Mortal: I Kill Souls with One Sword and Cultivate Three Thousand Avenues

Chapters are occasionally missing, articles are often missing words, and occasionally redundant words and incorrect sentences appear. Surprise/shock and other related synonyms are too often used, And sometimes the location is really not suitable to express surprise. And whether it is the male protagonist or others, they often look surprised or shocked, which is really weird to read. The author's writing skills seem to be insufficient (?) Weird pretense and slap-in-the-face routines have been recurring recently. The plot was originally okay, However, the plot of more than 500 chapters since the male protagonist left the Confucian Academy of Tianshui Kingdom often lacks narrative and reasonable logic. The male protagonist came to Tianjian Sect to promise the Gu cultivator ancestor to help Elder Fu Qinglin of Tianjian Sect solve the problem of sword Gu in his body. The male protagonist obviously became the master of the Confucian Immortal Pavilion + and as the Confucian Dean Si Taibai rang all the bells in the Confucian Academy. Almost the entire Tianshui Kingdom could hear the bells, so he became famous in the Tianshui Kingdom. The ancestors of various sects (Tianjian Sect, Yao Ling Sect...)/Family (Gu family)/Tianshui Kingdom royal family all rushed to invite the male protagonist to visit their homes, and the male protagonist all agreed. But when the male protagonist went to Tianjian Sect, he only said that he was from Yunjian Sect of Eastern Saint Kingdom (???), Therefore, the Heavenly Sword Sect, who is the sect of the Yunjian Sect, Discrimination as country bumpkins are not qualified to enter Tianjian Sect... At the same time, the visitor from the Demon Spirit Sect was warmly welcomed into the Heavenly Sword Sect. The male protagonist left angrily and planned to join the Demon Spirit Sect and use the Demon Spirit Sect identity to enter the Heavenly Sword Sect... In fact, there is no need. If the male protagonist just shows his identity as Si Taibai, the master of Confucian Immortal Pavilion/Dean of Confucianism, wouldn't he be welcomed into Tianjian Sect immediately? ! It's really unreasonable that the male protagonist obviously has a very useful identity but doesn't make good use of it. The reason why the male protagonist entered the Demon Spirit Sect should be to learn all kinds of knowledge about orthodox demon cultivators, rather than for the strange reason of borrowing the identity of the Demon Spirit Sect to enter the Tianjian Sect, which is also unreasonable. The male protagonist showed his talent as a demon cultivator and passed the examination of the Demon Spirit Sect disciples. He was competed by seven peaks, and was finally forced to accept a disciple by the elder of the eighth peak, the Demonic Pill Peak. The demon alchemy peak did not test the male protagonist's talent for alchemy... From the beginning to the end, the male protagonist never stated that he had already known how to refine alchemy... Then the male protagonist showed that alchemy is just fun for the male protagonist, very simple. Is there any person who doesn't know how to make elixirs and can make elixirs for the first time, and the elixir success rate is extremely high? He even became the sixth elder of the Demon Pill Peak because of the task of making the demon ascending elixir. The plot is really unreasonable. Are these plot designs just to show off and slap others in the face? ! Why on earth does the male protagonist have to hide that he can make alchemy, and at the same time still hide his identity as Si Taibai, the dean of Confucianism? Obviously, a lot of people in the Confucian Academy have seen the true face of the male protagonist Lushan, and because of the feat of ringing the bell and becoming the master of the Confucian Immortal