Wasteland Border Inspector

Let me put it bluntly! Read the first three chapters! The author has good luck and his writing style is okay. But to have so many people watch it, either you have a fan base, or it's just pure luck. Otherwise, your book won't even have the foundation to become popular! First of all, the first point is that you don't have any writing skills at the beginning. You just rely on your writing to increase your appeal, which is useless! Second, the plot is cliche and procrastinating, and the protagonist is emotionally unstable. Simply put, he is imbecile! I already have a premonition that your subsequent writing will be very awkward, so don't even think about it! Third, the golden finger setting is the biggest failure! This is no longer 0 years, big brother! It's already 2025, why are there still such golden fingers? It was left to him by the protagonist's father, haha, that's all! There is an editor who signs a contract for you, but the editor is also blind! Suggestion: Go learn writing skills! Brother, the Qing Dynasty died long ago, can you please stop rebelling against the Qing Dynasty and restore the Ming Dynasty here? ! Now, it is no longer an era when books with good writing become popular! Writing skills, primary and secondary plots, character settings, and emotional lines are all indispensable! Go back and lay the foundation, then come back and write a novel in this era.

It's okay, a little watery. The biggest problem is that you have to know that everyone is reading this book because of the prosecutor + wasteland theme, not the so-called bullshit machinations (the writing is not very good) and the evil forces. If you really want to read these, why did I come to the doomsday theme? I want to seize the real highlights instead of selling others like sheep.

There is no hierarchy. Besides, when the protagonist meets such an awesome person, why is he as honest as a sheep?

Advantages: 1. The content and text are smooth. 2. The protagonist uses his identity as a level prosecutor and uses the civilization collector to search for items, intelligence, skills and talents. He becomes stronger step by step, defeats mutants and builds his home. The plot is more satisfying. Others 1. Most of the happy people in Happy City where the protagonist lives are good people. Although there are disputes among the idealists, original aspirants, and extraordinary people, on the whole, they hope that Happy City will get better. It's a bit idealistic. Even if there is an idealistic Blue Star, there are always careerists and speculators in power. There are always bad people. If not, they will become bad under the influence of interests. 2. The management of Happy City is full of contradictions. Xingfu City has a hydropower station. On the one hand, there is free electricity, free medical care, and free nutrient solution during the flood season. On the other hand, when infected bodies ravage the neighborhood, once the neighborhood does not have enough armed forces to extinguish it spontaneously, in order to prevent the infection, even those who are hiding will be destroyed by gunfire and destroy the neighborhood. 3. The contradictory nature of weapons and equipment management. Explosives are strictly controlled. When an infected body breaks out, the protagonist seizes a small arsenal and finds pistols, rifles, light machine guns, heavy machine guns, and rocket launchers. However, no explosives are found. Theoretically, the manufacturing difficulty of cocktail Molotov cocktails, explosive packets, and grenades may be lower than that of firearms, and from the perspective of destructive power, heavy machine guns and rocket launchers are not necessarily worse than grenades. 4. The contradictory nature of the protagonist's weapon updating. The Mitsubishi Thorn customized by the protagonist is difficult to say whether it is easy to use or not. It may be useful against people, but it is not very useful against infected monsters. The protagonist has not yet fought with people for his life, and whether it is at a checkpoint or in the wild, the protagonist's opponents are mostly infected bodies and monsters. The Mitsubishi Thorn does not have a chopping function, so it is not necessarily easy to use in the wild. The protagonist's triangular thorn worth hundreds of contribution points has not yet been used, but he will soon get a battle armor worth tens of thousands of contribution points. The weapons and armor are updated too fast. 5. The contradictory nature of personnel management in Xingfu City and other fortresses. On the one hand, you can enter the buffer zone at no cost, but you really need to pay a high price to enter the inner city. Later, it was said that some fortresses provide free food and drink and housing. Population is indeed a resource, but wasteland resources are limited. It feels difficult to balance income and expenditure. After the outbreak of infectious diseases subsides, people in the buffer zone can leave at will without any cost. Theoretically, some of the technical personnel may have been trained through the consumption of resources. They can only leave after signing a contract and completing the labor years and realizing the value of their labor. There are no restrictions on freedom. 6. It is too easy to invest in the protagonist and make the protagonist owe favors. The protagonist starts as a checkpoint inspector with great power and high income. Theoretically, it is okay to invest or have high contribution points, happiness coins, rare medicines, intelligence, advanced weapons, precious ores, etc. That the protagonist does not have or lacks. In the early stages of the protagonist's life, Uncle Dong downstairs invests in nutrient solution of low value, and the librarian allows the protagonist to read 10 happiness coins per day, which is not a big consumption. It is not a bad show of goodwill, but it is too cheap to invest in the protagonist's favor. The high-quality precious medicines provided by the bus driver are considered a small investment, but the subsequent tens of thousands of contribution points given to the protagonist by the idealistic elders of Happy City to build a community and the armor worth tens of thousands of contribution points in battle are considered a big investment.

It is a very interesting novel. There is no exaggerated personal invincibility, no neglect of collective strength, no contamination by female sex, and no brainlessness. I hope the author will work hard.

Remember to return it after receiving it, in case the book friend fails to receive it again.

Damn it, I just saw the official response of Happy City after the outbreak of the substitute starfish. This is only right. The official always has a variety of methods and plans, instead of just pursuing personal power like other wasteland novels.

It's okay. It's much better written than the previous one.

It's just that the description of the big scenes is a bit too embarrassing. In the first big scene with the substitute starfish, when dealing with the boss of Zhang Can's infected body, the fried eggs were all stuck on it. We had to have three old men from the Tianyuan community come out to chat with the boss at close range, and try to influence the boss with their talk. This scene was too embarrassing, old man.

This book is not on the same level as the previous one. I suspect the author has other hidden gems.