Full Metal Body

Full Metal Body

by Try The Sword Tianya

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381Kwords153chapters
Latest:
Ch. 153刀锋战队
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About This Novel

"Evolution of the Metaverse" has been officially uploaded. It is version 2.0 Of "The Law of Big Data" and has fixed several bugs. Use science fiction to interpret the direction of cultivation and evolution, and achieve pure data life.

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丿glorious灁 Eternal55mo ago

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The paragraphs and symbols are very blue and thin, with too much rhetoric and water, like this paragraph "The strong man cut open Wolverine's chest and took out a red 'metal flame'." It was about the size of a fist, bright red, like a burning gem. " Obviously it can be changed to "The strong man cut open Wolverine's chest and took out a red metal flame, the size of a fist." There is no need for those messy writing methods. This is a novel, not a composition. Even if it is water, there must be a water method. Look at this paragraph: "She looks like she is in her mid-twenties, has a military uniform, short hair, and thick eyebrows. She is heroic, slim and beautiful, and has an indescribable coldness: keep away from strangers, and keep away ghosts and gods. Suddenly, the woman turned into a storm of "bright yellow" metal ice crystals. Metal ice crystal: like frost, silvery white like metal and translucent like crystal. " It can be changed to "She looks about 27 or 28 years old, has short hair in military uniform, has a heroic appearance, and has an indescribable coldness. Suddenly, the woman turned into a "bright yellow" metal storm. . " The author, take a look for yourself, the water is not at all good, but has metallic ice crystals. He also specifically explains that "metallic ice crystals are: like frost, with the silvery whiteness of metal and the translucence of crystals." Isn't this just colorful black? Either write about ice crystals or metals, but the outline is an all-metal world, so it must be metal

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Climbing the technology tree with a body of steel is quite novel and enjoyable~

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Regarding this matter, I will simply say a few words, as long as you understand it. In short, this matter is the situation now. Everyone can see the specifics and say a few words. Maybe you don't understand it clearly, but the meaning is that. If you don't know, you don't have to guess. I have seen this kind of thing a lot. I just want to say that everyone who understands understands. I won't explain it to those who don't understand. After all, it's good that you know it. Just take a closer look. Don't ask me what's wrong. The interests involved are too great. It won't be good for you or me to tell you. Just pretend you don't know. For the rest, I can only say that the water is very deep and a lot of things are involved. It's hard for you to find the detailed information yourself, and most of it has been deleted from the Internet, so I can only say that I understand everything. People who understand have basically made profits and landed ashore, etc. People who don't understand will never understand. The key is that people who understand understand it on their own. You don't know who understands and you can't ask for advice. Everyone hides it for fear that others will know that they are sensible. If you understand, you can harvest what you don't understand. You don't even know that you don't understand. It's just that sometimes, some people don't understand certain things and pretend to understand, thinking that others don't understand. In fact, I am the one who doesn't understand. Others understand enough. Not only do they understand, but they also understand beyond this scope. However, some people who don't understand are completely incomprehensible to the people who understand. Therefore, those who don't understand will never understand. They can only pretend to understand. Everything that others say they understand understands. Just nod. In fact, I understand what you understand. Who told us all to understand? There is no need to pretend to understand if you don't understand. After all, it involves many things that you cannot understand. There is no need to interview people who understand this kind of thing. People who don't understand see it and ask questions again and again. Finally, they tell him that he may not understand it. Even if he understands it, it will be bad for him in the future. After all, knowing too much is not a good thing. So it is best for everyone not to understand if you don't understand. It is not good to understand too much.

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