Pavilion, many people know Chang Si Taibai. The male protagonist always hides his identity in Tianshui... Wouldn't it be possible to pass through various places smoothly by showing one's identity? However, the plot lacks description of the inner activities of the protagonist. Why on earth should the identity of Confucian Dean Si Taibai/Master of the Confucian Immortal Pavilion be hidden? ! ? ! ? ! Many plot events are triggered, and the inner activities of the male protagonist are missing, making the entire plot written to promote a certain plot, which is really strange to read. The male protagonist agrees to three things done by Gu Xiu Ancestor. Below are excerpts from the article: ✅➡️"Item 1" ➡️Draw an immortal power at the Ancient Immortal Dojo of Tianshui Kingdom (the place where the Confucian Academy holds the Literary Forum is here). "There is an ancient immortal dojo in Tianshui. Although this dojo is dilapidated, it still contains some immortal power!" "If possible, I hope you can use the power of Phoenix Immortal Gu to help me draw out a ray of immortal power." ✅➡️"Item 2" ➡️Help Elder Fu Qinglin of Tianshui Kingdom's Tianjian Sect resolve the sword poison in his body. While the Gu Cultivator Patriarch (Lin Qian) was speaking, he raised his hand and saw a token floating in his hand. He handed it to Jiang Xiaobai and said, "Take this token and go to Tianshui Kingdom's Tianjian Sect to find Elder Fu Qinglin!" "This person has helped me once before, and I promised him that if my Gu can be cocooned again, I will help him solve the sword Gu problem in Tianjian Sect!" "But unfortunately, for so many years, I have not been able to make my natal Gu cocoon again, but your Phoenix Immortal Gu is different. Its breath is enough to suppress the sword Gu!" "Tianjian Sect..." Jiang Xiaobai's eyes flashed with strange color. He remembered that the superior sect of Yunjian Sect was Tianjian Sect. What a coincidence. However, there is not much pressure on these two things. ✅➡️"Item 3" ➡️When the male protagonist is strong enough, kill Feng Lizhou, the elder of the Shenfeng Clan in the Zhongzhou Immortal Domain (the real culprit who caused the Gu Xiu Ancestor's family to be destroyed). As Gu Xiu Ancestor (Lin Qian) spoke, his voice paused and his eyes became cold: "I want... To ask you to help me kill someone!" "Senior, are you talking about people from the Shenfeng clan?" Jiang Xiaobai raised his eyebrows and quickly thought of Lin Qian's purpose. The Shenfeng Clan in the Immortal Realm caused the death of the Gu Cultivator Ancestor's family in front of him, and they must hate this Shenfeng Clan extremely. "That's right!" Lin Qian said with hatred in his eyes: "This man's name is Feng Lizhou, and he is an elder of the Shenfeng Clan in Zhongzhou Immortal Domain. This man is also the chief culprit of my family's destruction! He must die!" As he spoke, Qian Qian said with a sneer on his face: "Moreover, I ask you to use the purest power of the Phoenix to kill him... Haha, that scene must be exciting!" When he said this, you could see that Lin Qian's hands were clenched, and his face was full of expectation. That's right, what the Divine Phoenix Clan is most proud of is their Phoenix bloodline. But if an outsider also has this bloodline, and it is purer than the Shenfeng clan, it will be extremely exciting. For the Shenfeng Clan, that would be a huge blow. Jiang Xiaobai now understood why Lin Qian said that it was a bit far away and even stressful for him. That's right, Lin Qian Yuanying's level of cultivation was out of reach in his opinion. Not to mention Lin Qian's enemy. Needless to say, his cultivation level must be higher. And if he wanted to kill this person, it would be even more difficult than going to heaven. "Don't worry, you are not his opponent yet, but that doesn't mean you won't be in the future!"

