Fox Lure

When I saw the name, I thought it was something like that, where the female protagonist is a little fox, and then she meets some male protagonist, and then some bloody love develops. I didn't expect it to look so good! ! I have a strong interest in Chinese Taoism, and this book really suits my taste. I really think it looks great, but it's too slow. I beg the author to update it as soon as possible! ! ! [Emot=default,10/]

Like: The content and plot are good. It's hard to see this type of writing in female videos that are not mostly about falling in love. I like the kind people in it and look forward to the direction of the plot in the future. Small opinion: It is amazing that the eight-year-old heroine has such a mind. I hope that the future direction can take into account the attributes of children and not overly raise the IQ. The current level is not bad. I look forward to the future direction of several male characters and female protagonists, but don't take up a lot of space. I also hope that the Cen family will have a good ending, and it is best to have a reasonable reason to die

Is Li Wen a pedophile? . . . . . I really can't accept an adult being ambiguous with an eight-year-old girl

To be honest, the direction of the plot is almost the same as that of Lifelike. I don't know who borrowed from who. [Emot=default,01/] It's quite irritating. Moreover, the common problem of female protagonists in this kind of novels is a bit of Mary's disease. The female protagonist in this novel only dares to be a quarrel. The Cen family's writing is inexplicable. The previous writing is both repaying kindness and understanding. As a result, Inexplicably, he is so malicious towards the victim, the heroine. He would scare the heroine to death with just one glance. Even if he is scared to death when he sees a ghost, he should ask Huang Daochang to save her as a matter of course, but at the same time, he must be kind. The key is that others accept your love. [Emot=default,21/] I gave two stars because it is not easy to write.

Start high and low, repeatedly emphasize that the heroine is only eight years old, and write a bunch of messy emotional lines. There is a baby girl, the baby girl talked about something else there, and then comes back to the heroine. Li Wen is 19 years old and is jealous of the heroine and other men. There is also a yellow-skinned girl who calls the heroine his wife. , The heroine is full of truths and is like a good person, but the writing becomes more and more confusing as the writing goes on. The plot is also messy, and the foreshadowing is buried and forgotten. After the first part is written, everyone is forgotten, so everyone has to surround the heroine. The heroine is still a child and is unreasonable. Don't be fooled by the front, don't spend money, run quickly, it really sucks

The writing is very nice. I hope there is no Virgin Mary in it. I hope the Cen family has a sad ending. It's so disgusting. The whole family is disgusted.

The author said that it had to be finished because of the editor's urging, but 75% of the holes in the book were not filled in, such as why Liu Chen pulled her in his dream. There is no such thing as a religion that is written so powerfully, and there is no process of destroying it. Xue Chen wrote the same thing. He obviously didn't take the book, so what was the bargaining chip for him to defect to Hu in the past? What kind of deal did he have with Hu? He said he wanted to find Hu to transfer his soul, but obviously Hu didn't do it at all. Later, the two fell in love for no reason and had to go back. Why should Hu let him go? Wasn't he talking about the hall master? Then most of the characters in the book are full of swear words, so the character of Lao Huang is a bit normal. The heroine is a kind person, so kind, and she talks so much that Gangqi's book was not even opened until the end... But just reading the first words is quite interesting, because the heroine was constantly being abused, and she shed a lot of tears. There is also the Forest Bureau, which has already investigated this kind of thing. The official must be cooperating with the Taoist sect. Is it necessary to just rely on ordinary people to set up this department and not solve the case for more than ten years? In the end, the case where there are clues has to rely on the heroine, a child, to ask around. There are bugs. Anyway, if the book is written normally and all the holes are filled, this book is still good.

How to say it? I'm very disappointed. I came from Douyin. The front part is really good. I opened a membership for the sake of it. The front part is really good, but the back part is so bad. It's very sad. The love line is too difficult to write. The pedophilia in it is disgusting. Feng Chuang's character creation is too bad. I don't know why Li Wen is included. He appears inexplicably. Some of the supporting characters are particularly unsuccessful. The ending It's really sloppy, the enlightenment is inexplicable, the bad guy behind the scenes didn't appear successfully, and the ending is too sloppy. Except for the first 100 chapters, the rest is daddy

The first part is okay, but the book's outlook is very poor. A group of 10-year-old kids are talking about love, and adults don't care about it, but they still support it. The continuity of the plot is pretty good, but there are a lot of things in the middle that are inexplicable, especially the relationship line. The children are only about 10 years old, and they love and love, which makes people speechless.

Can the heroine's yang soul be taken back? If I had taken it directly, could I have stopped being so kind?