Shock! after Rebirth, She Dominated the World of Immortality

The levels of cultivating immortals should be divided into Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, transformed gods, Mahayana, and then the upper realm. In the book, the golden elixir jumps to transformed gods. I feel that the level is too low. Without Yuanying, I feel that transformed gods are not that powerful. There are too many transformed gods. It would be better if there were more Yuanyings. It would be better to replace some characters with Yuanying. Otherwise, it would really seem that transformed gods are on the street, and it does not reflect how powerful transformed gods are. There are quite a few typos in the book, and some words are inappropriate. I feel that the description of the emotional lines of the characters is also rough. It's just that it feels very normal, but everyone seems to suddenly like the heroine. It's like the heroine is set up to be like this. I feel that the character is a bit broken. The villain looks like a retard, the heroine is wooden, and the upright character is like the heroine's admirer. Obviously the characters are very vivid at the beginning, but they become less and less soulful towards the end. I still hope the author can improve it.

☆ Although I haven't finished reading it, I saw that [Jin Baoer] and [Long Lixing] who were killed in the fairy world and trapped in the beads for countless years knew each other! Because her rebirth is the time he can only use once in his life to look back! Although the law of heaven has not always targeted (Su Xianzhi)! But he wanted to kill her when she ascended! If it weren't for her unwillingness to admit defeat, chasing after Lei and beating him violently, she might have been severely beaten. The ascension was successful, and all the dragons were brought back to the upper realm. Then there was a battle with the demons, or a battle between demons and immortals in the past! Obviously revealing some things in the past and how Longzu was tricked by the immortals. And this one (Lou Ruyun)! Someone actually told him his fortune and he had a disciple. It seemed like he was in some kind of calamity and he needed this disciple to stop him, right? As a result, he and the scumbag killed his apprentice together in his previous life. If he wanted to gain nothing in this life, he would accept that scumbag. It turned out that this scumbag was deliberately put into the lower world by her parents in the upper world. Whose luck should she have taken away from her?

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The overall feeling is okay, the heroine is a bit like a sharp-tongued person, but sometimes she feels a bit too cold-blooded. There are almost no scenes of the senior brothers and masters in the back, which makes the heroine a bit ruthless, but it feels a bit abrupt when she goes off the line (in the middle and back I I don't know if it exists anymore, because I couldn't stand the second part, so I skipped to read it). It can be said to be a novel about the heroine's self-growth. The overall story is about the heroine's own growth. She will meet people who help her at every stage, so each supporting character has a very small role.

Isn't Jin Bao a female? How can I describe her as a teenager?

The heroine is weak. People keep changing people by the neck to kill her. I don't know if the heroine knows that she has the halo of being a heroine. She fights to die without having to clean up her tail. Although she is arrogant, no matter how many times the enemy tells her to die, she will be saved in the end. She can only be helpless and furious with the master in the previous life. The masters and brothers in this life enjoy their dedication to them, and then they keep thinking about the misery of their previous life.

It's really to my liking. I really like this kind of thing. But I think the middle and back parts are a bit unbearable and a bit boring. I still prefer the heroine to play the role of cultivating immortality.

The thing that appeals to me the most is that I haven't seen enough of it. Maybe the author will make a sequel.

No, I really hate Li Qingjiu a little bit

The early stage is very good, but the later part is a mess. I don't think modern times should be included. The connection is also messy. If you want to become an immortal, you will become an immortal.