Quickly Wear Little Seductress: the Paranoid Male Protagonist Always Pretends to Be Good

I only watched the first world. Generally speaking, the writing style is pretty good, but the end of the plane is too abrupt, there is no transition, and it's a bit confusing. Moreover, the heroine and the hero left at the same time during the banquet, so they shouldn't have been at the pavilion for such a long time... The heroine and the hero had a martial arts competition when the hero left, so I feel that the heroine's kung fu should not be so bad... After reading it, I quit and looked at other reviews of Guaiguai. In the end, I didn't plan to read it. See you again if you have the chance. I wish you more and more readers~

After reading the first story, I felt that there was no logic in how the author wrote about the age of the heroine, the hero, and the emperor. The hero initially said that he was 6 years old, and the heroine started writing that the age difference was 12 years old, which means that the heroine was 18 years old at the beginning. But she was the emperor's sister. The emperor later described her as being 30 years old, which was very contradictory. Then seven years later, the emperor's birthday banquet was actually to celebrate 33 years old. The heroine went from being close to being innocent to being thirty-one. It really left me speechless and hard to complain about. The ages of several princesses were also blurred. I felt that the author couldn't make up for the fact that the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist in her thirties when she was five or six years old. Then she deliberately blurred the ages and wanted to have a relationship for a few years, but couldn't convince herself, resulting in a series of contradictions. Moreover, the complex emotional and mental journey of the male protagonist was not explained very much, and in the end, the male protagonist's favorability was reduced to 100. A story full of holes. I hope the author can complete one story as much as possible before starting the next one. I hope the author can cheer up!

This book will probably be finished in early June. It is updated daily, with two chapters every day. I had thought about giving rewards for extra updates before, but after Erzuo wrote five words in two hours in a noisy environment... Second work: Sure enough, it's still the fourth day~ melancholy. Jpg

It's cool, but why did the second plane end so quickly?

I would like to ask the author how many pictures he updates in a few days!

To be honest, the first few worlds were not well written, which led to many little cuties not understanding them. However, we will work hard to improve the second world in the future! Currently: Ancient Princess ✓ Modern Xiao Qingmei ✓ Interstellar Mechanic (ongoing) If you have anything you want to see in the world behind, you can give us your opinions~ I love you! Ps: Please read and vote, please don't abandon the book easily, we will work hard to improve it! There is no need to force rewards in this regard, it depends on the cuties~

When I wrote this book, I actually didn't expect that there would be little cuties who would reward me. The reward from Little Putao really touched me QAQ~ I will definitely continue to work hard~, and thank you to the cuties who are following me~

Since I can't reply to paragraph comments, I can only do this~ Some babies may not understand the second world, well, because I didn't write it clearly. According to the plot, Xie Jingzhi was supposed to take a path that was both good and evil, but Shen Yi's appearance was just to give him someone he cared about and pull him back to the right path. Ps: It seems like I'm talking nonsense qwq

The new book has just been released, dear friends, please remember to collect it, read it and vote for it QWQ Zuozhuan's new book → "Strategy of the Yandere Villain, He's Flirty and Wild" It's not a loss if you invest in it~🤩🤩🤩

Is the ending too hasty? I feel like I'd better quit