The Universe Begins with Xiaoao

The author can try to create a scene where a beauty saves a hero, and actively smooth out the two martial arts consciousnesses and develop them smoothly. This feels good. By the way, I would like to create a panel to let readers know about his abilities. In addition, this work written by the author is the most interesting and beautiful I have ever read.

How many readers will the author have to dissuade by calling his mother? In ancient times, you had to call yourself mother!

It's so toxic, I almost looked like a nanny after watching dozens of pictures of the main character.

The author's writing style, narrative techniques, and ability to control the plot can only be said to be average. He really shouldn't write about the integrated martial arts background. This puts the author's characters in an awkward state often and prevents readers from integrating well into the book.

Why not destroy Shaolin? I obviously have the ability to write 3 chapters on this one thing, so I can obviously make up for the word count.

Am I not smart enough? The first 20 or so chapters were quite confusing and confusing😶😶...

I can't stand it anymore. The best in the world no longer belongs to the metal system! The female sword A Qing, who has a better gold system, can compete with the characters in No. 1 Under Heaven. It's too confusing!

Write a novel for the first time! Don't do this kind of thing. The first paragraph is about the protagonist, and the next paragraph is about the supporting role. For the first time, I see that the supporting characters have more roles than the protagonists.

The key is to think about it one by one, write all kinds of random things, intersperse

Junior sister Yue Lingshan fell in love with Lin Pingzhi. That happened only after three years of confinement in Linghu Chong. You didn't fall in love with her just by saying you fell in love. I even doubt that you are in love.