This Cover-up is Too Fake

Author, you are really good at playing, and you are also really brave. You actually want to fill in the pitfalls of the red-haired monster, but if you succeed, you will be really awesome. To support you, I will mention the pitfalls I know here (book friends can also mention them, after all, there is strength in numbers). There is no complete creator of the Nine Secrets, and the emperor-level figure Jiutian Zun is not complete. Huangdi, Yandi, Chi You, etc. The story of Qin (Emperor Qin, hundreds of schools of thought, Chu and Han, etc.) Covers the historical timeline of the sky, which is not clear (the first Heavenly Lord - the early days of the ancient times - the early days of ancient times - the later ancient times?), And many inheritances of emperors have not been released (Fuxi, Nuwa in the same humanities), the fight with the Emperor of Heaven for countless generations, the reincarnation path of the earth (Shengxu Youti), fairy gold, the war in the immortal realm, the whereabouts of the infinite heavenly kings,

There is too much nonsense and I have no desire to read it. The whole chapter is 2,000 words long. I wish I could write 1,000 words. Others cherish words like gold, so I am just blabbering here.

Thank you readers for the reminder. Xiaopujie will make a report here: This book is definitely the protagonist of Wang Kun or Wang Qian, and Ye Fan is undoubtedly the biggest background. According to my setting, the protagonist will definitely benchmark against Pang Bo based on his own situation analysis at the beginning, and then position himself as a military advisor to serve Ye Fan, and then win all the way. This ideal of life should be very reasonable and correct. Cultivation requires talent and opportunity. It does not mean that anyone who travels through time will definitely be able to rule the world. Just like a modern person who travels through the Three Kingdoms, they will basically not survive more than three chapters. Even if they join the big boss at the beginning, they will be imprisoned for the rest of their lives. However, the protagonist will later discover something different about himself. Events that happened around him are inconsistent with his memory. He gradually becomes suspicious, realizes that something is wrong, and then begins to pursue the truth behind it. The outline of this book is the protagonist's journey of discovery. Who is he? And what happened to the world? In the end, the truth was revealed in the finale, and it turned out that everything was so.

This male protagonist took all the roles of the original female protagonist and just had sex with Ye Fan.

I have read dozens of chapters since it was released, and it is really annoying. The content is also messy. Even if a single chapter is expensive, there are also some inexplicable things written. Whoever reads it will regret it.

This dialogue panel is so annoying to watch. The whole chapter is just talking, and I don't know who said it.

