Chronicle of the Rebirth of Mrs. Zhou

Sometimes I really want to write a novel, but I feel that my writing is not good enough. Then every time I read a novel written by the author, I feel that the author's writing is really great, and I also learned some writing methods from it!

I think the author should highlight Mrs. Zhou's maturity and maturity. Otherwise, why wouldn't you change the title of the book and call it "Old Lady"? For example, people become better with age, become more knowledgeable, etc. . . . .

I quite like this book. After reading it all at once, I felt like I couldn't stop. Praise!

I read Chapter 30, but the preface does not match the postscript, and I find it inexplicable! The story is incoherent!

It stands to reason that after the heroine comes back from rebirth, that 💰 should not be money, right? The previous chapters mentioned that they were robbed because of six yuan, and the heroine's grandfather's family is not a wealthy family, and can easily get thousands of dollars. In those days, the family was not so rich. Secondly, the current politics does not explain it. Even if it is viewed in a parallel space, it is too far. Third, the narrative is unclear and the narrative is unclear.

After reading a few pages of this book, I couldn't stand it anymore. In the age of rebirth, people could just write about prices and things without thinking about it. It's so divorced from reality! Since the protagonist is called old lady after being reborn, why does she keep calling her an old lady? I can't stand it!

It is better to be reborn as a young person, and she is not smart even when she is an old lady. The soul of an old lady is still looking for a little fresh meat, which is unbearable.

Not coherent at all. Don't you know there are many missing authors?

To be honest, the writing is good, although the story jumps at a fast pace, but emotionally it is too fake. Even if I lived to be eighty and still single in my previous life, I am actually very selfish in this life, especially in relationships. In the article, Ma Bayi is like a loser. Simple feelings cannot match love at first sight. Maybe Mrs. Zhou feels that she is too unreal and not worthy of Ma Bayi. (Isn't it possible for a big kid who makes money in finance to treat people in his field as fools? I have no brains for making money!) If Si Xiaoxianrou hadn't turned into a vixen later on, I would have treated the heroine like green tea! [Emot=default,01/]

Although the things in the early stage are exaggerated, the viewers can understand them and can take them into account in a small way. But in the later stage, it is completely unsatisfactory, especially after Si appears.