
I Built an Armada
About This Novel
Su Dingping returned to 1999, at a time when the Navy was struggling. The 054B large escort, 055 large drive, and 003 aircraft carrier are still distant dreams. Awakening the [Strongest Military Analysis System] and analyzing stuck technology, he led the navy to glory. Many years later, China's invincible fleet patrolled the four oceans, and the whole world fell silent. "When I was little, I came to see you." "Eagle, open the door." "Don't be afraid, everyone, we always convince people with virtue." ... For five thousand years, we have been at the world's poker table, watching the rise and demise of one opponent after another.
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Official(95)Scraped 2d ago
Good article.
Let's talk about some shortcomings, it's too fucking cool. This kind of heavy industrial science and technology article is difficult to write, and it is understandable if you want to write a little bit of water. But it's really too watery. Moreover, the writing is not very good. I informed the staff that this plot is only watered down for 10-15 chapters. I can't accept that so much water has been poured into it.
The writing was okay at first, and it was a bit interesting. Later, it may be that the author ran out of useful information and just flooded the gold mountain. A small thing will shock the leader, and the chief will be shocked for two or three chapters and then it is gone. Then, after several domestic leaders finished their ink, it was the turn of foreign countries. Several countries were shocked and then disappeared after two or three chapters. The rest of the plot is written in this way over and over again, and skipping five or six chapters at a time has no impact at all. How many people can watch Shuicheng like this? Another point is that the country names at the back are really disgusting. A modern society looks like a primitive tribe.
Disgusted by the manufacturing costs
Everything else is okay and tolerable, but the endless loop of military expenditures every few chapters shows that each ship costs billions, which is disgusting. Everything is made in an integrated military factory, and there is no need for various trial and error research and development, let alone various military tigers. To put it bluntly, you just need to buy some raw materials to make finished products, plus the wages of employees, the cost of each warship is about the same as take-out, which means you can earn at least 90% of the navy's military expenses after deducting various expenses, right? To put it simply, a chip made of a pile of sand, including all kinds of labor, as for R&D and the original machine surcharge, how much do you think the cost will be?
It's so rubbish. There is no basic common sense in anything written. There is no air force, no army, and only the navy has less than ten ships. They have all reached the mainland of Japan. How can I never imagine that there is a pig like you?
The names of the countries are so disgusting to look at
The front is fine, but the names of the countries in the back, this animal tribe, that animal tribe, the more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes, and it feels like a primitive society fighting. I can't watch it.
The more I read, the more clueless I become. I take the war author too much for granted, and I don't even understand the relationship of interests.
The front is normal, but the further you go to the back, the more nonsense you get.
The development of the army must rely on the development of the military industry. It is not just a design drawing, but also manufacturing. Equipment and materials are the most important. The system can only be designed and simulated production. There is no way to upgrade it in one year. Special naval warships are all limited by power and the overall keel. Every piece of equipment is carefully considered. How did it happen that the upgrade was suddenly completed in two months?
The names of the countries are all written casually, and the names of the same country are always changed. The beginning of the content is good, but the rest is really confusing! There is no cure for driving high and walking low.
It's a play-style "author's pleasure" article, and only the author himself is happy. Vision limits the author's imagination! 😛
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Official(95)Scraped 2d ago
Good article.
Let's talk about some shortcomings, it's too fucking cool. This kind of heavy industrial science and technology article is difficult to write, and it is understandable if you want to write a little bit of water. But it's really too watery. Moreover, the writing is not very good. I informed the staff that this plot is only watered down for 10-15 chapters. I can't accept that so much water has been poured into it.
The writing was okay at first, and it was a bit interesting. Later, it may be that the author ran out of useful information and just flooded the gold mountain. A small thing will shock the leader, and the chief will be shocked for two or three chapters and then it is gone. Then, after several domestic leaders finished their ink, it was the turn of foreign countries. Several countries were shocked and then disappeared after two or three chapters. The rest of the plot is written in this way over and over again, and skipping five or six chapters at a time has no impact at all. How many people can watch Shuicheng like this? Another point is that the country names at the back are really disgusting. A modern society looks like a primitive tribe.
Disgusted by the manufacturing costs
Everything else is okay and tolerable, but the endless loop of military expenditures every few chapters shows that each ship costs billions, which is disgusting. Everything is made in an integrated military factory, and there is no need for various trial and error research and development, let alone various military tigers. To put it bluntly, you just need to buy some raw materials to make finished products, plus the wages of employees, the cost of each warship is about the same as take-out, which means you can earn at least 90% of the navy's military expenses after deducting various expenses, right? To put it simply, a chip made of a pile of sand, including all kinds of labor, as for R&D and the original machine surcharge, how much do you think the cost will be?
It's so rubbish. There is no basic common sense in anything written. There is no air force, no army, and only the navy has less than ten ships. They have all reached the mainland of Japan. How can I never imagine that there is a pig like you?
The names of the countries are so disgusting to look at
The front is fine, but the names of the countries in the back, this animal tribe, that animal tribe, the more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes, and it feels like a primitive society fighting. I can't watch it.
The more I read, the more clueless I become. I take the war author too much for granted, and I don't even understand the relationship of interests.
The front is normal, but the further you go to the back, the more nonsense you get.
The development of the army must rely on the development of the military industry. It is not just a design drawing, but also manufacturing. Equipment and materials are the most important. The system can only be designed and simulated production. There is no way to upgrade it in one year. Special naval warships are all limited by power and the overall keel. Every piece of equipment is carefully considered. How did it happen that the upgrade was suddenly completed in two months?
The names of the countries are all written casually, and the names of the same country are always changed. The beginning of the content is good, but the rest is really confusing! There is no cure for driving high and walking low.
It's a play-style "author's pleasure" article, and only the author himself is happy. Vision limits the author's imagination! 😛












