
Douluo I Built Jixia Academy
by Lin You'er
About This Novel
A novice author's first work sets sail.
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Official(3)Scraped 3d ago
About the plot
Personally, I think it's pretty good. As the dean, the protagonist should be calmer, don't do everything himself, and let the people under him do it. This is classy. Then there is the issue of college development. The teachers are all level 99. We should let the big forces outside come to us, instead of us going to others and letting others rush to beg us. Secondly, the students of the college should put the interests of the college first. All outsiders should be monitored and guarded. The direct academy (Ji Xiaoman, Dongfang Yao and other heroes) can form a separate team to restore the character and skill advantages of the king hero.
It's pretty good. I'll post a few more pictures. Someone will read them later.
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The other thing is to keep updating, update more. This is considered an original novel, and you have written very little about this subject. So you have to update it, otherwise it will end before readers have started, and it will be easy to keep the book, and then it will be over.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 3d ago
About the plot
Personally, I think it's pretty good. As the dean, the protagonist should be calmer, don't do everything himself, and let the people under him do it. This is classy. Then there is the issue of college development. The teachers are all level 99. We should let the big forces outside come to us, instead of us going to others and letting others rush to beg us. Secondly, the students of the college should put the interests of the college first. All outsiders should be monitored and guarded. The direct academy (Ji Xiaoman, Dongfang Yao and other heroes) can form a separate team to restore the character and skill advantages of the king hero.
It's pretty good. I'll post a few more pictures. Someone will read them later.
renew
The other thing is to keep updating, update more. This is considered an original novel, and you have written very little about this subject. So you have to update it, otherwise it will end before readers have started, and it will be easy to keep the book, and then it will be over.









