Kuaiwen: the Way of Heaven Brings About Reincarnation, Who Will the Heroine Spare?

I read this from another book and I really like it. I hope the author will work harder.

The pace is very slow. I was so angry in the first story. I don't know if Sun Laoer remembered the teachings of his mentor when he gave the girl one hundred taels. Haha, there is no way to pay him back, and there are difficulties in paying him back. What kind of wife should I choose? I will give back the entire concubine and give back a child that is not my own. You are so generous. I don't even want to mention your full name. It's so annoying.

Call Mo Bing! Call Mo Bing! You have a husband who is itchy and needs to be spanked😎😎

Teacher Xiaoxiang, this is the first book of yours that I have read. I think the characters in your book are very vivid and three-dimensional, and the story is also very contagious and readable. But here I would like to make a small suggestion, I hope you can see it. (Of course, this is also my personal opinion. It is definitely immature and cannot represent the majority of readers.) The first story in your article uses a dual-line narrative, which I think is very novel in works of the same type. But every time I jump to the next chapter after reading one chapter, the story feels very fragmented to me. It's like you were halfway through drinking milk tea and suddenly the milk tea was replaced with spicy soup, and then after you accepted the spicy soup, it was replaced with milk tea. It doesn't look that good. Secondly, I think since the first story is titled "The miserable wife who was deceived into marriage by the eunuch's chief assistant". Then the focus should be on "cheating" and "wife". You can describe in detail the reason for being cheated, the wife's condition after being cheated, the changes made by the heroine, etc. Of course, you have written about all the above points. However, the story of the first assistant traveling to Beijing alone to take the exam should not be described as a major focus, unless it is to pave the way for subsequent storylines. Furthermore, this is an article with the heroine Mo Bing as the main character and other characters as secondary characters. Then I think the cases you described about the first assistant encountering on his way to Beijing to take the exam and that are not related to the later development of the heroine's story should not be described too much. If you add a large plot that has no cause and effect to the protagonist, the entire article structure will be uncoordinated. The above are my personal opinions, I hope Teacher Xiaoxiang can see them. In addition, I wish you more and more readers and good sales of your new book!

Damn, is this pit going to get worse?

The author is so talented! It was a pleasure to read, and I like the character of the heroine. Good novels like this are really hard to find. The only drawback is that there are too few of them to read. 😑

This should not be fixed CP or no CP.

Is there a male protagonist? The author is great

Nice! But there are so few of them, please update!

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