"Is this what you mean, or what Buddhism means?" Wang Kun asked very seriously. "Anything is fine." A nasturtium opposite answered calmly. "What do you think I should choose?" "As you wish." "How do you want me to choose?" "It's best to accept it." "Okay, I refuse. You can go down." The golden lotus swayed for a while, then turned back into the figure of the woman in white, and then the world of the sea of consciousness disappeared. On the battlefield, I felt that the forehead bone of the sentient being was no longer shining brightly. I put my hands together and bowed softly, chanting: "Amitabha, I'll see you again by fate." Wang Kun said nothing, watching her fly back to a group of great monks, shaking his head secretly. What kind of plane does Buddhism have? If a born Bodhisattva is actually willing to send it out, then how many talented people are there on the mountain? Just now, he originally intended to fulfill Jue Youqing, which might bring some interesting splashes to Buddhism, but what he never expected was that Jue Youqing actually wanted to rely on him. Strictly speaking, this battle was not a fight at all. It was Wang Kun who was always giving favors, feeling that there was affection for the cause, one was willing to teach, and the other was willing to learn. This is naturally in line with Wang Kun's wishes. Making friends with Buddhist descendants will make it easier to contact Buddhism in the future. However, Buddhism doesn't seem to think so, and Jueyouqing seems to have some plans, and even goes the extra mile to form a deep bond with him. Jue Youqing revealed her original reality, and a golden lotus approached Wang Kun's spiritual world with the intention of taking root. Wang Kun was perhaps shocked, and for a moment he didn't understand. The great Western Bodhisattva, regardless of his qualifications or status, was very promising. How could he be willing to become his follower? If you tie yourself without a rope, you will count the sand when you enter the sea. Who would believe it if you don't have a plan? The water in Buddhism was really too deep, so he decisively chose to stay away. He could not go to Mount Sumeru until he was strong enough to protect himself. "If we lose, even the descendants of Buddhism will be defeated. This guy is really perverted. Who can cure him?" "Even if you are born with a Buddha's heart, you can't do anything to him. There is no doubt that he is a great emperor. He is worthy of being elected by the ancient forbidden land!" "What did Beidi say? Is there any news?" The onlookers were excited. In the two battles, the contestants were all the best of today's young generation. They all had their own strengths, but they were won by Wang Kun effortlessly. His fighting power was simply incalculable, like an invincible god. The hearts of many monks were extremely heavy, and they felt out of breath. They no longer wanted him to look good at the beginning. At this moment, they only hoped that in the subsequent battle, as long as someone could force Wang Kun to use his full strength, everyone felt that they could breathe a sigh of relief. As for defeating Wang Kun, don't make trouble, who can beat this for sure? As a result, everyone was eagerly awaiting the news from the Wang family in Beiyuan. Everyone still had great confidence in Beidi. They believed that as long as he takes action, he can suppress it with one hand. "Get out of the way, what kind of extraterrestrial visitor, the emperor of the restricted area, let me come and see what he is." An arrogant but actually very childish voice shouted. Everyone looked around and saw that it was a group of people from the Beiyuan Wang family. Their eyes lit up, but they soon frowned again because they didn't see Beidi, and the person leading the group was a child instead. He was too young, not even three years old, with white and tender little arms and short legs. Even though his blood was as strong as the sea and his eyes were bright, he still made everyone feel weird when he flew in front of the adults of the Wang family and spoke fluently. "Who is this little guy? He is so arrogant, isn't he?" "Hush... His name is Wang Chong. He is the younger brother of Beidi, and he is also a man of great opportunity. He fell into the dragon cave not long ago, swallowed the dragon's blood, and a large amount of divine marrow, and received great benefits." "The physical body is comparable to the indestructible body of vajra. It can live for at least five thousand years, Amitabha!" "Isn't that another Beidi? It's so outrageous!!!" "It's incredible, it's incredible, it looks like the Beiyuan Wang family is going to dominate the universe!" The entire audience gasped, speechless as they were shocked by the extraordinary romance between the two brothers Wang Teng and Wang Chong. This is too much, too unfair. Why did such a huge immortal burial fall on their heads, and why others are not allowed to live? Are they really the illegitimate children of God? "Hmph, my brother doesn't have time to play with you. He is practicing peerless heavenly skills in seclusion. Leave all the holy bodies and mutated divine bodies to me." Wang Chong put his hands behind his back and kept a straight face, trying to act like an adult. He walked forward arrogantly and said arrogant words. It was obviously funny to be so arrogant and childish, but everyone's eyes flickered and they didn't say anything. The already pale faces of many saint-child figures were even more bloodless at this moment, and their gray and defeated looks were unbearable to look at, as if there was no greater sorrow than death. Whether it was the Holy Body that had risen again, Wang Kun who was rising rapidly, or Wang Teng who was known as the reincarnation of the ancient emperor, they all made everyone look up to the sky and sigh, feeling disheartened. Just the little kid in front of them, with such energy and blood, and such luck, made them feel suffocated and their whole bodies felt cold. It has to be said that it is a kind of sadness to live in the same era with such a group of characters. Even though they are all the inheritors of the Immortal Holy Land, they all feel that there is no light in front of them and no hope for the future. "Less than three years old, fifth level of Taoist palace, how do you practice this?" Ye Fan rubbed his chin, his eyes were straight, and he was dumbfounded. Where did this monster come from? It was too scary! Can you please tell me some basic rules? At this age, aren't people still playing in the mud? How can they be exposed to the rules of heaven and earth? What a joke! "He has never practiced at all." Ji Biyue couldn't get her mood up, so she let go of her hand, sighed, and said: "His cultivation is all accumulated by drinking dragon's blood and divine marrow. If it weren't for the sake of the future and laying a solid foundation, I wouldn't dare to imagine how high his cultivation would be now." Ye Fan's jaw dropped in shock, and the corners of his mouth twitched. Damn, it's so unreasonable... Okay, he was speechless.

It doesn't look good, and it feels boring. Hun Zhe Tian needs to be cool, but there's nothing wrong with this thing.

The whole novel is okay, and the protagonist's IQ is online. The biggest shortcoming is that the writing is a bit messy, and some boring stuff pops up as I write. The overall look is a bit irritating, and I don't have the time to read it calmly, especially the first and second chapters.

I feel like the main character is like an idiot.