Don't Even Think About Conquering Me
About This Novel
The new book "Comprehensive Manga: Starting from the Soul Society and Cutting Through All Worlds" please collect it and read it. Ron travels through the otome game world, and both otome players and female NPCs want to attack him! However, because of the bizarre way of death in the galgame game world, Ron now only wants to fight monsters and become the strongest NPC in the world! Player 1: "Damn it, why can't this NPC's favorability level be increased at all?" Player 2: "The boss is asking for guidance. He can act cute, act coquettishly, and make cooing noises." Ron: "I punch one monster at a time, it's useless! What! You're a man, so I'll punch you twice, it's even more useless!"
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Official(18)Scraped 17d ago
What a coincidence
Hahahaha, let's have a fight with you upstairs😘
Build a check-in building and collect supporting actors(´▽｀)
This is my first time writing something original, so please forgive me if it's not good (╯╰)
The content is pretty good, but the plot is too slow.
First of all, the protagonist's strength is too suppressed, and secondly, no one likes to see a weak protagonist. Although you have written a girl who is very strong in this world, can the experience and confidence of the protagonist in the previous few worlds stand up to the polishing of several years? It is appropriate to open a plug-in for the protagonist, but he cannot play a big role at the moment. If there are some supporting roles, if it is just a few simple pictures, then try not to describe too much, otherwise there will be too much plot and others will be annoyed after watching it.
The author does not want to irritate
It was okay in the beginning, but starting from Chapter 247 to around Chapter 270, you wrote about the same battle, fighting the same person, and even the protagonist himself did not appear. There are more than 20 chapters, it's so damn watery, others are just filling it with water, so you are filling the sea with water. After reading these 20 chapters, I was so disgusted that I couldn't help but come here to comment. Author, if you can't figure out the plot, you can take your time, but don't do it like this. You'll enjoy reading it at the beginning, but you'll get more and more annoyed after reading it. You are 6, you are 6, I have looked at more than 200 pictures, and suddenly I came across this one, you are really 6! It's okay in front of you, but I'll deduct a lot of points for watering down, and I'll give you 1 star off.
Very good, I hope you can create a group
Hope, hope, hope you can create a group
It sets up many contradictions and conflicts. Rights do not produce strength, and strength does not produce rights. The writing is very strange.
What does this say? Why does it smell like a female video? After all, the male protagonist's sister is more or less a noble. A man who is out to sell has been pestering the female protagonist. Her sister actually has the strength not to do anything directly, but has to explain to him? Moreover, the two sisters of the male protagonist mentioned earlier are better than the male protagonist now, but the tax that has been delayed for three years still needs to be solved by the male protagonist? Lord-level monsters are hard to find, so why don't you hunt more of them? It looks very strange, and there are many conflicting points in the setting. It is really a classic example that rights do not produce rights, and rights do not produce strength. Also, the male protagonist has experienced so many worlds in the past and has been a boss so many times. His sister was harassed by others and then his sister asked him to help, and he still looked unhappy. Is this the thinking of a normal person? And if it's not from another world, why does it feel so much like urban literature? Although the male protagonist in the previous chapter was a panelist and could easily encounter monsters in a matter of seconds, didn't he need time or experience in the middle? It feels like a person in his 20s, unlike someone who has traveled through other worlds before. The writing is inexplicable, and the male protagonist will explain what he has done. I don't understand it. What's more refreshing, shouldn't it be about what kind of person the male protagonist is and what he did, and then the player or someone else explains it?
Can the author praise me? Ha ha
I'm so annoyed as I write this. It's the first time I've seen someone write otherworldly stories back into urban literature. It's extremely toxic to people born in the 200s.
Update soon, it's not enough to watch.
Give some support to the author, come on
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Community(0)
Official(18)Scraped 17d ago
What a coincidence
Hahahaha, let's have a fight with you upstairs😘
Build a check-in building and collect supporting actors(´▽｀)
This is my first time writing something original, so please forgive me if it's not good (╯╰)
The content is pretty good, but the plot is too slow.
First of all, the protagonist's strength is too suppressed, and secondly, no one likes to see a weak protagonist. Although you have written a girl who is very strong in this world, can the experience and confidence of the protagonist in the previous few worlds stand up to the polishing of several years? It is appropriate to open a plug-in for the protagonist, but he cannot play a big role at the moment. If there are some supporting roles, if it is just a few simple pictures, then try not to describe too much, otherwise there will be too much plot and others will be annoyed after watching it.
The author does not want to irritate
It was okay in the beginning, but starting from Chapter 247 to around Chapter 270, you wrote about the same battle, fighting the same person, and even the protagonist himself did not appear. There are more than 20 chapters, it's so damn watery, others are just filling it with water, so you are filling the sea with water. After reading these 20 chapters, I was so disgusted that I couldn't help but come here to comment. Author, if you can't figure out the plot, you can take your time, but don't do it like this. You'll enjoy reading it at the beginning, but you'll get more and more annoyed after reading it. You are 6, you are 6, I have looked at more than 200 pictures, and suddenly I came across this one, you are really 6! It's okay in front of you, but I'll deduct a lot of points for watering down, and I'll give you 1 star off.
Very good, I hope you can create a group
Hope, hope, hope you can create a group
It sets up many contradictions and conflicts. Rights do not produce strength, and strength does not produce rights. The writing is very strange.
What does this say? Why does it smell like a female video? After all, the male protagonist's sister is more or less a noble. A man who is out to sell has been pestering the female protagonist. Her sister actually has the strength not to do anything directly, but has to explain to him? Moreover, the two sisters of the male protagonist mentioned earlier are better than the male protagonist now, but the tax that has been delayed for three years still needs to be solved by the male protagonist? Lord-level monsters are hard to find, so why don't you hunt more of them? It looks very strange, and there are many conflicting points in the setting. It is really a classic example that rights do not produce rights, and rights do not produce strength. Also, the male protagonist has experienced so many worlds in the past and has been a boss so many times. His sister was harassed by others and then his sister asked him to help, and he still looked unhappy. Is this the thinking of a normal person? And if it's not from another world, why does it feel so much like urban literature? Although the male protagonist in the previous chapter was a panelist and could easily encounter monsters in a matter of seconds, didn't he need time or experience in the middle? It feels like a person in his 20s, unlike someone who has traveled through other worlds before. The writing is inexplicable, and the male protagonist will explain what he has done. I don't understand it. What's more refreshing, shouldn't it be about what kind of person the male protagonist is and what he did, and then the player or someone else explains it?
Can the author praise me? Ha ha
I'm so annoyed as I write this. It's the first time I've seen someone write otherworldly stories back into urban literature. It's extremely toxic to people born in the 200s.
Update soon, it's not enough to watch.
Give some support to the author, come on
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