Game of Thrones: Lords of the Trident
by Zitingyue
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A Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) fanfic When he opened his eyes, he was already in the continent of Westeros written by George R. R. Martin, and became a small lord named Suleiman under the command of the Deddings family in the lower reaches of the Green Fork River in the river land. The family has no wealth, no soldiers, no power, only about fifty people, and its status is as humble as dust. It is an unnoticed corner spectator at the noble banquet. Facing the noble barrier built by eight thousand years of ancient inheritance, Suleiman, who came from another world, amidst the changes in the Riverlands, stepped from the "Sir of Stinky Castle" on the edge of the swamp to the throne of the Trident River!
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Official(64)Scraped 2d ago
It seems that I am going to write an idealistic novel, which is fine, but writing Game of Thrones is problematic. Game of Thrones itself is a niche game, and you have to write a long and idealistic one, which is a bit torturous. The book is okay, the plot is okay, the problem is the readers. If you have a million words now, I will only read it happily, but you only have more than a hundred chapters. I have finished reading, and the main plot has not been triggered. Do you think you are kidding? I am more inclined to write about Western magic, where lords farm. You can write it like this, using the framework of Game of Thrones, and you should speed up the progress. The pace is too slow.
The quality is no problem, and I also approve of the writing ability. It's just the ink.
You are a bit speechless except that the Seventh Army was flooded in the early stage. After all, there is no need for hundreds of people. They are too mobile and can only flood a few. There are no other big problems. I agree with the proportions anyway, but the update speed is too slow and the plot advancement is too slow. The main storyline only started after chapter 300. Looking at the way you write it, it feels like you have to write more than 1,500 chapters. However, the benefits of fanfics are relatively small. Currently, except for the Iron Throne book, which is slightly better than yours, I haven't seen any and all-tours fanfics that are better than yours. In fact, if you directly write Western fantasy, I feel that your income will be higher, while the income of fan fiction will be lower, right? My personal suggestions: 1. If you allow it, separate the three updates a day so that you can have more reminders. 2. I see that your collection is not read much. You can add some pictures to create more discussion, and the number of posts will be higher. 3. You still have to be proactive in asking for gifts. Mention them as often as possible (how many reminders should be given at the end of the weekend and at the end of the month? Right? You can also achieve better results)
It feels more and more boring
I feel that the plot after the protagonist's rebellion has collapsed. Also, no matter how I watch it now, it doesn't feel that exciting anymore. There are fewer and fewer killing scenes and battle scenes. It feels boring to watch, and the music is useless.
The writing is good, but it's a pity that it's too slow to warm up. Even if it's slow to warm up, it still doesn't feel satisfying. I can only say that it has good writing skills, but it doesn't fit the category of readers like me who just read novels for fun.
This book basically collapsed after I finished it. The author got carried away and was a strong talker. What are the cool writing routines for traveling through the world of novels, familiarizing yourself with plot prophets, advanced concepts and technologies of later generations, and plug-ins? Since the beginning of the rise, the plot prophet has been basically useless because the protagonist's foundation is so poor. I originally thought it was a construction stream, waiting for the opportunity, but there was no development in my own territory. Suddenly the plot took a sudden turn and took a sudden turn. A generation of hot-tongued villains came online, and I could basically abandon the book. What are you going to do with your broken base?
It would be fine if I didn't write some conjectures about my interest in ugly women. There may be some content that the author thinks is humorous and interesting, but if you subscribe, you may just want to unsubscribe, which is disgusting.
I still give you the tickets, but the pace is too slow, and don't keep talking all the time, and use the centralized power of the East to try to influence the West. It's completely different and too awkward.
Author, would you let the protagonist train a dragon? Can the plot be faster?
Author, how many chapters are you planning to write? The plot is too slow to follow, and it has not yet been solved into the main plot... Author, the Game of Thrones fan fiction you wrote is the slowest among the Game of Thrones fan novels I have read...
The book is a good book, but the pace is really slow
Come on! Good books cannot be buried
Very well written
One of the best Game of Thrones fanfics I have ever seen. It's a pity that the update is too slow. I'm really afraid of the sudden eunuch
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Official(64)Scraped 2d ago
It seems that I am going to write an idealistic novel, which is fine, but writing Game of Thrones is problematic. Game of Thrones itself is a niche game, and you have to write a long and idealistic one, which is a bit torturous. The book is okay, the plot is okay, the problem is the readers. If you have a million words now, I will only read it happily, but you only have more than a hundred chapters. I have finished reading, and the main plot has not been triggered. Do you think you are kidding? I am more inclined to write about Western magic, where lords farm. You can write it like this, using the framework of Game of Thrones, and you should speed up the progress. The pace is too slow.
