Beast Control: Evolution Cube

Author, do you know why this book was originally on the QQ reading new book list, and why the score is so poor? The reason is that the plot is very dragging, and now in chapter 70 we have just had the first beast control, which is too tedious.

1 The supporting character Liang Cheng inexplicably becomes enemies with the protagonist and is possessed by a dark creature. It seems that he will appear in a confrontation later. 2 The Awakener mission is to kill the Carrion Rat, but he clearly noticed that something was wrong and did not report it, so the plot was forced 3 Devouring Souls will attack and kill, and the protagonist's combat power is a bit strange (this cannot be considered poison, but it is a bit abrupt, and I have no idea about the protagonist's combat power), as well as the combat power of the Blood Infant Sect later on. If you want to write about combat power, you can add some level details when you get the skills, practice, and training. For example, the power of this sword technique can threaten the Earth Demon level, or something can be killed beyond the level (this type of description of the specific strength level.) And what is the increase of the Black God suit? 4 Tang Ying lends contribution points to the protagonist but asks the protagonist to do things for her. First of all, the talent shown by the protagonist represents strong potential and future, which can be invested, but asking for it directly is very unpleasant, not to mention the way Tang Ying expresses her character is very unpleasant😕. It seems that the thing to help is more important, but I hope the author can consider the value of 1000 contribution points. If it is not equal later, it will be even more poisonous. Moreover, the training room is 10 contribution points/hour, so 1,000 contribution points is completely unnecessary and is a forced gift. Wouldn't it be better to borrow a few contribution points first to try out the training room and then think about doing tasks to earn contribution points? 5 After the college entrance examination results came out, Siyu University came to invite me, which was a bit anticlimactic. There are also a few things that are not bad but are very strange. The appearance of Yu Qingyue is a bit sudden, maybe it is the heroine... I personally think it is better without the heroine. Yuncheng Bad Luck may also be quite uncomfortable forcibly pushing a plot forward. In summary, the author's progress and schedule are not bad, and the writing level is online, but the design of the plot is a bit too abrupt and forced. Since the pace is slow, wouldn't it be better to replace this abruptness with something natural? For example, in the plot of Tang Ying mentioned earlier, if she was acting as an investment, would it be better to find the male protagonist later and ask if she could help, rather than forcing him to do so? , I hope that the subsequent plot will not be too blunt, author, please come on.

There are a lot of bad points. This is the first time I've read a book and given a negative review. Usually I just don't read it and I won't give a negative review. It's really a waste of your good setting. The plot is really better than that written by a primary school student.

This book looks good to me, but why didn't the author update it?

It looks pretty good, why isn't it updated? Isn't it a eunuch?

That Liang Cheng blatantly trapped the protagonist to death and the instructors didn't care about it, but Liang Cheng killed all four members of his team and he was the only one who went back and didn't see the instructors asking him anything, so it was a bit fake.

Don't you think your choice of words is embarrassing? It's completely inconsistent with the background and setting of the times.

Urging for more updates, come on, author

Really, it was the first time I read about beast control. It took me more than seventy chapters to become a beast control master.

The basics were a little slow in the early stage, but started to explode in the later stage. The author will update as soon as possible🤘