I Have a Pawn Shop

I have a bank and I come from the forbidden land. Plagiarize from these two books and then soften them together? It started out well, but slowly it turned into me owning a bank, and then it turned into me coming from a forbidden place.

The first 5 chapters are okay, but what the hell is going on in the rest? I originally thought that the plot would slowly unfold like a process from a small shop to a big one, and you would directly have a battle between fairies and demons! Then what do you write about next, the war between the gods? Space war? Star Wars? Does this have anything to do with the pawn shop? You haven't even straightened out the structure of this book. What kind of book are you writing?

Do you want to read a book where you can see the ending at a glance, or a book where the author makes it clear from the beginning? The plot needs to be done step by step, right? Is it driven by the characters little by little? I can't just start by saying what a certain character has done, what he will do in the future, whether he dies in the end, and how he died, without filling in the middle at all, right? How is this different from a running account? Take a character in my book as an example. I named him "Renzu" and he was dead as soon as he appeared. But some people said why he was the only one to die. I didn't explain clearly and abandoned the book. Don't you read the book for foreshadowing? This character will drive a plot later on, which I started writing on November 19th. I ask some book friends not to be too impatient when reading books. Enjoyable articles cannot be purely enjoyable. Do you have to fight all day long? There should always be plot advancement. I can say that every character in the book may have a plot. A cool article that you can't see through at a glance is cool, right?

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It starts with a saint and a princess, and then it looks good. Is it good? I only read Chapter 9, so I won't comment too much.

Because the author is usually lazy in the morning, or can't get out of bed, or has no thoughts, so the updates are usually between 4pm and 9pm. Of course, sometimes I get nervous in the morning and if I can get up early, I may update it too. Click [http://img02. Sogoucdn. Com/app/a/200678/9ad47f7eedaadb8c753646561a661144. Jpg] to view the expressions

The first few chapters seem to be quite satisfactory, not outstanding but still watchable. The elements are nothing more than pretentiousness, a group of female lickers, and the standard poison points. But the pawn rules are so ridiculous. A prince can use someone else's (his father's) luck to exchange for something for himself, but it doesn't matter. So it would be better to exchange the protagonist's life for his own invincibility. Instead of calling it a pawn shop, let's call it Mickey Mouse's Wonderful House. It's a good idea to use other people's things to make your opponent have no way out. There is also the Tianxing Sword Sect, which collects debts, takes them as servants, and gives others a new holy land. I have to say that the protagonist is really a kind person... As for whether these are foreshadowings by the author, I will find out after my death.

Although Lu Feng cannot practice, he can still live a long life, because once the pawn shop successfully negotiates, Lu Feng will gain an extra year of life. This is not a bad thing, so Lu Feng was unexpectedly blessed. He is so lucky.

It's just too little, not enough to watch.

For example, it is unreasonable for a prince to pawn the emperor's luck, because the emperor is the representative of the entire dynasty's luck and the emperor himself. If the prince wants to sell his luck, unless the emperor signs and agrees, it is unreasonable. Individuals can only sell what they can control. This is reasonable. Things that are not one's own should not be sold. For example, if the property at home belongs to the father, the son cannot sell it if he wants to.