Mecha Journey
About This Novel
The portable mecha mutates and can absorb materials on its own? Anti-insect battleship blueprint? Drawings of an anti-insect mecha? Anti-insect warfare strategy? Brand new drawings come to mind. Yang Mu's rebirth seemed to be controlled by the hand of God... But now that God had given him a chance, Yang Mu chose to make a change. On the road of Xinghai's technological development, Yang Mu wants to go in the opposite direction and stand tall. Because everything I do is not random thinking, but preparation for a rainy day. All this is for the rise and fall of human civilization twenty years from now!
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Official(31)Scraped 16d ago
The protagonist feels very childish
The protagonist was a major general in his previous life and should have experienced a lot, but for some reason the author's protagonist just gave me a very childish and awkward feeling.
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The author's writing about Chen Cai is a complete failure. Chen Cai feels like a scoundrel who can only do bad things and is timid. Secondly, at the beginning, the author wrote that the protagonist wanted to spend the rest of his life with Chen Cai and be an ordinary person, but what about his father's hatred? Maybe the author wants to highlight the protagonist's infatuation, but this actually drags down the protagonist's image. The protagonist talks about going to a military school and wants to go to the same school as Chen Cai. The writing is very messy. Then there's the pretense and slap in the face, which can be included in a mindless and cool novel, but it's a bit boring to read too much in this article. Then there's the issue of going to school. Logically speaking, the protagonist has already gone to school once, shouldn't this part be shortened? (If the author has his own story to write in this paragraph, I have no problem with it), but this part is a bit too long and can be shortened appropriately. --------Dividing line-------- Of course, the author's writing style is not bad (it is already very good for a new author), and the narrative technique is also very good. Of course, the routine is still the same old routine, reborn as it was many years ago, but the writing is very suitable to my taste. If you like Star Wars mecha themes, this is the book for you. This is my first time writing a long book review, please give it a like (All the comments I made above are not to say that the author is bad, but just to give my opinions. I hope the author can write better in the future. Then don't ask me to write the pen, I will write it. This book review does not mean to say anything bad about the author, and the trolls will bypass it. Although the author has flaws, he is a new author after all, and he is already very good)
Why does the protagonist do nothing after rebirth? Why does he still study when he can obviously use a little bit of technology to create his own power and then secretly develop technology? Is it because he never read a book in his previous life?
The space battle actually uses mechas. I'm afraid it's not just a fantasy novel.
Well enough
I have always liked interstellar books about mechas, but I have a strange problem. In the interstellar age, productivity has become super strong, and resources are enough for everyone to live a prosperous life. In some novels, it is strange that the life of people in the interstellar age is not as good as that of today's Northern Europe. There is a novel Earth Invasion, in which I summarized: "In order to make the industrial system circulate and the materials in the warehouse not to become moldy, the government has solved almost all the big things in life. Items, and even the home version of the interstellar yacht is distributed to every family to speed up the consumption of materials. Even so, it is far from keeping up with the production speed of materials. Waste has become the theme of the times. The fate of materials is the process of turning from raw materials into products and being sent to the garbage dump. "I can tolerate any problem, but I can't understand a basic logical problem. The pace is indeed a bit slow, the main line is not clear, and it is too complicated. The conflicts should be clearer. There is news about the Zerg happening all the time in the article, creating an atmosphere, and the protagonist's behavior and actions are all for this purpose. Haha, but overall it's okay
No one to chat with?
The author doesn't post a very lonely message either, the work is pretty good. No one sent me to get one.
No way
What are you writing about? As the top mecha, there are no neuron links? ?
The protagonist is a loser, why would he be reborn?
After reading some, I found that the protagonist has always been a good-for-nothing when he was reborn, and he was also reborn as a soldier, which is nothing.
Mecha!
The point is to write about mechas, so there should be less ambiguous emotions and the like. I think the span of 20 years is a bit long? This will just make people feel like they are inked. In your previous life, you were at the level of a junior general, right? You should be very decisive and clear-minded in everything you do, right? Just looking at the front, it feels very watery, which makes people feel like they don't want to look down.
