
Keeping Love at Risk
About This Novel
There are feelings and heartless, heartless and feelings. Don't ask about the source of love, but ask for what your heart desires. Author: "What do you want to do?" Jun Shu: "Let me give everything back." Author: "Okay, you are really a heartless person." Jun Shu: "It's better to have peace of mind... It's not what I should think about." Author: "We've known each other for so long, and it really hasn't changed at all." Jun Shu: "Yeah." After Jun Shu left, I slowly opened my eyes and realized that it was just a dream. , A long, long dream...
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Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
Looking forward to updates, if the author needs a book cover
Author, you don't want to update the article anymore, are you going to abandon it?
More, more, more. There is always more water than plot
Use poetry at the beginning, poetry in the middle, and poetry at the end. Buried and buried, layer after layer of foreshadowings were buried. It should be said that you are embarrassed, but it is still in vain. I started to talk awkwardly, but then I became dumb... The characters feel like they need to change their style of painting...
It's such a mess, why do I feel like the previous and later chapters are not connected? There are so many descriptions of appearance, are you writing about people or plot? I can't even separate paragraphs, and some sentences still read strangely.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
Looking forward to updates, if the author needs a book cover
Author, you don't want to update the article anymore, are you going to abandon it?
More, more, more. There is always more water than plot
Use poetry at the beginning, poetry in the middle, and poetry at the end. Buried and buried, layer after layer of foreshadowings were buried. It should be said that you are embarrassed, but it is still in vain. I started to talk awkwardly, but then I became dumb... The characters feel like they need to change their style of painting...
It's such a mess, why do I feel like the previous and later chapters are not connected? There are so many descriptions of appearance, are you writing about people or plot? I can't even separate paragraphs, and some sentences still read strangely.






