Fairyland Version of Wechat

I hope there won't be such people anymore. I admit that my writing is not good. I am not a great person after all. You can express your opinions, but if you scold others, especially those who mention family members and elders, I will scold you even more harshly than you. We all have the qualities, so don't lose hope.

Author: There are inherent problems with your book. I just commented on a trivial article and you deleted my comment? You can write it but you can't let people comment on it? Yin soldiers can come to the mortal world, and immortals can descend to the mortal world. Will they not be able to eat anything from the mortal world?

Today is the third day to check in, and I am still in first place *罒▽罒*

Some chapters of this book have problems and have been blocked. They have been submitted for revision and are under review.

After reading chapter 30, I always feel that there are a few chapters missing, some things have no beginning or end. It feels messy. Just like the first time I sold a ring, there was a beginning, no process, and no end. Then it was on to the next thing. There was no beginning, no process, only an end. It feels super messy. Don't say that the author didn't notice it. I think many readers have also seen this kind of thing. I have just read more than thirty chapters and there are three or four things that either have no beginning or no end. I'm not a troll, I'll tell you the truth. If you don't believe it, you can go and see it for yourself. This new book is very messy!

You can take a look. Updates are too slow. Urgent for updates. Urgent for updates.

In the first part, I wrote about the city, but in the later part, I wrote about my cat's transformation into a dragon, recommending some bullshit book. Hehe

I didn't want to say it. You always say that someone scolds you, but you have to wake up yourself. You write a book and we spend money to read it. At the very least, you have to let us understand it. The writing is inconsistent. For example, the previous part is still practicing in my hometown, and then I go back to the city to go on a date. The preface and the follow-up do not match.

The author builds a group and builds a group. For better reminder.

From the first chapter of this book, it is obvious that he is a newcomer, with typos, unclear words and magical modifications of myths and legends (here is a suggestion, before writing this kind of novel, you can read #liaozhaizhiyi# and #山海经#); let's talk about the author: 1. The number of words in the first chapter is already 20+ and the basic errors in the first chapter have not been improved. 2. Some book friends in the book circle also commented that the review was deleted after just a simple "little white article", which shows that the author's attitude towards this book and its readers is not very good. But since it's free content, don't say anything too unpleasant. Recommendation: This book can barely pass the time during the book shortage. I hope there will be significant changes after charging for this book.