
About This Novel
A person travels to a prehistoric primitive tribe, what should he do? Fengyun's answer is: live, live well, use your knowledge to live better, and train the primitive people by the way. If possible, go out for a walk, take a look, and explore.
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Official(65)Scraped 11d ago
This is a typical copycat version (Original War Chronicles) that doesn't have the sharpness of other people's writing! I still like to watch (Original War Chronicles), which is a hundred times better than this!
It hurts to look at it
Him, them, why are there so many of them, it hurts to see them
Seriously
I have read a lot of novels about primitive tribes, and your book really made me feel that it was neither fish nor fowl after reading a few chapters for the first time. You said it's okay for you to be in the era of primitive tribes, it's okay for you to wipe your butt when making paper, and it's okay for you to be a foodie. You just want to add a transcendent system of totems, so since you have transcendence, it's not too much to write about people's living standards at a higher level. In this way, your paper making will not be so poisonous, and it will be easier to write about foodies. Isn't it delicious? I feel like you might as well not write about this aspect at all, since you are considered a weirdo anyway. It was the first time I saw someone traveling through the ordinary world. I went to a transcendent world that I could touch at close range. Instead of practicing, I just thought about making paper and being a foodie. The mainstream of primitive tribes is power, the power of weapons, extraordinary power, the power of numbers, and the power of various geographical advantages, such as salt and mines. In an era where the rule of law does not even exist, strength is the guarantee of survival.
The original flavor of the original flow is too little, and there is always a flavor and element of modern society. It is not very exciting or enjoyable to watch, and you cannot feel the feeling.
This is a low-end version of the original war record!
Ordinary
This book is too light, comfortable, without the kind of passionate struggle, in short, just so-so.
Tired
Putting aside the storyline, when looking at the dialogue between the characters, it feels like the author has not spoken at all, and some words seem to have been added in just to make up the word count.
Is this a pirated version of the original war record?
Finally, an author has noticed the importance of paper! Don't other authors know the pain of not having paper after time travel? Finally someone understands. A moment of silence for those protagonists whose chrysanthemums cannot be saved.
Primitive people are so polite! This is a BUG! Why is he always called Brother Yun, Brother Yun? This is also a flaw. This is primitive times, not modern times.
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Official(65)Scraped 11d ago
This is a typical copycat version (Original War Chronicles) that doesn't have the sharpness of other people's writing! I still like to watch (Original War Chronicles), which is a hundred times better than this!
It hurts to look at it
Him, them, why are there so many of them, it hurts to see them
Seriously
I have read a lot of novels about primitive tribes, and your book really made me feel that it was neither fish nor fowl after reading a few chapters for the first time. You said it's okay for you to be in the era of primitive tribes, it's okay for you to wipe your butt when making paper, and it's okay for you to be a foodie. You just want to add a transcendent system of totems, so since you have transcendence, it's not too much to write about people's living standards at a higher level. In this way, your paper making will not be so poisonous, and it will be easier to write about foodies. Isn't it delicious? I feel like you might as well not write about this aspect at all, since you are considered a weirdo anyway. It was the first time I saw someone traveling through the ordinary world. I went to a transcendent world that I could touch at close range. Instead of practicing, I just thought about making paper and being a foodie. The mainstream of primitive tribes is power, the power of weapons, extraordinary power, the power of numbers, and the power of various geographical advantages, such as salt and mines. In an era where the rule of law does not even exist, strength is the guarantee of survival.
The original flavor of the original flow is too little, and there is always a flavor and element of modern society. It is not very exciting or enjoyable to watch, and you cannot feel the feeling.
This is a low-end version of the original war record!
Ordinary
This book is too light, comfortable, without the kind of passionate struggle, in short, just so-so.
Tired
Putting aside the storyline, when looking at the dialogue between the characters, it feels like the author has not spoken at all, and some words seem to have been added in just to make up the word count.
Is this a pirated version of the original war record?
Finally, an author has noticed the importance of paper! Don't other authors know the pain of not having paper after time travel? Finally someone understands. A moment of silence for those protagonists whose chrysanthemums cannot be saved.
Primitive people are so polite! This is a BUG! Why is he always called Brother Yun, Brother Yun? This is also a flaw. This is primitive times, not modern times.
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Let's not talk about how well it is written. Just the number of words alone is enough to push it up. This is the longest original text I have ever seen. It can be read in one go.




Personal rating:[★★★-] Reason for rating: Readable. For a fantasy novel, the plot is okay and the writing is okay. After reading the first few hundred chapters, I feel that it is worth continuing to collect and nourish~



Cheers to the author for his writing spirit! Although it's not very interesting, and it has more than a thousand chapters before it's finished... I've included it here to despise eunuchs.




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