Donghuang Taiyi
About This Novel
The true spirit is given by heaven, and the Tao and fruit are created by humans. Once he woke up from his dream, Taiyi smiled and lived forever. ... At the end of the era, the ancient world was shattered and all living beings perished! In the post-prehistoric era, in the world of Infinite Hengsha, a terminally ill patient was reborn in the mysterious and vast Evergreen World. This is the story of a small Qi-refining cultivator who went through thousands of hardships and gradually grew into the Four Saints of the New Universe. And all of this begins with a cultivator family in Beichuan County, Lingzhou.
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Ahem, I personally feel that slow-burning writing won't work now. In the past, those slow-burning writings, such as those that broke the sky, moved the universe with martial arts, Douluo Continent, and became an immortal through a hundred refinements, were enjoyable to read. Looking back now, I can't stand it anymore. I just like the current one, uh, how should I put it, Wudiwen. It's not the kind where the protagonist always jumps into battles. The skipping battles are written slowly. It is now popular to crush the enemy with realm. The enemy is still level one, but the protagonist is already level ten, always a lot higher than the enemy. For example, Ji Dao Heavenly Demon, Lu Sheng Lu Lao Mo. Like Mysterious Resurrection, those books. It's all like this, one book can make you a god. Personal opinion
Well written, keep it up
At least the logic is passable. The protagonist and the supporting characters have IQs, so it's not good at all. Wouldn't it be bad to sell the foundation-building pill to a fellow sect or a family?
It feels like the protagonist has become a sword slave. It is the protagonist who lets the sword become the master, not the sword which makes the protagonist master. Being able to absorb the protagonist's spiritual energy uncontrollably proves that the protagonist does not control the sword, but the sword controls the protagonist. This insecurity factor is that I will directly destroy him. The first principle of cultivation is immortality. When I live forever, I will destroy it. Magic, magic and magic weapons are just means of protecting the road. If they hinder me, they will be destroyed. There are at least hundreds of books about this kind of routine written by the author, and none of them are written by Fengshen, because they are too basic and lack any logic. Wasted so much of my time watching
Why don't you write it? Are you planning to become a eunuch?
well
Red and fiery, in a trance, hahahaha
Qi Pa Pa has monthly passes and chapter reviews. Why is there no comment section? Then I can hardly sit in the first place~
Brainless
It's not unreasonable to have poor grades. Pig's trotter's character is poisonous. And Wan Xiaoyun's plot here is also poisonous.
The protagonist is okay in the front, but becomes swollen in the back? Have you learned to bully the weak and fear the strong?
The writing is a bit unqualified
The title of the book is Donghuang Taiyi. After all, it is also called Donghuang. The male protagonist is written so that he has no city, no trump card, and everything is slow. If the protagonist cannot be written, just go to another place and then rise and return.
slow
I can write well, but this book is a slow read, suitable for reading
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Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 11d ago
Give me your opinion
Ahem, I personally feel that slow-burning writing won't work now. In the past, those slow-burning writings, such as those that broke the sky, moved the universe with martial arts, Douluo Continent, and became an immortal through a hundred refinements, were enjoyable to read. Looking back now, I can't stand it anymore. I just like the current one, uh, how should I put it, Wudiwen. It's not the kind where the protagonist always jumps into battles. The skipping battles are written slowly. It is now popular to crush the enemy with realm. The enemy is still level one, but the protagonist is already level ten, always a lot higher than the enemy. For example, Ji Dao Heavenly Demon, Lu Sheng Lu Lao Mo. Like Mysterious Resurrection, those books. It's all like this, one book can make you a god. Personal opinion
Well written, keep it up
At least the logic is passable. The protagonist and the supporting characters have IQs, so it's not good at all. Wouldn't it be bad to sell the foundation-building pill to a fellow sect or a family?
It feels like the protagonist has become a sword slave. It is the protagonist who lets the sword become the master, not the sword which makes the protagonist master. Being able to absorb the protagonist's spiritual energy uncontrollably proves that the protagonist does not control the sword, but the sword controls the protagonist. This insecurity factor is that I will directly destroy him. The first principle of cultivation is immortality. When I live forever, I will destroy it. Magic, magic and magic weapons are just means of protecting the road. If they hinder me, they will be destroyed. There are at least hundreds of books about this kind of routine written by the author, and none of them are written by Fengshen, because they are too basic and lack any logic. Wasted so much of my time watching
Why don't you write it? Are you planning to become a eunuch?
well
Red and fiery, in a trance, hahahaha
Qi Pa Pa has monthly passes and chapter reviews. Why is there no comment section? Then I can hardly sit in the first place~
Brainless
It's not unreasonable to have poor grades. Pig's trotter's character is poisonous. And Wan Xiaoyun's plot here is also poisonous.
The protagonist is okay in the front, but becomes swollen in the back? Have you learned to bully the weak and fear the strong?
The writing is a bit unqualified
The title of the book is Donghuang Taiyi. After all, it is also called Donghuang. The male protagonist is written so that he has no city, no trump card, and everything is slow. If the protagonist cannot be written, just go to another place and then rise and return.
slow
I can write well, but this book is a slow read, suitable for reading
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