
My Era of Technology
About This Novel
Lu Yang has a dream, that is to become a great man who changes the world. Whether it is scientists like Newton and Einstein, or entrepreneurs like Steve Jobs and Bill Gates. Then the opportunity came. Having accidentally obtained an alien civilization, he felt that his time had come.
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The beginning was okay, but I haven't read the rest yet. I think the beginning is well written. The protagonist is a genius from the beginning. Unlike some black science and technology novels, the protagonist has already graduated when he gets the golden finger. Moreover, the protagonist is not a genius, but just a third-rate university graduate (ps: I am not looking down on a third-rate university, I just graduated from an ordinary second-rate university). I want to know, a person who has no talent and graduated from an ordinary university suddenly comes up with a black technology, and then comes up with a steady stream of black technology. What is this? Didn't anyone notice something was wrong? It's better to have a protagonist with this kind of genius character. No matter how many black technologies he comes up with later, people will only think of him as talent. Makes sense. Come on, author!
I don't want to read it. Your readers are Chinese, not Americans or people from other countries. And you are setting up a company in China, and you have always used US dollars as the unit. Does RMB make you feel uncomfortable? Or is there something wrong, so you can't use RMB as the unit? ? ?
Write about a pure scientist
Now don't let the protagonist get too involved in politics. Don't be like other science and technology parks. In the end, he becomes a politician. You can write about someone who has political talent, but it is better to write about a pure scientist.
Don't read it with your brain in mind when reading cool articles, otherwise it will make people doubt their life! Don't be illogical, otherwise you will find that you are not an ordinary fool and will talk about logical thinking with a group of people who have no money! Don't discuss details with someone who just has bad money.
Is it okay to start?
You can write well. Keep up the good work! !
Newcomers and new books, please support, collect, and recommend votes! ! !
A novel like this is unfinished and ends halfway through. We also spent money and ended up not getting the ending. Is this considered fraud? Although I don't have much money alone, but everyone adds up, it's a lot. And there seems to be more than one novel in it, there are many novels like this. I seem to have spent a lot of money in total.
The protagonist buys a sports car
Many books say that the protagonist will buy a sports car if he has money. Are you planning to send the protagonist away so that he can be replaced by another one? If you want to show off, just drive an armored car. It is safe and cool.
After reading some chapters, I found a lot of problems. 1. Some chapters are too long, difficult to read, and densely packed when viewed on a mobile phone. 2. Too fast. The plot develops too fast and there is no foreshadowing. 3. The description is a bit stiff, and some are just like awkward chat. Although he is a novice author, he still needs to keep learning. After all, excellent authors are always learning to continuously improve their writing abilities and writing skills. After reading dozens of chapters, it's not my favorite type. The plot is too fast, lacks some logic, and there are almost no causes and consequences. . . Neutral rating
Rubbish
In reality, such people should have been dissected and studied long ago, right?
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Official(28)Scraped 5d ago
Comments that are factual.
The beginning was okay, but I haven't read the rest yet. I think the beginning is well written. The protagonist is a genius from the beginning. Unlike some black science and technology novels, the protagonist has already graduated when he gets the golden finger. Moreover, the protagonist is not a genius, but just a third-rate university graduate (ps: I am not looking down on a third-rate university, I just graduated from an ordinary second-rate university). I want to know, a person who has no talent and graduated from an ordinary university suddenly comes up with a black technology, and then comes up with a steady stream of black technology. What is this? Didn't anyone notice something was wrong? It's better to have a protagonist with this kind of genius character. No matter how many black technologies he comes up with later, people will only think of him as talent. Makes sense. Come on, author!
I don't want to read it. Your readers are Chinese, not Americans or people from other countries. And you are setting up a company in China, and you have always used US dollars as the unit. Does RMB make you feel uncomfortable? Or is there something wrong, so you can't use RMB as the unit? ? ?
Write about a pure scientist
Now don't let the protagonist get too involved in politics. Don't be like other science and technology parks. In the end, he becomes a politician. You can write about someone who has political talent, but it is better to write about a pure scientist.
Don't read it with your brain in mind when reading cool articles, otherwise it will make people doubt their life! Don't be illogical, otherwise you will find that you are not an ordinary fool and will talk about logical thinking with a group of people who have no money! Don't discuss details with someone who just has bad money.
Is it okay to start?
You can write well. Keep up the good work! !
Newcomers and new books, please support, collect, and recommend votes! ! !
A novel like this is unfinished and ends halfway through. We also spent money and ended up not getting the ending. Is this considered fraud? Although I don't have much money alone, but everyone adds up, it's a lot. And there seems to be more than one novel in it, there are many novels like this. I seem to have spent a lot of money in total.
The protagonist buys a sports car
Many books say that the protagonist will buy a sports car if he has money. Are you planning to send the protagonist away so that he can be replaced by another one? If you want to show off, just drive an armored car. It is safe and cool.
After reading some chapters, I found a lot of problems. 1. Some chapters are too long, difficult to read, and densely packed when viewed on a mobile phone. 2. Too fast. The plot develops too fast and there is no foreshadowing. 3. The description is a bit stiff, and some are just like awkward chat. Although he is a novice author, he still needs to keep learning. After all, excellent authors are always learning to continuously improve their writing abilities and writing skills. After reading dozens of chapters, it's not my favorite type. The plot is too fast, lacks some logic, and there are almost no causes and consequences. . . Neutral rating
Rubbish
In reality, such people should have been dissected and studied long ago, right?