The quality is no problem, and I also approve of the writing ability. It's just the ink.
You are a bit speechless except that the Seventh Army was flooded in the early stage. After all, there is no need for hundreds of people. They are too mobile and can only flood a few. There are no other big problems. I agree with the proportions anyway, but the update speed is too slow and the plot advancement is too slow. The main storyline only started after chapter 300. Looking at the way you write it, it feels like you have to write more than 1,500 chapters. However, the benefits of fanfics are relatively small. Currently, except for the Iron Throne book, which is slightly better than yours, I haven't seen any and all-tours fanfics that are better than yours. In fact, if you directly write Western fantasy, I feel that your income will be higher, while the income of fan fiction will be lower, right? My personal suggestions: 1. If you allow it, separate the three updates a day so that you can have more reminders. 2. I see that your collection is not read much. You can add some pictures to create more discussion, and the number of posts will be higher. 3. You still have to be proactive in asking for gifts. Mention them as often as possible (how many reminders should be given at the end of the weekend and at the end of the month? Right? You can also achieve better results)
It feels more and more boring
I feel that the plot after the protagonist's rebellion has collapsed. Also, no matter how I watch it now, it doesn't feel that exciting anymore. There are fewer and fewer killing scenes and battle scenes. It feels boring to watch, and the music is useless.
The writing is good, but it's a pity that it's too slow to warm up. Even if it's slow to warm up, it still doesn't feel satisfying. I can only say that it has good writing skills, but it doesn't fit the category of readers like me who just read novels for fun.
This book basically collapsed after I finished it. The author got carried away and was a strong talker. What are the cool writing routines for traveling through the world of novels, familiarizing yourself with plot prophets, advanced concepts and technologies of later generations, and plug-ins? Since the beginning of the rise, the plot prophet has been basically useless because the protagonist's foundation is so poor. I originally thought it was a construction stream, waiting for the opportunity, but there was no development in my own territory. Suddenly the plot took a sudden turn and took a sudden turn. A generation of hot-tongued villains came online, and I could basically abandon the book. What are you going to do with your broken base?
It would be fine if I didn't write some conjectures about my interest in ugly women. There may be some content that the author thinks is humorous and interesting, but if you subscribe, you may just want to unsubscribe, which is disgusting.
I still give you the tickets, but the pace is too slow, and don't keep talking all the time, and use the centralized power of the East to try to influence the West. It's completely different and too awkward.
Author, would you let the protagonist train a dragon? Can the plot be faster?
Author, how many chapters are you planning to write? The plot is too slow to follow, and it has not yet been solved into the main plot... Author, the Game of Thrones fan fiction you wrote is the slowest among the Game of Thrones fan novels I have read...
The book is a good book, but the pace is really slow
Come on! Good books cannot be buried
Very well written
One of the best Game of Thrones fanfics I have ever seen. It's a pity that the update is too slow. I'm really afraid of the sudden eunuch
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A Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) fanfic When he opened his eyes, he was already in the continent of Westeros written by George R. R. Martin, and became a small lord named Suleiman under the command of the Deddings family in the lower reaches of the Green Fork River in the river land. The family has no wealth, no soldiers, no power, only about fifty people, and its status is as humble as dust. It is an unnoticed corner spectator at the noble banquet. Facing the noble barrier built by eight thousand years of ancient inheritance, Suleiman, who came from another world, amidst the changes in the Riverlands, stepped from the "Sir of Stinky Castle" on the edge of the swamp to the throne of the Trident River!
When a fan of A Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) opens his eyes, he is already in the continent of Westeros written by George R. R. Martin, and becomes a small lord named Suleiman under the command of the Deddings family in the lower reaches of the Green Fork River in the river land. The family has no wealth, no soldiers, no power, only about fifty people, and its status is as humble as dust. It is an unnoticed corner spectator at the noble banquet. Facing the noble barrier built by eight thousand years of ancient inheritance, Suleiman, who came from another world, amidst the changes in the Riverlands, stepped from the "Sir of Stinky Castle" on the edge of the swamp to the throne of the Trident River! ... Keywords: Time Travel Prophet, No Golden Finger. Recommendation index: ★★★★ Word count: 1.1 Million, serialized. PS: The timeline begins about 10 years ago in the original work.
Qingliu in Game of Thrones is not Long Aotian The story of going from the lowest nobleman to the throne Farming flow, establishing the Qin system, protecting the common people, and wielding the sword against the aristocratic system Military honors, salt and iron franchise, household registration, improved technology The disadvantage is that the characters are completely darkened, highlighting the shamelessness of traditional aristocrats The only problem is that the pace is slow. The Iron Islands rebellion starts at the beginning, and more than 300 chapters have not been completely finished.
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