Douluo: Choose the Holy Spirit Sect Saint at the Beginning

There are many conflicting settings in the Douluo series, which makes it difficult to write for fans. If you don't understand the settings well, I suggest you go to Zhihu and read the Douluo Continent setting collection summarized by experienced readers. You can avoid many useless settings. In short, come on, author, I wish you can become a platinum master. The setting collection is summarized by old fans. It brings together the settings that are still in use and the basic settings of the Douluo world view, which can help people quickly understand Douluo. Come on, author!

The author's writing skills are so poor. It's outrageous that he lives in a woodshed and is accused of being able to make explosives that can be measured in tons. In his situation, he could afford sugar to make explosives without being malnourished. Moreover, the protagonist's character is too fragmented! The protagonist who risked his life for revenge for his beloved girl at the beginning should at least be a more dedicated person, but in the end, he became a villain after traveling through time. To sum up, it is a completely brainless and cool article. But it also fits the audience of Douluo fans!

To be honest, why do I always like to write emotional dramas with supporting characters, such as Wang Yan and Qiu Ya. Ji Juechen and a certain princess, etc. The key is that he can occupy one or two pieces, which is a bit of a forced hydrology rhythm. It feels a bit more like being a Yue Lao, who can forcefully express feelings for someone who has no feelings. Then there is the matter of taking in a younger brother, giving away resources, and arranging a wife. I have read a book before, in which a rich woman who likes her is given to her best brother. Ex is broken. I don't feel very good about books with this kind of plot. Is there a follow-up plot where a fat boy abuses a girl, and then the girl he abuses falls in love with the protagonist? Don't be too outrageous, okay. The key protagonist returns the favor and crazily digs into the strong ones. Then the protagonist is crazily injured, and then the heroine is also crazily injured. Resurrection in the end, my love. Really outrageous.

The heroine is an original one. The heroine of the original work was given to the bastard, and the princess was given a little brother as a gift. You can even let them be alone. You describe Shi Hao's power every day, Tang Wutong and Xu Sanshi's dual cultivation. I read the fanfic, and you made the original heroine? If you don't want Tang Wutong, just don't make random arrangements. Also, give your little brother a few original female leads. Giving away girls is really poisonous.

It was so frustrating to write, it didn't feel good at all. If you want, just kill them directly and don't wait and see. The author obviously doesn't know how to emphasize the feeling of pleasure. It's true that you can't kill the god directly, otherwise the combat power will collapse. But you can definitely write that the protagonist spent a lot of money and then became half disabled, causing irreversible consequences. It's so fun to read this way! Instead of the protagonist being disabled in the end. Then readers will feel aggrieved after reading this, right? The more I read, the less and less I feel. There aren't many moments where I am happy along the way. You must also be very unhappy if the chapters you worked so hard to write are read by someone else in just a few seconds.

To be honest, I never understood it. It went east and west for a while. It was better at the beginning. But after reading more than 120 chapters, I didn't understand it. I didn't even see what the main plot was. And those people who traveled together were really poisonous.

I'm a little bit impressed, having created so many second-generation characters. Always transcending the soul ring. Another awesome second-generation character who forcibly kisses Zhu Lu. How many protagonists are there? One or two?

I have read more than 100 chapters, and I will tell you what I think is the poisonous point: (just my personal opinion) In terms of plot: I was speechless when I underestimated the enemy twice. The first time was during Shrek's outer court competition (Chapter 60). I can accept this, after all, it was the first time; but when you conquered the Ice Emperor (Chapter 92), you obviously saw a figure standing next to you. You are a King of Ten Thousand Demons, and someone warned you to be careful, and you said you knew it, but in the end, you did it in front of the King of Ten Thousand Demons, and was attacked by the King of Ten Thousand Demons, causing Zhong Liyu (the original heroine) to be seriously injured. The subsequent description of the relationship was so embarrassing to me that I really couldn't stand it anymore. Accepting the Girl: This is a harem novel, the protagonist is a love saint, but you even accepted Hibiscus, but not Zhu Lu and Jiang Nannan (Zhu Lu was forcefully kissed by an original character in front of Huo Yuhao, Wang Dong and other four people! Chapter 64) What's even more poisonous is that Wang Dong actually has a martial soul fusion skill with Xu Sanshi! WTF! Wang Dong is the heroine. Even if you don't take her into the harem, wouldn't it be nice to control her into a situation of fatherly kindness and filial piety? Although I don't know if she will be with Xu Sanshi, I have already broken my guard. Maybe it is because no one loves me in reality, so I can't accept this setting. The above are the reasons why I was persuaded to quit. They are all plots in the book. I hope they can be a precaution for future readers.

[Recommended] The author's writing style is very good, and the characters he creates are also very charming. It is worth reading. Don't be influenced by the rating, the content is very good.

The author has created the characters very well and has a very personal charm. [After reading it for more than 16 hours], he still has a say. Don't be affected by the ratings. The content of this book is actually very good. Come on, author! I hope it won't be interrupted (﹡ˆoˆ﹡)