Traveling Through the World of Beasts: the Domineering Beast King is Addicted to Pets
by Yun Fengming
About This Novel
Yan Ya never dreamed that one day she would travel to the orc continent where civilization was in ancient times. There was no iron, no electricity, no fire, and no meat to eat! Yingying... Isn't it the orc continent in ancient times? See how she builds houses, makes paper, weaves, and blacksmiths with the orcs to live a prosperous life. Oh, what to do with the man who wants her to give birth to cubs? Forget it, that's the Beast King, you can't beat him!
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Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
How can I put it this way? This heroine is really annoying to watch. I can't stand it anymore.
How to put it this way, this novel is quite interesting, but the author should still be lacking a bit. The early work progressed too fast. Although the heroine is set as a wilderness survival anchor, she is still an ordinary person. She knows too many things, such as building a house, which requires extremely precise things. In my opinion, it is not someone who can tell others how to do it with just a few words without studying for a long time. After all, the heroine's setting is too perfect and there are too many cheats. Under normal circumstances, she should be equipped with a system. There are also requirements and standards for planting various crops. Even if the Beast World Continent has a setting with relatively strong plant growth capabilities, it still needs to be analyzed in detail. It can be seen that the author has put in effort, which is great, but I think some paragraphs can be shortened as much as possible. For example, when introducing how to do something, there can be less description and more dialogue, which will attract people more. Also, I feel that many things after arriving in Baisu's village are moving closer to modern times. The progress of civilization is what everyone wants to see, but it must also be combined with the specific situation. For example, at the place where Wu Jin took out the vacuum-packed pork breasts at the beginning, there was a setting for packaging bags. As we all know, vacuum packaging bags are made of plastic. In a place where only electric lights are popular, vacuum plastic packaging bags are really weird. With later mobile phones and signal towers, I think that even if there is a place that is 500 years more advanced than our civilization, one person, plus a robot, can turn a group of raw orcs into people who can use electric lights and make clothes within 200 years. In addition, Bai Su's village is set to have more than 10,000 people. Although it looks like a lot, it is still not enough to actually distribute it to various jobs. I hope the author can improve a little bit. This is the first time I post such a long book review. Thank you for reading this.
Ordinary life, a good novel, 1V1
I haven't finished reading it, and I think the style of writing is not very mature.
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Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
How can I put it this way? This heroine is really annoying to watch. I can't stand it anymore.
How to put it this way, this novel is quite interesting, but the author should still be lacking a bit. The early work progressed too fast. Although the heroine is set as a wilderness survival anchor, she is still an ordinary person. She knows too many things, such as building a house, which requires extremely precise things. In my opinion, it is not someone who can tell others how to do it with just a few words without studying for a long time. After all, the heroine's setting is too perfect and there are too many cheats. Under normal circumstances, she should be equipped with a system. There are also requirements and standards for planting various crops. Even if the Beast World Continent has a setting with relatively strong plant growth capabilities, it still needs to be analyzed in detail. It can be seen that the author has put in effort, which is great, but I think some paragraphs can be shortened as much as possible. For example, when introducing how to do something, there can be less description and more dialogue, which will attract people more. Also, I feel that many things after arriving in Baisu's village are moving closer to modern times. The progress of civilization is what everyone wants to see, but it must also be combined with the specific situation. For example, at the place where Wu Jin took out the vacuum-packed pork breasts at the beginning, there was a setting for packaging bags. As we all know, vacuum packaging bags are made of plastic. In a place where only electric lights are popular, vacuum plastic packaging bags are really weird. With later mobile phones and signal towers, I think that even if there is a place that is 500 years more advanced than our civilization, one person, plus a robot, can turn a group of raw orcs into people who can use electric lights and make clothes within 200 years. In addition, Bai Su's village is set to have more than 10,000 people. Although it looks like a lot, it is still not enough to actually distribute it to various jobs. I hope the author can improve a little bit. This is the first time I post such a long book review. Thank you for reading this.
Ordinary life, a good novel, 1V1
I haven't finished reading it, and I think the style of writing is not very mature.
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