I Have a Mountain

If you don't write well, you won't let others talk about it? Tell me about it yourself, the conversation between selling ginseng and the two bosses who bought ginseng, and the plot and conversation about you buying the vegetable greenhouse. How many people have you poisoned? So many readers asked you to revise it, and you even said that you wrote it like this to raise the bar. I really want to ask you in person that a greenhouse per acre of land costs 3 million yuan. What are you going to plant to repay the cost? Even if you say that you are from a rural area, you will understand what is going on. I feel that only the author is from a rural area, and the protagonist said that he could not tell his family before he discovered ginseng and went to sell it. If you say that you are afraid that you will not be able to explain the origin of the ginseng, and you bring home a greenhouse worth 3 million acres of land, then how are you going to explain it? Did he win the lottery? In the beginning, the protagonist earns more than 3,000 yuan a month. Haha, he has to plan carefully before doing anything and buying anything. His wife divorced the protagonist because he couldn't live this kind of life. How long ago did he spend more than 10 million to buy a greenhouse to grow vegetables? Are you crazy, the author, or is the protagonist crazy? If this is considered to be a slander against you, has the author ever seen a real slanderer? I haven't seen many readers discussing this issue in QQ Reading, but readers on QQ Reader asked you to revise this plot. Don't you have any idea? You pretended to be cool and said you would not revise it, but when readers read it carefully, they would know why it was written like this. Please, don't you know how many readers died because of this plot?

I don't know why, but I've been getting a lot of bad press since this book was put on the shelves. It's my first time writing a book, and I really can't take into account some aspects, and the plot arrangement may not be very reasonable, but I'm also working hard to learn and make changes, and I also care about some of the suggestions you give me. But what kind of mentality do those who are black purely for the sake of being black have? Aloft, looking down at the world? Just typing a few words negates all the author's efforts? A senior told me not to pay attention to those words and just work hard to write the words. Well, although I listened, I always felt a little uncomfortable when I saw some remarks. If you like this book, just read it slowly. If you don't like it, just laugh it off. There is no need to rush out of the door...

Reading your novel reminds me of my childhood. It's really good. I hope it's not too fantasy. It's really good. It's a good book.

This book is still very good, but it makes me fall asleep while reading it. Here are some comments. First: Although this book has written a lot of customs, I suggest that these can be reduced in the future. After all, different places in the north and south have customs. What you write about is your local customs, and I don't know where this place is. You write so much that it is all vague. For example, there is a paragraph about Laba porridge. Each part is basically the same but there are some differences. There is no need to write it so clearly. There is still a lot of room for improvement in this sort of thing. Second: Regarding the description of children, it is understandable that the author is from a single-parent family, but the description of children is indeed too much. It is recommended that children should be well-behaved, sensible, and cute. There is no need to write so many other messy things. In fact, the description of children can be summarized into several large chapters, such as what happened to them in school. I know the emotions after my parents divorced. Trick-or-treating with friends, and suggestions for women around fathers. You can write to Little Adult. I believe these will be more interesting. Third: This book is seriously off-topic. The author has obviously deliberately downplayed the matter of sitting on the mountain. He has been telling the story of life among the few friends in a nonchalant manner. In this way, it is easy to lose the meaning of the book. The main line should be drawn back to the mountain. Here are some suggestions Don't write so much about things that don't matter. Make the most of the mountain. The lake water can make wine. There are so many people who drink in their hearts, but few can do this. There should be a better story about two brothers, and some threads should be drawn into military history. Since there is such a big mountain, it cannot be so peaceful. There should also be some animals in the mountain. Your book is already considered a fantasy novel. It is impossible for the protagonist to live such a peaceful life. You should know what you need to know, and you should also practice the secrets that need to be practiced. Otherwise this book will really fade away.

Regarding the price of greenhouses, many people have indeed given very correct opinions. When I looked at the information and looked at the computer, I found the most intelligent and expensive one. There may be deviations in price, and there have been many criticisms, but I have no intention of changing it back. Come on, because this is originally a threshold I set. As for why I set this threshold, I will mention it later. Friends from the countryside will probably understand this. As for how to get back the money, you will understand it as long as you read this book carefully.

I am born in the 1980s and came from a rural area. Like the author, I am also a single father. I feel that this book is generally more realistic. I personally like it more. I have read Chapter 189, but it always feels too bland and has a feeling of water. First, there are too few Goldfinger scenes. Second, there is no progress at all in the relationship between the male protagonist and others. I feel that the starting point is too high, with tens of millions of dollars at the beginning, but then it turns out to be so bland after more than 100 chapters, which is not very logical. If it continues like this, I guess this book is really worthless. Also, I read the book review written by the author himself, and I feel that the author is a bit unable to listen to everyone's opinions. This is just my personal opinion. I hope the author will forgive me for being blunt.

The author has no life experience? 9? 4 He lives in a dream all day, right? One acre of glass greenhouse costs RMB 3 million+? You won't lose money if you grow gold, right?

Are there any book friends who have read for 8000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

Are there any book friends who have read for 8000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

Don't say that bluntly. If you don't have the strength, don't say that. Not only will it make people laugh, but you may also get hurt. Living well is the most important thing.