Three Lives Order

Three Lives Order

by Original Writer Duan Yinan

Length:
52Kwords27chapters
Latest:
Ch. 27大结局
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About This Novel

I heard... People will pass through Naihe Bridge and drink a bowl of Meng Po soup after death... Will she do the same? "I have never seen an immortal in this underworld." After death, black and white will take their lives and be sent to the underworld. The spirit monsters are brought back to their original form by the reincarnation mirror in the ninth heaven to practice again, or... They can choose to enter the underworld. There will be a mysterious person here to pick up the soul and send it to the gate of the underworld. This person's appearance was unclear. He was wearing a straw hat and black clothes, and his voice sounded very vicissitudes of life. So far, this is the first time for this old man to see the river-crossing bridge on the edge of the underworld and the immortal. This man is dressed in white, and he is shocked at the first sight! The cold aura on his body did not blend well with the pain on his face. This was the first time he saw an immortal, because for several years, he had received souls. He came to find a person, no, a soul, a soul that he buried with his own hands. He has been here many times. "After all, immortals and demons have different paths. At this time, the soul is no longer the same person. Even if you see her, you can't be together." But even so, the person who cultivates immortality is surrounded by immortality after all, and such a beautiful person will be trapped by love. He is here like this, on the edge of the underworld, at the place leading to the underworld, waiting for that person, one day, two days, one month, half a year, three years... Su Jin, if there is an afterlife, are you willing to go to the human world with me. Go to the places we have been together, see your favorite peach blossoms, go to festivals, go to the market, watch the sunrise, and your favorite sweet-scented osmanthus cake.

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Overall, the plot is okay, but the text narration is a bit unable to suppress the plot. For example, the male protagonist is inexplicably attracted to the female protagonist, which is a bit abrupt. And there was some dissuasion in the early stage. I personally felt that the heroine was a third party in the early stage, and then it was really inappropriate to portray another woman as green tea. Regarding the Emperor of Heaven, what can I say? I feel that this character has no charm at all. I don't know what kind of Emperor of Heaven you want to create. Anyway, after watching it, I felt that this Emperor of Heaven is a bit fatuous and incompetent. As for the plot of Descend to Earth, it felt weird, and many things were not well described. Anyway, this love triangle gave me a bad feeling. As for the father of the heroine of the demon world, I feel that he is not suitable to be the leader. I know I don't like it when I say this, but I feel that he is a little motivated and does not care about the overall situation. In the demon world, not to mention, there is some water. The heroine is very powerful in the later stage, but she can't understand it at all. But for a novel of only 50,000 words, it's okay. The writing is okay, but some punctuation marks are confusing and the paragraphing is not clear. The above are just my personal thoughts. I don't like to criticize them lightly. The whole book is still readable. Come on!

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