I! the Immortal Who Returned from Xianwu!
by Dream Catcher Little Wanderer
About This Novel
There is a stone palace in Yuxiao. There are nine double doors in the hall. Each major realm corresponds to a world. The time flow rate in different worlds is one percent of each other. When sub-worlds with different painting styles are opened one by one! The Dark Republic of China, the treacherous martial arts world, the end of the blood moon, the esoteric continent, the kingdom of demons, the eternal night wilderness... In the main world, I am cautious. In the sub-world, I push all the way. He thrives by transporting resources from all walks of life. With infinite lifespan and a hundred times time difference, they can just go into the world and develop for hundreds of years if they disagree. Unknowingly, I have become the only living fossil in the world of cultivating immortals. No matter how the immortal dynasties change and the worlds rise and fall, I remain firm and everlasting! ... (Keywords: Two Realms, Immortality, Infinite Flow!) (The author has nearly 3 million words and has a high-end book of 17,000+ orders, "This Weird Three Kingdoms Game is Too Cruel"!)
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Official(10)Scraped 11d ago
6
I have been reading it, and I gave it 4 stars yesterday. I wrote a book review and said, "I am still writing about Level 2 Qi Qi, but it has a fast-paced label. I personally feel that the plot is not tight enough, there is no big conflict, and I feel less and less hopeful after reading it." Then I deleted it directly? ? Just five stars, right?
The protagonist is a joke. He actually wants to compete with the dynasty and the empire on which the sun never sets with his own efforts.
Why aren't you there? Xianyu's account has been updated. If I hadn't found it, I wouldn't have bothered to look for it.
I will take you 80% first and then talk to you about Japan being the public enemy of China
It's more than seventy chapters or is it still the second level of Qi training?
Judge for yourself, the Qing Dynasty princess is the heroine. He constantly sends resources to the protagonist and kneels down to lick the protagonist.
It's just so so. I saw that in the world view of the Republic of China, a child was kidnapped by bandits and threatened the protagonist to pay 500,000. The protagonist actually wanted to kill someone himself. What did the subordinates he formed do? They only have one level of Qi training. They are not afraid of being shot. If the subordinates die, they can be recruited. Isn't it enough to give them more money to settle down? .
Using resources from other worlds to feed yourself back is too little.
The pace is too slow and boring to watch
To be honest, the first 20 chapters are so boring that there is no desire to continue reading. You will know after reading it for yourself. At the beginning, the protagonist is set as a helpless mortal absentee from work, and then a lot of explanations are given in a long and verbose manner. It is dizzying. After reading 20 chapters, you are still foreshadowing the plot. You have to know You are not a platinum author, and there are not so many die-hard fans who can calm down and watch you slowly lay the groundwork. We are in a fast-paced era. If you can make the readers happy and comfortable in the first 10 chapters, your grades will naturally be good. Why don't you just change the start of absenteeism to the start of casual cultivation with some cultivation? There is so much pressure in society now, and no readers will sit down and watch your step-by-step growth from a helpless mortal, especially since you can't write anything interesting before, and the description of your sub-world is too long-winded, without any interesting points or highlights. Every time you write about the sub-world, I want to jump to read it, because it is really not attractive at all, and it's a pity that the subject matter is too good. I can only give two stars for the plot. I like the subject matter, so I'll add one star. That's it.
Fine! Very good hahahaha,
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Official(10)Scraped 11d ago
6
I have been reading it, and I gave it 4 stars yesterday. I wrote a book review and said, "I am still writing about Level 2 Qi Qi, but it has a fast-paced label. I personally feel that the plot is not tight enough, there is no big conflict, and I feel less and less hopeful after reading it." Then I deleted it directly? ? Just five stars, right?
The protagonist is a joke. He actually wants to compete with the dynasty and the empire on which the sun never sets with his own efforts.
Why aren't you there? Xianyu's account has been updated. If I hadn't found it, I wouldn't have bothered to look for it.
I will take you 80% first and then talk to you about Japan being the public enemy of China
It's more than seventy chapters or is it still the second level of Qi training?
Judge for yourself, the Qing Dynasty princess is the heroine. He constantly sends resources to the protagonist and kneels down to lick the protagonist.
It's just so so. I saw that in the world view of the Republic of China, a child was kidnapped by bandits and threatened the protagonist to pay 500,000. The protagonist actually wanted to kill someone himself. What did the subordinates he formed do? They only have one level of Qi training. They are not afraid of being shot. If the subordinates die, they can be recruited. Isn't it enough to give them more money to settle down? .
Using resources from other worlds to feed yourself back is too little.
The pace is too slow and boring to watch
To be honest, the first 20 chapters are so boring that there is no desire to continue reading. You will know after reading it for yourself. At the beginning, the protagonist is set as a helpless mortal absentee from work, and then a lot of explanations are given in a long and verbose manner. It is dizzying. After reading 20 chapters, you are still foreshadowing the plot. You have to know You are not a platinum author, and there are not so many die-hard fans who can calm down and watch you slowly lay the groundwork. We are in a fast-paced era. If you can make the readers happy and comfortable in the first 10 chapters, your grades will naturally be good. Why don't you just change the start of absenteeism to the start of casual cultivation with some cultivation? There is so much pressure in society now, and no readers will sit down and watch your step-by-step growth from a helpless mortal, especially since you can't write anything interesting before, and the description of your sub-world is too long-winded, without any interesting points or highlights. Every time you write about the sub-world, I want to jump to read it, because it is really not attractive at all, and it's a pity that the subject matter is too good. I can only give two stars for the plot. I like the subject matter, so I'll add one star. That's it.
Fine! Very good hahahaha,
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