
Cyber netherworld: I Kill Gods in Night City
by Fourth Jhana
About This Novel
[Not the same person! Original cyber myth! ]AI gods are high in the clouds, enslaving all living beings and cannibalizing people's hearts. Until I return from the grave of data, the electronic ghost is driven by me, the code of the dead is at my disposal. Create "Cyber Netherworld", let the demons and monsters sweep across the world, level the thrones of immortals and Buddhas, and crush all hypocritical divinities!
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Official(2)Scraped 20d ago
Some thoughts on the overall concept of this book
1. This book is not a fan based on the world view of the cyberpunk board game, so I don't know why you wrote "Night City" and "Wanderer". Can't you give your city an original name? "Wanderers" are a group that resists capital exploitation. It is reasonable for an original worldview to have this concept, but you don't have to stick to this name. I think it is better to translate it into traditional Chinese as "nomads", or you can create your own name. So overall, I think you are a bit nondescript. You want to be original, but you are not completely open-minded. It is specious. 2. You want to combine cyberpunk and fantasy. This is conceptually feasible, but I think there is something wrong with your actual writing. You see, there are also rich occult elements in 2077, but it is more of a metaphor on a symbolic level and a clue to advance the plot. However, it is not actually an element of the plot. It is the inevitable spiritual hollowness of high-tech and low life. It is the tragic background of cyberpunk. It is the rebellion against destiny and the dissolution of the sacred. As an online novel, even if your cyberpunk does not have a tragic core, but you have actually added fantasy elements, it will add superfluous information and fragment the picture. 3. Why do I think science fiction and fantasy conflict in terms of the physical attributes of the plot? Because fantasy inherits the intuition and anti-rationality in traditional Chinese thought and culture, emphasizing understanding rather than logic. As the name implies, it is essentially mysticism, which is completely different from the West. This is why you can see many novels that combine technology and magic, because magic has a theoretical framework and a magic model, which is essentially just a method of controlling the flow of energy such as magic. It can be directly controlled by the human body, can be quantified, and is a tool for seeking external objects. It can be incorporated into the natural science system, and of course it can also be compatible with technology. Looking back at fantasy, what is Tao, what is emptiness, what is the relationship between these and Qi, how did the golden elixir Yuanying come from, and what is the difference between forgetfulness, ruthlessness, and unfeeling? In Western fantasy practice, you only need to step by step to improve your magic power and learn more knowledge. The most you can do is to strive for the priesthood and divine status when you become a god, and your power will fly off. Fantasy practice also requires the cultivation of mind, cause and effect, and dual cultivation of life and life. Can you tell me what the principle is? "I'm thinking" and "I'm enlightened". After enlightening for a moment, the realm breaks through. How can this be combined with technology? I saw two cases of combining cyberpunk and fantasy fairy tales, and there were some problems in the middle and later stages. But at present, the combination of these two themes is still in the cutting-edge exploration stage and may not be feasible. I suggest you think carefully about it.
I have read the author's old books all the way through. It has a personal style and is not bad at all. It is a new and original book. The plot is good so far, but the introduction is too confusing. Ignore the introduction and it is a very good book.
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Official(2)Scraped 20d ago
Some thoughts on the overall concept of this book
1. This book is not a fan based on the world view of the cyberpunk board game, so I don't know why you wrote "Night City" and "Wanderer". Can't you give your city an original name? "Wanderers" are a group that resists capital exploitation. It is reasonable for an original worldview to have this concept, but you don't have to stick to this name. I think it is better to translate it into traditional Chinese as "nomads", or you can create your own name. So overall, I think you are a bit nondescript. You want to be original, but you are not completely open-minded. It is specious. 2. You want to combine cyberpunk and fantasy. This is conceptually feasible, but I think there is something wrong with your actual writing. You see, there are also rich occult elements in 2077, but it is more of a metaphor on a symbolic level and a clue to advance the plot. However, it is not actually an element of the plot. It is the inevitable spiritual hollowness of high-tech and low life. It is the tragic background of cyberpunk. It is the rebellion against destiny and the dissolution of the sacred. As an online novel, even if your cyberpunk does not have a tragic core, but you have actually added fantasy elements, it will add superfluous information and fragment the picture. 3. Why do I think science fiction and fantasy conflict in terms of the physical attributes of the plot? Because fantasy inherits the intuition and anti-rationality in traditional Chinese thought and culture, emphasizing understanding rather than logic. As the name implies, it is essentially mysticism, which is completely different from the West. This is why you can see many novels that combine technology and magic, because magic has a theoretical framework and a magic model, which is essentially just a method of controlling the flow of energy such as magic. It can be directly controlled by the human body, can be quantified, and is a tool for seeking external objects. It can be incorporated into the natural science system, and of course it can also be compatible with technology. Looking back at fantasy, what is Tao, what is emptiness, what is the relationship between these and Qi, how did the golden elixir Yuanying come from, and what is the difference between forgetfulness, ruthlessness, and unfeeling? In Western fantasy practice, you only need to step by step to improve your magic power and learn more knowledge. The most you can do is to strive for the priesthood and divine status when you become a god, and your power will fly off. Fantasy practice also requires the cultivation of mind, cause and effect, and dual cultivation of life and life. Can you tell me what the principle is? "I'm thinking" and "I'm enlightened". After enlightening for a moment, the realm breaks through. How can this be combined with technology? I saw two cases of combining cyberpunk and fantasy fairy tales, and there were some problems in the middle and later stages. But at present, the combination of these two themes is still in the cutting-edge exploration stage and may not be feasible. I suggest you think carefully about it.
I have read the author's old books all the way through. It has a personal style and is not bad at all. It is a new and original book. The plot is good so far, but the introduction is too confusing. Ignore the introduction and it is a very good book.









