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The new book "Start Calling Flowers of Xichangchang", please support it. Lin Mo, who traveled through time, obtained a check-in system and could extract items from anime, games, movies, and TV series. Ding dong, congratulations to the host for obtaining the skill Navy Sixth Form. Ding dong, congratulations to the host for obtaining the skill Sharingan. Ding dong, you signed in successfully. Congratulations to the host for signing in for thirty consecutive days and receiving a nuclear bomb as a reward. Ding dong, congratulations to the host for obtaining the Five Thunders Zhengfa. Ding dong, congratulations to the host for obtaining the magic weapon Qiankun Circle. ... To put it simply, this is the story of a lazy time traveler who used the system to grow a small family.
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Official(82)Scraped 7d ago
With the Thunder Fruit, the Devil Fruit is basically invincible in this world. Apart from its domineering power, it is also afraid of Hailou Stone and Sea Water. This world does not have the weakness of Sea Tower Stone and Sea Water. It is almost impossible to discover it.
I can write well enough
The writing is okay, but there are too many elements that have been used in novels and have become popular, such as the Sixth Form of the Navy, the Thunder Fruit, and the Sharingan. There are too many of them. Personally, I feel it's a bit strange to write this in a world of high martial arts. Take the Sixth Form of the Navy as an example. No matter how bad the world of martial arts is, it can still beat the pirates. After countless inheritances, there is no one better than the Sixth Form of the Navy? I'm just giving my own advice, not a bully. It is best to use some local elements when writing these. Things that are too popular can easily cause reading fatigue. Without excellent writing, it will be difficult to win the hearts of readers.
Update soon, I'll give you all my videos
I feel like I haven't read enough of the author. I'm watching your videos every day.
Nothing to say
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Nick, your ink girl? The granular soil in the later period is five
I got addicted after reading 20 pictures.
When he saw someone chasing someone else, he went to rescue him. His subordinates told him that the person he was chasing was a very powerful force, but he still ran over to him inexplicably. He passed by openly without wearing a veil or mask. After the rescue, he revealed his identity in public, saying that he was from a small town family. There is only one martial arts master in my family. If there are many forces, I am not afraid that others will come and destroy my family. The protagonist is really mindless. Anyway, I was so addicted after reading this that I couldn't stand it anymore.
A book written by a middle school boy
The writing is young, the plot is flashy, big but not detailed, and there are a lot of animation skills. The background of the plot also has the shadow of the anime setting. You can read it without thinking, and it will be exciting. Old bookworms who like to chew slowly will probably find it hard to swallow. It has a medium rating. It can pass the time when reading.
If it doesn't look good, it just doesn't look good, so I'll delete the post.
nice!
Very nice! Keep up the good work! Come on! Very nice!
Let me make a little complaint. If you don't like it, don't complain.
To be honest, the subject matter is not bad. He is a person who can use the Sixth Style. You told me that his physical fitness cannot keep up. I feel a little uncomfortable. In One Piece, not everyone can use the Sixth Style. When you are strengthened by the Sixth Style's energy, I thought your samurai is about the same level as a captain. It seems that you are just a miscellaneous soldier. If you can use the Sixth Style proficiently, you will have no energy at a hundred thousand volts. It is too weakened. Moreover, in the natural system, fatal attacks can be passively elementalized, which consumes stamina. This thunder fruit of yours might as well be a powerful thunder escape.
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Official(82)Scraped 7d ago
With the Thunder Fruit, the Devil Fruit is basically invincible in this world. Apart from its domineering power, it is also afraid of Hailou Stone and Sea Water. This world does not have the weakness of Sea Tower Stone and Sea Water. It is almost impossible to discover it.
I can write well enough
The writing is okay, but there are too many elements that have been used in novels and have become popular, such as the Sixth Form of the Navy, the Thunder Fruit, and the Sharingan. There are too many of them. Personally, I feel it's a bit strange to write this in a world of high martial arts. Take the Sixth Form of the Navy as an example. No matter how bad the world of martial arts is, it can still beat the pirates. After countless inheritances, there is no one better than the Sixth Form of the Navy? I'm just giving my own advice, not a bully. It is best to use some local elements when writing these. Things that are too popular can easily cause reading fatigue. Without excellent writing, it will be difficult to win the hearts of readers.
Update soon, I'll give you all my videos
I feel like I haven't read enough of the author. I'm watching your videos every day.
Nothing to say
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Nick, your ink girl? The granular soil in the later period is five
I got addicted after reading 20 pictures.
When he saw someone chasing someone else, he went to rescue him. His subordinates told him that the person he was chasing was a very powerful force, but he still ran over to him inexplicably. He passed by openly without wearing a veil or mask. After the rescue, he revealed his identity in public, saying that he was from a small town family. There is only one martial arts master in my family. If there are many forces, I am not afraid that others will come and destroy my family. The protagonist is really mindless. Anyway, I was so addicted after reading this that I couldn't stand it anymore.
A book written by a middle school boy
The writing is young, the plot is flashy, big but not detailed, and there are a lot of animation skills. The background of the plot also has the shadow of the anime setting. You can read it without thinking, and it will be exciting. Old bookworms who like to chew slowly will probably find it hard to swallow. It has a medium rating. It can pass the time when reading.
If it doesn't look good, it just doesn't look good, so I'll delete the post.
nice!
Very nice! Keep up the good work! Come on! Very nice!
Let me make a little complaint. If you don't like it, don't complain.
To be honest, the subject matter is not bad. He is a person who can use the Sixth Style. You told me that his physical fitness cannot keep up. I feel a little uncomfortable. In One Piece, not everyone can use the Sixth Style. When you are strengthened by the Sixth Style's energy, I thought your samurai is about the same level as a captain. It seems that you are just a miscellaneous soldier. If you can use the Sixth Style proficiently, you will have no energy at a hundred thousand volts. It is too weakened. Moreover, in the natural system, fatal attacks can be passively elementalized, which consumes stamina. This thunder fruit of yours might as well be a powerful thunder escape.
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