The Road to Taiyi
by Lost Crowd
About This Novel
This is Donghuang Taiyi who takes back the time traveler. What will happen if the time traveler's deformed knowledge and Donghuang Taiyi's almost invincible strength are combined together? What happened in the prehistoric times before the Lich? What is that battlefield? Did Pangu really fall? This is a golden age, with geniuses emerging in large numbers and strong men like clouds. Who is in charge of the ups and downs of the vast earth?
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This book has been updated to now, and it has 30,000 words. It is pretty well written. Does the invincible Donghuang Taiyi still need to upgrade his body? There's absolutely no need for that, okay! He is already invincible! There are still tens of thousands of words left, and the author has dug a lot of holes. What is the ultimate leap? Is it sanctification or detachment? Why is Taiyi injured? The following text directly ignores this and does not describe it much. It's understandable that the time traveler failed to seize Donghuang Taiyi's body. After all, the gap was too big. However, the article seemed to mention something similar to a system. Donghuang Taiyi was just sarcastic, and then ignored it, and did not mention it in the rest of the article. The impromptu court meeting, the plans of the heavens, what exactly did they plan? There seems to be a secret to the creation of the world by Pangu, and it seems that everyone knows about the gods and demons of chaos. Finally, what is on that battlefield?
My thoughts on this book.
Author, could you write in the first person? You wrote the entire article about what happened to Donghuang Taiyi. It feels like you are just a bystander. It did not arouse our interest in reading at all. Next, can you not describe so many scenery descriptions. For example, when Taiyi defeated Duke Dongwang and returned to the Sun Star to practice, you kept saying that his bones were so, so, so, so, so. 😋, What happened to his Sanhua😊. It really feels like an argumentative essay to us. No one likes to read so many descriptions of the process. . I hope you will refer to my opinion! 💝💝💝😍.
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Official(2)Scraped 7d ago
Tell me what you think about this book
This book has been updated to now, and it has 30,000 words. It is pretty well written. Does the invincible Donghuang Taiyi still need to upgrade his body? There's absolutely no need for that, okay! He is already invincible! There are still tens of thousands of words left, and the author has dug a lot of holes. What is the ultimate leap? Is it sanctification or detachment? Why is Taiyi injured? The following text directly ignores this and does not describe it much. It's understandable that the time traveler failed to seize Donghuang Taiyi's body. After all, the gap was too big. However, the article seemed to mention something similar to a system. Donghuang Taiyi was just sarcastic, and then ignored it, and did not mention it in the rest of the article. The impromptu court meeting, the plans of the heavens, what exactly did they plan? There seems to be a secret to the creation of the world by Pangu, and it seems that everyone knows about the gods and demons of chaos. Finally, what is on that battlefield?
My thoughts on this book.
Author, could you write in the first person? You wrote the entire article about what happened to Donghuang Taiyi. It feels like you are just a bystander. It did not arouse our interest in reading at all. Next, can you not describe so many scenery descriptions. For example, when Taiyi defeated Duke Dongwang and returned to the Sun Star to practice, you kept saying that his bones were so, so, so, so, so. 😋, What happened to his Sanhua😊. It really feels like an argumentative essay to us. No one likes to read so many descriptions of the process. . I hope you will refer to my opinion! 💝💝💝😍.
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