
Survival Diary after Tomorrow
by Committee Member Requesting Voting Officer
About This Novel
A virtual game about survival in the apocalypse [After Tomorrow] has become popular all over the world in a short period of time. When I downloaded and registered the game, a bug occurred in the virtual helmet due to the large download memory. However, it was still usable, and therefore I got the bug of the European King.
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Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
Oh ho, it won't be cold anymore, will it?
Is the author still updating? Is the eunuch gone?
suggestion......
First person? You've already lost half of it at the beginning. It's like a running account. It's boring. I don't want to see you write an essay. The number of words is still small and there is still a chance to correct it.
It would be better to change the pronoun
The first person is a bit uncomfortable. The recently released Mingri fanfics are too open-ended. The author is also afraid of going beyond the scope and forcibly suppresses it. It is really uncomfortable to read. This book is not bad so far, but the first person is a bit awkward. The hook of this book is to turn non-chiefs into European emperors. This is common in reality. There are not many tricks in the book. At most, the attributes are better, which is 0t. I don't want to know which tricks are in the book. I want to go beyond the version, but I don't dare. I forcefully suppress it, which is uncomfortable. Isn't reading just for fun? If you don't feel happy, go play games.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
Oh ho, it won't be cold anymore, will it?
Is the author still updating? Is the eunuch gone?
suggestion......
First person? You've already lost half of it at the beginning. It's like a running account. It's boring. I don't want to see you write an essay. The number of words is still small and there is still a chance to correct it.
It would be better to change the pronoun
The first person is a bit uncomfortable. The recently released Mingri fanfics are too open-ended. The author is also afraid of going beyond the scope and forcibly suppresses it. It is really uncomfortable to read. This book is not bad so far, but the first person is a bit awkward. The hook of this book is to turn non-chiefs into European emperors. This is common in reality. There are not many tricks in the book. At most, the attributes are better, which is 0t. I don't want to know which tricks are in the book. I want to go beyond the version, but I don't dare. I forcefully suppress it, which is uncomfortable. Isn't reading just for fun? If you don't feel happy, go play games.









