
Dark Deception
by Qiao Alcohol
About This Novel
Depression caused by a broken love, serial murders caused by a painting, when the truth gradually emerges... The abandoned amusement park, the studio at the end of the corridor, the beautiful sound of the music box in the dark... Who is actually at fault? (Pseudo romance and slight suspense)
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Official(14)Scraped 11d ago
Highly recommended
I came across this book by Qiao Chun by chance. Although it is a new book and only three chapters have been updated, it is very detailed in terms of psychological description, action description, language description, and demeanor description. The beginning of the chapter is a bit depressing, and it feels like the protagonist is preoccupied, setting up suspense and making people want to continue reading. Although there are only three chapters at the moment, each chapter has sentences worth learning. I wrote them down in my notebook. I think to judge whether a novel is well written is to see whether it has anything worth learning from others and whether its plot is smooth. I read these three chapters aloud, especially this sentence. When she heard this name, the tight string in her brain finally broke, and all the emotions rushed towards her like a scourge. It really touched me. The description of the character's appearance is also very detailed. As I read it, I could figure out what that person looked like and what his expression looked like. Please update soon, I will always support you. 😹😹😹
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What worries me most now is that I will be entering ninth grade at the beginning of school, and then I have to face the high school entrance examination. I have to make up for my classes during the summer vacation. I don't know if I can finish writing this book during the summer vacation. If I can't finish writing, I don't know when I can continue writing. I will try to finish the plot as quickly as possible. If the content is very rushed, I will just read it. Thank you. At present, I am updating every day, irregularly, because I still have not saved the manuscript. When I'm in school, I'm tired of exams, and when I'm on vacation, I'm tired of homework and studying (I feel like this is a fake summer vacation). Although I only have a few reader friends, I really won't give up.
Book
Just think that I am making something out of nothing, secretly crossing the sinking warehouse, imagining out of thin air, fabricating out of thin air, speechless and hopeless. May the dead rest in peace and have a good journey.
Little clever ghost
I think Jiang Wei should be July, and then, it is said later that July's daughter is Jiang San, so Chen Ci is Jiang Wei's daughter. When Gu Yu saw his parents, he said that he couldn't do anything, which means that his parents' death was related to Chen Ci, and it also explains why Gu Yu changed. In addition, I would like to express my love for this man and the author (*/∇\*)
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Unfortunately, the high school entrance examination made me tired. I was afraid that I would not do well in the exam. My parents forced me and my teachers forced me to make up classes every day. It was a feeling of physical and mental exhaustion. They always said that the exam would be over in a few days and you would be relaxed. I want to die every day... Uncomfortable(´;;`)
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Note: Also available after the extra chapter. After reading what I wrote, I realized that there are not many normal people, and they are all quite crazy. Su Ya is crazy, and it can be seen that she has mental illness. Chen Ci is also the same, with a triple personality split, Gu Yu is sickly by Chen Ci's side, Jiang Wei is perverted and wants to kill his own daughter, Hua Mu only has Chen Ci in his cold eyes, and Wen Zhinan abandoned Jiang Wei who was pregnant out of wedlock for the sake of the family industry. It seems that only Zing Zhounian is a positive character... Let's talk about Chen Ci's childhood here. After all, it's not explicitly mentioned in the book (actually I'm lazy) 1. Chen Ci was the product of Jiang Wei's unmarried pregnancy, and Jiang Wei once wanted to abort her, but due to various reasons, she still gave birth to her. 2. After Jiang Wei gave birth to her, he regretted and wanted to get rid of this burden, and wanted to drown Chen Ci, but he still didn't do it. Later, he took Chen Ci to the amusement park, which is Wang Dong's amusement park. The prototype of the game "darkness" in the article was also the beginning of Chen Ci's nightmare. Chen Ci was abducted, and later met several victims in the "lady" case, and began to derive the first personality, Chen Juan, a genius woman who was set to be twenty-four years old, and finally gave birth to Jiang Si. It can also be said that Jiang Si is the original. Chen Juan's appearance protected young Chen Ci from harm. 3. After the amusement park was closed down, Chen Ci was sent to an orphanage. While in the orphanage, Chen Ci drew a lot of paintings, just like her father. She still suffered from serious mental illness and was later adopted by the Chen couple. Mrs. Chen had just lost her daughter and she doted on Chen Ci. The studio at the end of the corridor also belongs to Chen Ci, and the music box was left to Chen Ci by Jiang Wei. 4. There is another small detail here. In fact, Hua Mu also has some feelings for the heroine. See Chapter 8 for details. 5. Let's talk about the male protagonist Gu Yu. When he was a child, he saw the girl he liked disposing of her parents' corpses covered in blood. Since then, his personality has become gloomy and he is unwilling to communicate with others. When he was a child, he was saved by Chen Ci from drowning, so he fell in love with Chen Ci. It was also mentioned in the extra story that the male protagonist also has a tendency to be yandere. 6. Another small detail. One of the characters in the story, Shen Yi's partner, is the Chu Shi in the original painting, so he is called I. Of course, due to personal reasons, I did not include it. (Mainly lazy)
bless
I hope Gu Yu can meet Chen Ci again in his next life, and then stand beside her as Chen Ci's lover. At last! Congratulations to the author Qiao Chun: bright future The future is promising Hmm... (Mum~😽😽)
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Official(14)Scraped 11d ago
Highly recommended
I came across this book by Qiao Chun by chance. Although it is a new book and only three chapters have been updated, it is very detailed in terms of psychological description, action description, language description, and demeanor description. The beginning of the chapter is a bit depressing, and it feels like the protagonist is preoccupied, setting up suspense and making people want to continue reading. Although there are only three chapters at the moment, each chapter has sentences worth learning. I wrote them down in my notebook. I think to judge whether a novel is well written is to see whether it has anything worth learning from others and whether its plot is smooth. I read these three chapters aloud, especially this sentence. When she heard this name, the tight string in her brain finally broke, and all the emotions rushed towards her like a scourge. It really touched me. The description of the character's appearance is also very detailed. As I read it, I could figure out what that person looked like and what his expression looked like. Please update soon, I will always support you. 😹😹😹
renew
What worries me most now is that I will be entering ninth grade at the beginning of school, and then I have to face the high school entrance examination. I have to make up for my classes during the summer vacation. I don't know if I can finish writing this book during the summer vacation. If I can't finish writing, I don't know when I can continue writing. I will try to finish the plot as quickly as possible. If the content is very rushed, I will just read it. Thank you. At present, I am updating every day, irregularly, because I still have not saved the manuscript. When I'm in school, I'm tired of exams, and when I'm on vacation, I'm tired of homework and studying (I feel like this is a fake summer vacation). Although I only have a few reader friends, I really won't give up.
