I Asked You to Make Tang Dao. What the Hell is This Laser Sword?
About This Novel
Jiang Chen, as a little unlucky guy who was disliked by the squad leader because of his obedience, was sent to the Leng Weapons Factory. But accidentally obtained a weapon system! Just sign in to get rewards. Factory Director: Go get a knife first and try it out. The sharper the better! Two days later... Looking at Jiang Chen who slashed the tank with a knife and looked harmless, the factory director was confused... Jiang Chen: What about the factory director? Is this sharp enough? However, a saber is just the beginning. A crossbow with a range far beyond that of a sniper rifle, and an explosion-proof shield that can withstand grenades... With Jiang Chen's continuous investment, warships, submarines, and aircraft. The entire military industry system has ushered in a comprehensive reform!
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Official(55)Scraped 7d ago
good
Okay, very good, it's so well written. Don't write something like this in the future. Who is playing with whom?
Can this quality be recommended? There is no common sense at all in writing any Gou Ba stuff.
A supersonic submarine without any basic common sense? Do you know what it means to drive at this speed underwater? Just put this aside as soon as you hit your head? If you really drive at this speed, there will be no concealment at all. Even if your materials can withstand the pressure, the other party will be able to detect you with a sonar and send you away with a bomb. It's really abstract. And what kind of crossbow can shoot three thousand meters? . . Brother, do you really have any idea about this? I won't talk about how the mechanical crossbow is loaded at a distance of three thousand meters. It will definitely make a huge sonic boom when it is fired. Moreover, if the crossbow is disturbed by the airflow in mid-air, it will be impossible to hit where you point. At first glance, it means that you didn't learn physics well in high school, and it means nothing.
Writing a novel about the military, you even give a woman as a gift at the beginning. How miserable do you think the people in the military are?
Garbage garbage garbage garbage garbage garbage
Well! There are many typos and the sentences are not fluent! Gone
It's a lot of nonsense, very poor, too watery. Supersonic submarines have not been developed yet!
The author's writing style can be explained in one sentence, that is, the old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long.
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Community(0)
Official(55)Scraped 7d ago
good
Okay, very good, it's so well written. Don't write something like this in the future. Who is playing with whom?
Can this quality be recommended? There is no common sense at all in writing any Gou Ba stuff.
A supersonic submarine without any basic common sense? Do you know what it means to drive at this speed underwater? Just put this aside as soon as you hit your head? If you really drive at this speed, there will be no concealment at all. Even if your materials can withstand the pressure, the other party will be able to detect you with a sonar and send you away with a bomb. It's really abstract. And what kind of crossbow can shoot three thousand meters? . . Brother, do you really have any idea about this? I won't talk about how the mechanical crossbow is loaded at a distance of three thousand meters. It will definitely make a huge sonic boom when it is fired. Moreover, if the crossbow is disturbed by the airflow in mid-air, it will be impossible to hit where you point. At first glance, it means that you didn't learn physics well in high school, and it means nothing.
Writing a novel about the military, you even give a woman as a gift at the beginning. How miserable do you think the people in the military are?
Garbage garbage garbage garbage garbage garbage
Well! There are many typos and the sentences are not fluent! Gone
It's a lot of nonsense, very poor, too watery. Supersonic submarines have not been developed yet!
The author's writing style can be explained in one sentence, that is, the old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long.
Check in for the first day. Check in for the first day.
Check in for the first day. Check in for the first day.
Check in for the first day. Check in for the first day.
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