The First Killer Dark Concubine
by ル
About This Novel
The world's number one killer civet cat has dark powers, and its soul has traveled to the Ximing Continent. The third young lady of the Ouyang family was born useless, unable to cultivate Xuan Qi, and was ridiculed by the world. What kind of light will shine when she becomes her? And why does this sinister, shameless and beautiful man always appear by her side when she is most miserable, helpless, and in need? In this case, let's join hands with Ren Xiaoyao!
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Official(40)Scraped 2mo ago
Good! (Although this reply only has two words, it can be said to be concise and comprehensive, which fully shows the replyer's solid writing skills and easy commenting skills. I really admire it! It ends with an exclamation mark, a finishing touch, and a wonderful pen that echoes the previous article. It expresses the replyer's feelings vividly, giving people infinite touching and melancholy, and a natural feeling. It is really the best reply.
Some small opinions
The ending was too hasty. There is no plot or any suspense, which makes it impossible to admire its conception. Hope to improve in the next book.
Sir the author. Didn't you check it when you were writing this book? There are many chapters in the middle that I can't keep up with. I can hardly keep up with my thinking. And the chapters are too confusing. The above does not follow the following. I can't understand. 🤐🤐🤐
Too messy
The writing was so messy that I gave up after reading Chapter 69. Each chapter could not be connected to the beginning of another chapter. I don't know how the relationship between the male and female protagonists was so deep. It was not clear when the heroine's power was established. I felt that she had power all of a sudden. I didn't recognize many of the names in it, and I was dizzy.
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Community(0)
Official(40)Scraped 2mo ago
Good! (Although this reply only has two words, it can be said to be concise and comprehensive, which fully shows the replyer's solid writing skills and easy commenting skills. I really admire it! It ends with an exclamation mark, a finishing touch, and a wonderful pen that echoes the previous article. It expresses the replyer's feelings vividly, giving people infinite touching and melancholy, and a natural feeling. It is really the best reply.
Some small opinions
The ending was too hasty. There is no plot or any suspense, which makes it impossible to admire its conception. Hope to improve in the next book.
Sir the author. Didn't you check it when you were writing this book? There are many chapters in the middle that I can't keep up with. I can hardly keep up with my thinking. And the chapters are too confusing. The above does not follow the following. I can't understand. 🤐🤐🤐
Too messy
The writing was so messy that I gave up after reading Chapter 69. Each chapter could not be connected to the beginning of another chapter. I don't know how the relationship between the male and female protagonists was so deep. It was not clear when the heroine's power was established. I felt that she had power all of a sudden. I didn't recognize many of the names in it, and I was dizzy.
Ah
Haha*^O^*
.
Of
.
Good
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