Lord of Pet Beasts

Novels about pet animals are actually quite popular, but this one by the author is not very good. The first reason is that the initial pet beast can be special, but it cannot be too mysterious. You just make it up in your head and then keep the rabbit as a pet. . . The second plot was too dragging and not enjoyable enough to watch. Especially when choosing a pet beast at the beginning, he actually abused the owner. It did not reflect the power of the protagonist as a self-awakening person. The ghost vine was not considered good, but because he couldn't beat it, the protagonist ran away and gave it to others. This is the poisonous point. The author needs to pay attention to the pet beast flow. As long as there are enemies encountered, there must be no enemies that cannot be defeated. The third one is some advice. There is no clear distinction between whether pets are rare or not. Moreover, the appearance of pet beasts is very important. Don't handsome and powerful pet beasts smell good? Give me some ugly and weird ones.

First, you can choose the book wasteland, but you may have to experience a poisonous point in Chapter 30! ! It's the fact that the protagonist is being tricked! Believe me, very few people who like to read this refreshing online article like this summoning article will stick to it. This poisonous point is really uncomfortable. After reading the rest, I feel that the first part is particularly special... (I don't like it anyway, but I still read it because I haven't found any other books I want to read...) Secondly, the pacing is ok, the plot has a feel, and the character descriptions are all fine so far! But it's not fun enough! ! Author, although these plots are so ups and downs, I still feel that the protagonist is not strong in the end. It's obviously so good that it's overdone, but the result is that it feels like watching a slow-burn development novel. (In short, the idea is good, the plot is strategic and rhythmic) Third, emmm, this is one point that I think I can't understand. It's the recipe, the system, and so on. All the personal information is visible, and you can even understand other people's information as long as you are strong! As a result, I couldn't explain myself clearly before! Pet abilities! If you want to say that it's okay that the ability has not been developed, or because you can't think of it, just write an ability that increases with level up, so you can modify the ability details later when you feel it needs to be supplemented! Otherwise, it is really an embarrassing point. The sense of mystery is given, but I also feel the protagonist's powerlessness... In short, I haven't found anyone I'm particularly afraid of, nor have I found anyone I particularly like... But this novel is not a dark novel, and it doesn't reflect the Virgin, so... It's okay.

How many words does the author want to write in this book? If it is too big, it can still be written at this pace and the updates can be made a little faster. If it is less, it can be speeded up and the pace can be updated like this. You can also catch up. If it is still this slow, it will be too slow. I have been tired of not reading it for a week and only updated 8 chapters. If the author sees it, can you please reply how it is updated? Thank you.

In Chapter 60, I was successfully attacked 4 times. The first time: I was attacked during the contract. The perfectly controlled beast master was taken away. If it weren't for the rule of not attacking the beast master for the first five days, I would have knelt down at the beginning. The second time: He was caught in a trap made with a net made of rattan. Unfortunately, the person who attacked him was Hanhan. If he had just knocked the protagonist unconscious with the beast control, the protagonist would have knelt down without summoning the beast control. The third time: I already knew that there was a supernatural spider creature nearby, but I accidentally caught it. If someone else's sixth sense didn't feel that the protagonist was threatened and had something important to do, so I didn't dare to fight hard, the protagonist would most likely kneel down. The fourth time: The protagonist sensed danger, but was successfully attacked by a sneak attack. If the protagonist's beast-controlling skills were not talented and his skills exploded, he would have been seriously injured even if he won. --In summary, the protagonist is too lazy. He was attacked four times, all of which were successful. If it weren't for the rules and supporting characters, he would have been in trouble long ago.

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Damn, that's awesome. The pet beast that awakened on its own has been sealed. The ability to awaken independently is not sealed. Aren't these two of the same nature? Is it so disgusting? Learned a lot

The author's writing is very good, but the gold finger design is not very good. I feel that except for the God of Cookery talent, the rest are not very useful. So I would like to give some suggestions to the author. For example, you can design a recipe that can enhance your strength. The better your qualifications, the more you will increase. Or you can design a recipe that can enhance your physical fitness. After eating it, you can grow bigger and taller. . . I hope the author can consider it.

Xiao Baiwen's bestiality. I've watched Charm, Dragon Shepherd, and Monster Paradise. Let go of that demon pet. My beasts are all mythical beast-control evolvers. You are the only one who can't stand it.

There are many poisonous points at the beginning of this book, but they are not too poisonous and can be tolerated. It should get better and better in the future. In the early stage, he suppressed the protagonist a little, which is called the abuser for short. The protagonist is a self-awakened person, and his own strength is comparable to the mid-stage pet beast. He spent all his efforts to pick up a late-stage pet beast. As a result, most of the people the protagonist meets have late-stage pet beasts, which is too unreasonable. Did everyone else pick it up for free? The protagonist can be said to be one of the three strongest. I just picked up the late-stage pet beast, but all the enemies in the future are late-stage, and some of them are very strong. It's just ridiculous. Also, the protagonist's pet beasts are all highly intelligent and can barely cooperate well when commanded. Others are either low-level or very low-level, and the pet beasts are used as if they have been used for decades. . . . . . Also, the combat is too simple, and the protagonist will just watch the pet beasts fight and do nothing himself. And I found that the protagonist has some Madonna, a bit more Madonna-like. Let's just say that when the three people who are trying to steal the protagonist's pet beast besiege the other two, they can obviously let the pet beast sneak attack the most difficult vine beast, and then the protagonist sneak attack on the three noobs. With the protagonist's strength, he can basically defeat them with three punches and two kicks. Even if the enemy wants the pet beast to come back, it won't work. After all, there are still two people holding it back. Isn't this a beautiful sneak attack, but the protagonist has to show up on his own initiative, pretending to be a slap in the face, and talking nonsense. And let people run away, poisonous

Overall, the writing is okay, but a bit too wordy and the progress is too slow. The two main storylines of Admission Trial and Ruins Exploration take up 200 chapters. When fighting against NPC or BOSS, the battle process is overly described, and the description of one battle takes up most of the chapter. I feel a little tired. Also, the character description is not deep enough and there is a single protagonist with a weak personality and a low sense of emotional empathy. There are few descriptions of the pet beasts and the daily life of the protagonist. It feels like most of them appear when the protagonist needs them. It feels like the whole book is just about fighting, upgrading and killing monsters and nothing else. I hope the author will not focus too much on upgrading combat dungeons, but focus more on character development and the daily description of the interaction between people and their pets.