This Starship is Unusual

Multiple versions of this novel can be developed For example, how did the Federation go from being weak to being so powerful now? For example, how did technology develop from three dimensions to multiple dimensions? How can this army develop if it doesn't work? Or how did this starship system come about? There are also logistics companies, there are many, many, And the author, you can fill in the hole of the protagonist's father (you can also write a separate novel )

Let me tell you, our team is blue and the enemy is red. Let's talk about blue's plan, defense, contain the enemy in the middle, cannon fodder in the top lane and die, rely on the center in the bottom lane and choose to give up, the number of active people is 10-13, and the rest are not online. The red plan is on the road to be determined. The high combat power of the middle lane can contain most of the opponent's firepower to make a breakthrough from the top or bottom lane. Since our side gave up the bottom lane, the red side used blitzkrieg and lead attack, attacking with more and less, and defeated them one by one. After besieging the leader to death, they did not attack the city but only attacked the ships. When the blue team finally had no ships to attack, they won. Alas, I've been raising fish for two months and it's all gone. Let's become a krypton gold boss next season.

The book is quite novel, and the content is good, but the rhythm of the plot feels a bit slow, but sometimes the jumps are very fast, which seems to be watery, but the plot advances very quickly. Then, what I am a little speechless about is that adventure is about exploring unknown, novel and special places, rather than mindless suicide. (The protagonist goes to a different universe but doesn't go to a dangerous place. Isn't it boring? The reason is that he is an explorer... This is to commit suicide, that is, it is okay to be a protagonist.) In addition, regarding the level of the alien universe, the place where the protagonist goes is not safe, but it really doesn't feel too dangerous. It is basically just pushing all the way, and it is over in one or two chapters, without any sense of adventure at all. It is still considered a good book in the book shortage, or if you have the patience, it is not bad.

No, it seems like I need to gain some weight!

"The Heavens: The Development of a Certain Star's Civilization" Introduction: I know you don't believe it, but I really traveled through time and became a ball, a big and bright one. Of course, you can also call me the Lord of the Radiant Sun, the God of radiance and glory, the leader of the Holy Sun civilization, the disruptor of the heavens... ... MarvelStarCraft 2Warhammer 40kThree Body [Halo] [Starship Troopers] [Alien] [Independence Day] [...] (There are film and television novels and original works) ... PS: There are film and television games as well as original creations in the shuttle world. 40% Of the plot is still about civilization development and the expansion of the main world (original).

It's so bad, no wonder the author had to change his account. The novels he wrote under his previous account were very bad. I guess the author himself discovered that if he didn't change his account, it would be over. I didn't expect that he still wouldn't change his account after changing his account. What he wrote the year before last was okay, but what he wrote after that was all nonsense!

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The author recommends reading a book: My Battleship Can Be Upgraded. Reading this book will be very helpful for you to write this book.

The previous part about writing about the protagonist was very good, but after writing an explanatory chapter, I started to say that the protagonist of this book is half the protagonist, and civilization is half the protagonist. It's okay if you occasionally write about the discovery of civilization, major events, and new enemies. It's okay to occasionally write about the battlefield situations where the protagonist participates. The problem is that sometimes it feels a bit watery and a bit like trying to trick a dog into killing the two or three chapters. In the past, I mainly wrote about the protagonist, but now I write about the protagonist half and half, which feels a bit nondescript. If the author wants to write civilized articles, he can open a new book later. Moreover, the explanations in some subsequent chapters take up half of the chapter content, and there is too much data. I think it is enough to write down the changes in the data after the upgrade. There is no need to write it all out. For example, 5% before upgrade and 10% after upgrade are written as attack immunity 5% before upgrade and 10% after upgrade, which roughly means this. Instead of writing everything out, it will give people the impression that there is too much data and is very watery.

Did you open a trumpet account and I was very familiar with it after just reading a few chapters? It seems to be called Deep Space Killing or something like that. It has more than 900 chapters and then Eunuch. It's very interesting and it's your setting. To be honest, have you opened a trumpet account and rewritten it?