Apprentice of the Heavens

Sure enough, all the idiots have realized that the jade pendant can help people get rid of distracting thoughts and become clear and clear! In the end, he went to rob Huang Rong. I really don't believe that women in ancient times were really easy to see. You, a master of martial arts, can't see the pores on her face? How horny are you? Did he want to express that it was his first time traveling and he had no experience, so he started to date women from the beginning? A protagonist like you must be the devil's food in the end! Without the heart of a seeker, the fruit of the Tao can only be taken away by the devil. You don't even know whether your thoughts are your own.

It just makes no sense. The more I read it, the more frustrated I feel. The title is clearly about Killing Decisively, but when I wrote it, it was a batch of Our Lady.

It's pretty good. Let's just say that the quality of the protagonist is okay. At least it seems to make people feel comfortable and not so worried.

The writing is a mess, very messy, and it talks about the plot but does not write it according to the plot. Those who have just read the novel are okay, but those who have read the plot have no desire to continue reading😋😑😑😑

Don't write about feelings. It's a bit boring.

You can write about immortals going against the door of creation or mortals fighting against each other.

What rubbish are you writing? Don't learn the existing magical skills, but create your own. You have created your own magical skills when you are only a few years old. How can you find so many magical skills? How can you report them to you after you find them? They just hide and practice by themselves!

Every work is not easy. If it is good, just like it. If it is not good, don't go to the comment area to say it.

If your writing is rubbish, don't write about martial arts, fairy tales, etc.

This protagonist is quite talented