have an impact on people's concepts and even their philosophy, world view, life attitude, action philosophy, and the attitudes of people around them. Through superpowers, people have the ability to directly change reality. Then, the character's own ideas can also be expressed more and more intensely through superpowers. I believe that if the author really expands his superpowers, then based on the author's ability to describe the plot, I think this work can be written better and more attractive, because I feel that everyone still likes imaginative works.

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