Douluo Dalu: Wuhun Tiandao, Suppress Everything!

Martial spirits are the way of heaven, and their understanding is heaven-defying. Wouldn't they create a cultivation system?

Give a brief review. The focus is on the front: respect the author, respect the author, respect the author! ! ! Here's a purely personal opinion: 1. This article is basically an invincible article. At present, it seems that the protagonist is taking the invincible route. 2. I feel that the author is not very good at writing emotional lines and descriptions. The three years of Na'er's adoption are basically covered in one stroke, and Gu Yue has basically no feelings for the protagonist. According to the plot, Gu Yue went to Donghai Academy to complete the bet with Na'er (because it is the adoption of the protagonist, so it refers to the bet with the protagonist). However, it cannot be seen at all in the article. The whole article only has more than 200 chapters (the chapter during the holiday is very vague) 3. The foreshadowing in the article, the Snow Emperor, the Ice Emperor, and the Mermaid Princess are all taken away by the protagonist through time and space without a doubt. I feel that the author's foreshadowing is to write more female protagonists, but the description of emotions is not enough. I hope not to directly mention at the end that the protagonist accepted xxx. That would be a real failure. 4. The protagonist looks at various events from the perspective of a bystander and has no emotions, so it is possible to take the route of not having a heroine. (After all, Heaven's feelings are indeed insufficient) Some tips for the author: 1. If you take the route of not having a heroine, then write the heroines more rationally, but the readers may be much less, basically similar to that book (Bloodline Supreme). 2. If there is a single heroine or a dual heroine, it should be Gu Yue and Na'er. Then the author should describe the two heroines more. At the very least, the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists must be rich. (Perhaps the author wants to write about the relationship when there is no pressure on the protagonist, such as after getting Douluo's life core.) Longgu is definitely the fastest developing period of the relationship with Gu Yue and Na'er. I look forward to the author's performance. 3. The protagonist's personal emotions are too weak. For the sake of his life core, he doesn't even step forward to acknowledge Na'er when he sees her, and Na'er is required to take the initiative. It doesn't feel like he has adopted a younger sister, but rather a tool. 4. If it is a single heroine Gu Yue, don't combine Gu Yue and Na'er. The two-in-one is really a big failure. Even if Na'er accounts for 30% of the protagonist's strength in the Silver Dragon King, this problem can be solved. If you still have to watch Na'er die (Na'er's personality will die after the merger), then you may really have to be sprayed. I really don't understand why so many fans have to merge together. I have to watch my sister die, right? Even if I don't accept Na'er, the single heroine Gu Yue can still raise Na'er as my sister. Do you have to kill and merge with Gu Yue? The above are all personal opinions and suggestions, I hope the author can take a look. Give me a recommendation and look forward to the author's performance. Those readers who feel bad about it should just delete the book and stop scolding. He's not a very famous author, so his writing is pretty good. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. My evaluation is: It's okay. Those who like invincible writing can take a look. Those who like emotional writing are not reflected in this article for the time being. You can look forward to the author's follow-up performance.

The single heroine Gu Yuena does not have a harem, she does not want a harem.

Let me tell you my opinion. It's just my personal feeling. You, the other person, have no sense of involvement. It's completely written from a third perspective. You want the readers to have a sense of involvement.

The system of cultivating immortals does not provide skills, only martial arts. I am speechless.

That's it, return the law of heaven. In the era of the Dragon King, you still have nothing to do with the law of heaven.

The content is mediocre, you obviously adopted Na'er, but when Gu Yue came, she seemed to have a good relationship with Tang Wulin. What the hell, she still feels familiar. Don't you know Su Hao? He doesn't have any enlightenment skills that defy the sky, and his level rises so slowly that he's almost the same as others.

I really don't understand. I have to go to Shrek. Is it great to be a work-study student?

It must be updated! Don't give up halfway

The poison started in the first 5 chapters. The Golden Finger was described in such a bad way and he also deliberately tried to please Tang Wulin. The reason given was because of a fairy grass and the fact that Tang Wulin would be the son of life in the future.