Nightmare Desperate Situation

Very good. The writing and plot are both great! Such wonderful works should not remain unknown

The more I look at it, the worse it becomes. There are too many flaws. 1. The sister's best friend seems to have a crush on the male protagonist, but the male protagonist has no feelings for her. Is it necessary to write this emotional line? 2. The male protagonist seems to lack love? After graduation, I couldn't find a job and stayed at home and got a nightmare.

The book is not bad, but there are too many dramas in the realistic part and too little in the nightmare world. No one likes to watch the bullshit of real society.

The subject matter is good and the writing is OK, but it's a bit lacking.

After reading the comments, I found that a lot of them were about realistic stories with too many plots. If you don't want to make money, just keep writing more realistic stories.

It was okay in the early stage, but after 100 pictures, I felt a little tired of aesthetics. The whole process was muscular and reckless. What's the point of practicing martial arts? Forget about building muscles, you don't need any skills

The writing is quite good, but too little. I hope it can develop in an inhuman direction in the future.

Overall, it's broad, but the sense of immersion is not that strong, that's my personal feeling. It's like an upgrade of seeds, I think it's a bit cloudy

I've watched 70, it's very good, and I'll probably watch it again in the future.

1. The content and text are smooth. 2. The male protagonist is decisive in killing and has strong fighting ability. The plot is exciting, exciting, and full of excitement. 3. The contradiction between combat effectiveness and deterrence. The killers of the Wang family thought that unless the opponent was a quasi-grandmaster or a third-level enhanced person, the protagonist and coach Chen Ping would be doomed. As a result, the protagonist, who was touched by Chen Guangming, was easily eliminated and had no resistance at all. It was worse than the hotel's reformers and the Blue Leopard traitors who had attacked and defended for several rounds. 4. The male protagonist eliminated the enemy Wang family and brought arms from the Wang family arsenal to a desperate world. Perhaps because he brought too many, half of the two boxes of arms were lost and there was still one gun left. Moreover, there were still many guns, explosives, and grenades in the Wang family arsenal. In addition to the mandatory missions every seven days, the protagonist can travel through and escape at will. Wouldn't it be better to bring some weapons in batches? The remaining rifles, grenades, and explosives in the Wang family's arsenal are still very useful. Although the protagonist can manifest them at will, it requires experience points, which are never enough. 5. You can gain experience by destroying monsters. The protagonist sometimes focuses on cleaning up elite monsters. Ordinary monsters transformed into ordinary residents will not carry their corpses back after being destroyed. They can be used as flower fertilizer or fireplace fuel for nurseries. Even if the replenished vitality and increased protection are short and the experience value is short, it is still good. After all, there are only a limited number of residents in the urban area when traveling through a small town, and there are fewer monsters to clean up. 6. After the protagonist defeated the monsters after time travel, he found that various experiences were dropped, but many of the experiences were converted into general experience because the protagonist had no skills. For example, 5 common experiences such as swordsmanship and riding can be converted into 1 general experience. The protagonist met a netizen on the Internet who could understand the background of the town. The netizen provided a learning video of a two-handed sword. The protagonist saved a lot of swordsmanship experience after learning it, but the protagonist was not very active and did not ask netizens if they had other skills to learn.