I, Senior Brother Jie Jiao, Join the Chat Group

The first part is well written. Li Changsheng, the great disciple of Jiejiao, interacts with the group members through the chat group and collects fragments of Hongmeng purple energy to become a saint. The subject matter is also novel. As for the protagonist, as a time traveler, who clearly knows the shortcomings of enlightenment and becoming a saint, but still relies on the purple energy of the Hongmeng to become a saint, instead of attributing great power to himself and achieving enlightenment and perfect hunyuan, I won't say anything. In Li Changsheng's words, "I'm not even a saint, so what qualifications do I have to discriminate against saints?" The road must be walked step by step. Enlightenment and becoming a saint are just a new starting point. Moreover, if the protagonist has the Hongmeng Supreme Treasure with him, he may not be subject to the laws of heaven, and becoming a saint is not a bad idea. The problem is that after the chat group was switched to the perspective of the heavens, the plot was too scattered. It felt like the protagonist's ability to gather all the Hongmeng Purple Qi to achieve enlightenment and become a saint was becoming more and more elusive!

Maybe it's because I've read too many conspiracy theories about the Primordial Purple Qi, and the protagonists use their strength to prove it. Now when I see you focusing on collecting the Primordial Purple Qi, it's a bit embarrassing.

I didn't understand it before, I always didn't reply when I read posts. I haven't been able to level up and gain experience, and now I understand. Anyway, you can level up by replying with 15 words, and you can also earn experience. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied this sentence. Reply when I see a post and gain experience 🌚👍 Also, I am ready to visit all 99. See you in the next 99.

Have you seen the Holy King? A fish in the divine world crushes the three thousand-level immortal world. In the same way, if you eat a piece of grass in the prehistoric world, let alone the top of the human world, you will have to add thousands to tens of thousands of lifespan.

The main story of this novel is about an earthling who was unable to attain enlightenment as a time-traveler, cutting a group of leeks from all over the world in a chat group. It is almost the story of a quasi-holy robber leader leading a group of uneducated people to rob everywhere. The story is vulgar and the earth is splitting.

The garbage is all holy and you don't have any defense against the system? Returning the grass from ancient times to people in the martial arts world can only be achieved by innateness? Low-end prehistoric

Don't kill three corpses, this is Hongjun's way, the law of three thousand. Pangu is the law of force. Kill these and there will only be a few left. Hongjun is the law of immortals. Use his way and never try to surpass him. Don't absorb the purple energy either. Use force to prove the way or use the Chaos Demon Ape to prove the way through battle. Any of the two thousand types will do. Space There is too much time, and there is no need to set too many realms. Like those fantasy novels, they are confusing when there are too many, and they cannot be remembered at all. Just add a realm as strong as the way of heaven on top of the saint, and then add a realm as strong as the avenue. The avenue is the apex, and all heavens and realms are invincible. I just don't know if the author has considered opening a new book, or to catch up on the recently updated Zhu Xian Dou Po. I will consider opening new books for anime like Xingchen Transformation. Apart from the protagonist of Xingchen Transformation who looks like a villain, other anime protagonists are pretty good. Recently, there is an anime called: Starting with a Mountain. It is not bad, but I don't dare to watch it. The protagonist's system is also relatively weak, but it is quite interesting. If you haven't seen it, you can check it out.

I don't know why, but there seems to be a familiar feeling (referring to the author rather than the work)

Let's complain, the Hongmeng Purple Qi is too important in the author's writing. The Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian who has realized the Dao is enough. Why does it have to be a saint? Yangmei Daxian is the Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian who has realized the Dao. The author can write it like this. Above the saint is Hongjun, and above Hongjun is the way of heaven. The protagonist is the same as the saint who has realized the Dao. Also, when did Zhao Gongming come from the human race, and the author didn't explain it?

The writing is too messy, the plot is too messy