The work is good, but there are too few updates. I hope it can be improved.

After Chapter 512, the plot direction is really strange😜. Many plots feel like they lack some explanation before and after, which makes people feel inexplicable😓. And it feels like the male protagonist has been forcibly reduced to intelligence? 😌 Because the male protagonist promised Elder Gu that he needs to enter Tianjian Sect to do things, he will need to enter Tianjian Sect sooner or later. But before, in the Yunjian Sect, I used my identity as Taibai to reject the invitation from the Tianjian Sect... Directly cut off your chance of entering Tianjian Sect? ! 😌😌😌 Now the male protagonist is ridiculed because he only showed his Dongsheng country identity in the Tianjian Sect. He is a bumpkin from a small country and is not allowed to enter😫. At the same time, the Tianjian Sect warmly welcomed the visitors from the Demon Spirit Sect (double standard). The male protagonist felt very angry because of this😎, Then the male protagonist wanted to join the Demon Spirit Sect for no reason. Enter the Tianjian Sect with the identity of Demon Spirit Sect? ? ? ? ? ? 😌 Clearly showing the identity of Confucian Dean Si Taibai/Confucian Immortal Pavilion Master will solve the problem... The normal plot trend should be that the male protagonist originally had the goal of learning the Demon Spirit Sect's authentic demon cultivation techniques (including the Demon Spirit Sect's special alchemy techniques). It is used to solve the problem that Yunjian Sect's demon cultivator has too little knowledge reserve, and has the male protagonist forgotten that he is an elder of Yunjian Sect? (The elders of the Soul Feeding Land do not have a male protagonist to guide the disciples of the Soul Feeding Land to learn demon cultivation. There is no one else in the Yunjian Sect who can teach, and the male protagonist does not guide anyone at all) That's why I had to join the Demon Spirit Sect. But it seems that the male protagonist was angry and joined the Demon Spirit Sect just because of the discrimination from the Tianjian Sect...😐 You can easily enter Tianjian Sect/Demon Spirit Sect by showing your identity as Confucian Dean Si Taibai/Confucian Immortal Pavilion Master. Even the ancestors of the Heavenly Sword Sect/Demon Spirit Sect would personally come out to greet the male protagonist. After ringing the bell in the Confucian Academy for more than 500 chapters, The male protagonist also promised the ancestors of Tianjian Sect/Demon Spirit Sect/Dynasty/Aristocratic Family... To visit them when they are free. Did the author forget this plot? ? ? 😌 How long does it take for the male protagonist to join the Demon Spirit Sect and reach a status where he can be allowed to go out? Does the hero have so much time to waste? 😌 After the examination by the disciples of the Demon Spirit Sect, the male protagonist showed his talent as a demon cultivator and was competed by the Seven Peaks. As a result, he was snatched away by the eighth peak, the Demonic Pill Peak. (Demon Pill Peak) Those who can make elixirs are always more popular no matter where they are. The Seven Peaks are afraid of annoying the Demonic Pill Peak and making things difficult for them in the future, so they do not dare to compete with the Demonic Pill Peak for the male protagonist. Afterwards, the elder of Yaodan Peak asked the male protagonist if he had any questions. He obviously doesn't understand the Demon Spirit Sect and Demon Pill Peak at all, but the male protagonist doesn't ask anything and directly expresses that he has no doubts? ! 😌 Then the senior sister thought that the male protagonist had never made alchemy before, so she stupidly demonstrated the basics of alchemy to the male protagonist step by step, and comforted the male protagonist that it was normal for him to not learn well at first. The senior sister also took a long time to learn it, and hoped that the male protagonist would not be discouraged. Obviously the male protagonist can show that he is strong in alchemy, even beating the geniuses of the alchemy guild, and then demonstrates his alchemy skills. Showing that you only need to learn the difference from the general alchemy techniques (learn the demon spirit sect's exclusive alchemy techniques and knowledge) But the male protagonist did not take the initiative to show that he knew how to make alchemy. He had won first place in a competition held by the Alchemy Guild before = this is equivalent to pretending to be a novice or novice in alchemy. Then I watched my senior sister demonstrate the basics of alchemy like a fool, Then the male protagonist slapped the senior sister in the face with the attitude of "This is very simple, it's not difficult at all." Obviously the senior sister treats people sincerely and has no discrimination or other bad habits at all, but the male protagonist's attitude is really bad😎. Why is he pretending to be a slap in the face of the senior sister? Is it morally wrong for the male protagonist to resent his senior sister like this? 😙 Show off and slap in the face It should be for those who ridicule and question the strength of the male protagonist, right?

Selling dog meat as a sheep's head has nothing to do with mortals.

The work is great and has more depth than similar novels.

There are several mistakes in the names of characters in the article..

The character of the protagonist is really speechless. He doesn't show any anger when his senior brother is injured. He feels worried about everyone.

It looks okay, but I'm really speechless as to why his senior brother is always the one getting hurt🤐

The author who wrote this book feels like a novice and can't grasp the reader's pleasure. The male protagonist has a strange character. To be precise, the person who saved him should be a female elder. However, when he was targeted by others not long after entering the sect, he had such a strong sense of belonging to the sect. It is strange. I have not fully understood the setting of time travel. Time travel is the result of increasing IQ. What should I do if the masters casually promoted it, and people targeted it inexplicably. I can only say that the routine is too old-fashioned. It is difficult to write such old-fashioned things in 2025. The details are not very good. It is obvious that the words can be more refined and the writing can be more detailed. The subject matter is very good, but the details are really unpalatable. Such a good subject matter has been wasted. I can't feel happy when I want to write something exciting. I can't control it if I want to write about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.

Currently reading Chapter 500, I have a question The male protagonist is a Taoist disciple of the Yunjian Sect, and became an elder after being promoted to the Foundation Establishment Stage. The male protagonist's master was killed in the previous chapters and has been reincarnated through the secret method of Buddhism. How can the disciples who join the spirit feeding place because of the Taoist master of the male protagonist learn? The male protagonist currently has the highest position in the Land of Breeding Souls. The senior brother is still in the Zhou family and has not returned to the sect. Does this mean there is no one in the Land of Breeding Souls who can guide these disciples? After all, only the male protagonist and Senior Brother Zhou have learned the method of demon cultivation, and Senior Brother Zhou's demon cultivation skills are far inferior to those of the male protagonist. But the male protagonist is often not in the sect, nor does he handle the business of guiding disciples... I hope the author can make good arrangements and have someone guide these disciples. For example, the male protagonist later met the Demon Spirit Sect, an authentic demon cultivation sect in Tianshui, and kidnapped a few talents and returned to the Yunjian Sect, just in time to teach the disciples of the Spirit Feeding Land the orthodox demon cultivation method. Otherwise, I always feel that there are bugs in the plot.