I don't know why the protagonist was a major general in his thirties in his previous life, but after being reborn and inheriting the memories of his previous life, he feels like an immature child. And I have read more than 250 chapters now, and these few chapters feel like a complete failure to me. A top-notch first-class corps in the star field can make very serious low-level mistakes during exercises. Moreover, when he is clearly a soldier and needs to requisition items in wartime, the supporting character behaves like a retard, and the protagonist is even more retarded. Chapter 255 gives me the feeling
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Official(31)Scraped 16d ago
The protagonist feels very childish
The protagonist was a major general in his previous life and should have experienced a lot, but for some reason the author's protagonist just gave me a very childish and awkward feeling.
question
The author's writing about Chen Cai is a complete failure. Chen Cai feels like a scoundrel who can only do bad things and is timid. Secondly, at the beginning, the author wrote that the protagonist wanted to spend the rest of his life with Chen Cai and be an ordinary person, but what about his father's hatred? Maybe the author wants to highlight the protagonist's infatuation, but this actually drags down the protagonist's image. The protagonist talks about going to a military school and wants to go to the same school as Chen Cai. The writing is very messy. Then there's the pretense and slap in the face, which can be included in a mindless and cool novel, but it's a bit boring to read too much in this article. Then there's the issue of going to school. Logically speaking, the protagonist has already gone to school once, shouldn't this part be shortened? (If the author has his own story to write in this paragraph, I have no problem with it), but this part is a bit too long and can be shortened appropriately. --------Dividing line-------- Of course, the author's writing style is not bad (it is already very good for a new author), and the narrative technique is also very good. Of course, the routine is still the same old routine, reborn as it was many years ago, but the writing is very suitable to my taste. If you like Star Wars mecha themes, this is the book for you. This is my first time writing a long book review, please give it a like (All the comments I made above are not to say that the author is bad, but just to give my opinions. I hope the author can write better in the future. Then don't ask me to write the pen, I will write it. This book review does not mean to say anything bad about the author, and the trolls will bypass it. Although the author has flaws, he is a new author after all, and he is already very good)
Why does the protagonist do nothing after rebirth? Why does he still study when he can obviously use a little bit of technology to create his own power and then secretly develop technology? Is it because he never read a book in his previous life?
The space battle actually uses mechas. I'm afraid it's not just a fantasy novel.
Well enough
I have always liked interstellar books about mechas, but I have a strange problem. In the interstellar age, productivity has become super strong, and resources are enough for everyone to live a prosperous life. In some novels, it is strange that the life of people in the interstellar age is not as good as that of today's Northern Europe. There is a novel Earth Invasion, in which I summarized: "In order to make the industrial system circulate and the materials in the warehouse not to become moldy, the government has solved almost all the big things in life. Items, and even the home version of the interstellar yacht is distributed to every family to speed up the consumption of materials. Even so, it is far from keeping up with the production speed of materials. Waste has become the theme of the times. The fate of materials is the process of turning from raw materials into products and being sent to the garbage dump. "I can tolerate any problem, but I can't understand a basic logical problem. The pace is indeed a bit slow, the main line is not clear, and it is too complicated. The conflicts should be clearer. There is news about the Zerg happening all the time in the article, creating an atmosphere, and the protagonist's behavior and actions are all for this purpose. Haha, but overall it's okay
No one to chat with?
The author doesn't post a very lonely message either, the work is pretty good. No one sent me to get one.
No way
What are you writing about? As the top mecha, there are no neuron links? ?
The protagonist is a loser, why would he be reborn?
After reading some, I found that the protagonist has always been a good-for-nothing when he was reborn, and he was also reborn as a soldier, which is nothing.
Mecha!
The point is to write about mechas, so there should be less ambiguous emotions and the like. I think the span of 20 years is a bit long? This will just make people feel like they are inked. In your previous life, you were at the level of a junior general, right? You should be very decisive and clear-minded in everything you do, right? Just looking at the front, it feels very watery, which makes people feel like they don't want to look down.
I don't know why the protagonist was a major general in his thirties in his previous life, but after being reborn and inheriting the memories of his previous life, he feels like an immature child. And I have read more than 250 chapters now, and these few chapters feel like a complete failure to me. A top-notch first-class corps in the star field can make very serious low-level mistakes during exercises. Moreover, when he is clearly a soldier and needs to requisition items in wartime, the supporting character behaves like a retard, and the protagonist is even more retarded. Chapter 255 gives me the feeling
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