Book
Just think that I am making something out of nothing, secretly crossing the sinking warehouse, imagining out of thin air, fabricating out of thin air, speechless and hopeless. May the dead rest in peace and have a good journey.
Little clever ghost
I think Jiang Wei should be July, and then, it is said later that July's daughter is Jiang San, so Chen Ci is Jiang Wei's daughter. When Gu Yu saw his parents, he said that he couldn't do anything, which means that his parents' death was related to Chen Ci, and it also explains why Gu Yu changed. In addition, I would like to express my love for this man and the author (*/∇\*)
Check in
Check in today to report and support the author. 😘😘
Coming
Check in, check in, check in, the book style is quite strange, hhhc
I'm back again
Unfortunately, the high school entrance examination made me tired. I was afraid that I would not do well in the exam. My parents forced me and my teachers forced me to make up classes every day. It was a feeling of physical and mental exhaustion. They always said that the exam would be over in a few days and you would be relaxed. I want to die every day... Uncomfortable(´;;`)
Full text summary (if you don't want to read the whole text, you can read it)
Note: Also available after the extra chapter. After reading what I wrote, I realized that there are not many normal people, and they are all quite crazy. Su Ya is crazy, and it can be seen that she has mental illness. Chen Ci is also the same, with a triple personality split, Gu Yu is sickly by Chen Ci's side, Jiang Wei is perverted and wants to kill his own daughter, Hua Mu only has Chen Ci in his cold eyes, and Wen Zhinan abandoned Jiang Wei who was pregnant out of wedlock for the sake of the family industry. It seems that only Zing Zhounian is a positive character... Let's talk about Chen Ci's childhood here. After all, it's not explicitly mentioned in the book (actually I'm lazy) 1. Chen Ci was the product of Jiang Wei's unmarried pregnancy, and Jiang Wei once wanted to abort her, but due to various reasons, she still gave birth to her. 2. After Jiang Wei gave birth to her, he regretted and wanted to get rid of this burden, and wanted to drown Chen Ci, but he still didn't do it. Later, he took Chen Ci to the amusement park, which is Wang Dong's amusement park. The prototype of the game "darkness" in the article was also the beginning of Chen Ci's nightmare. Chen Ci was abducted, and later met several victims in the "lady" case, and began to derive the first personality, Chen Juan, a genius woman who was set to be twenty-four years old, and finally gave birth to Jiang Si. It can also be said that Jiang Si is the original. Chen Juan's appearance protected young Chen Ci from harm. 3. After the amusement park was closed down, Chen Ci was sent to an orphanage. While in the orphanage, Chen Ci drew a lot of paintings, just like her father. She still suffered from serious mental illness and was later adopted by the Chen couple. Mrs. Chen had just lost her daughter and she doted on Chen Ci. The studio at the end of the corridor also belongs to Chen Ci, and the music box was left to Chen Ci by Jiang Wei. 4. There is another small detail here. In fact, Hua Mu also has some feelings for the heroine. See Chapter 8 for details. 5. Let's talk about the male protagonist Gu Yu. When he was a child, he saw the girl he liked disposing of her parents' corpses covered in blood. Since then, his personality has become gloomy and he is unwilling to communicate with others. When he was a child, he was saved by Chen Ci from drowning, so he fell in love with Chen Ci. It was also mentioned in the extra story that the male protagonist also has a tendency to be yandere. 6. Another small detail. One of the characters in the story, Shen Yi's partner, is the Chu Shi in the original painting, so he is called I. Of course, due to personal reasons, I did not include it. (Mainly lazy)
bless
I hope Gu Yu can meet Chen Ci again in his next life, and then stand beside her as Chen Ci's lover. At last! Congratulations to the author Qiao Chun: bright future The future is promising Hmm... (Mum~😽😽)










