Swallowing the Starry Sky: Signing in to Become a God

It's too confusing, and the systematic protagonist is incompetent. Why are you still licking Luo Feng wholeheartedly? I have no objection to you thinking of licking Luo Feng when you are not systematic and I even agree with this idea. But with the system in place, we stand at such a high angle. You actually still think that this is Luo Feng's opportunity. Please give it to those who are destined to have it by chance. Seeing how poisonous it is to give a chance.

I feel like Lin Youyu likes Wang Yi! Otherwise, why would he blush easily in front of Wang Yi? Tsk, then this Lin Youyu is really not proactive. He has been at the same table for three years and has not yet defeated Wang Yi!

I thought it was pretty good at first, but it was a bit disgusting to suddenly take in three women without emotion, thinking that it would be explained later. So in terms of the plot alone, it was fine except for being a bit fast, so I even gave it a four-star review. Why the hell didn't you explain it? ? You can accept three women, or you can have more female leads. You can write it down and go through it together, okay? Before, the relationship between boyfriend and girlfriend was just a little close at best, but suddenly they suddenly have three girlfriends without saying anything? ?

The protagonist is like a nanny, wanting to give everything to Luo Feng. Luo Feng is not an important person to you. It is written as if the protagonist is licking Luo Feng. It would be better if Babata asks the successor to agree directly. If he doesn't have all the information and skills he wants, he has to give it to Luo Feng. Luo Feng is inviting you to join. Isn't this taking off his pants and farting?

If the time traveler doesn't play the main character, it won't be interesting at all. Just look at how many fans there are if people write about Xiao Yan, Tang San, and Lin Dong.

Comment from a pure outsider. After reading more than 100 chapters, the battle content is basically covered in one stroke, the emotional scenes are covered in one stroke, and there are multiple female protagonists, but the personality of each heroine is general, and the plot is briefly touched upon. The content of having sex is mentioned in one sentence. Maybe many people don't know when they had sex. I noticed it, just one sentence. Those who look quickly will never see it hahaha. After breaking out of the universe in the later period, many things were still mentioned in one stroke. And the most outrageous thing is that many things have to be repeated over and over again. The Flame Star Behemoth is twice as big as the Golden Horn Behemoth, and the inner world is twice as big. I know it, I know it, I really know it, and I repeat many things over and over again. Every time the protagonist appears, the same sentence is said, what color is the outfit, the boy with black hair... Not much more to say, abandon the book.

There are only three or four women in Chapter 20, and all of them are beauties. They all like the protagonist. Where are the ones who are not beauties? Because you are good-looking, all you meet are beautiful women? I can't stand it anymore. . . . .

I don't even understand the setting of the original work. I'm just writing it randomly. The clone's strength cannot exceed that of the main body. In the original work, after Luo Feng seizes the body of the golden-horned giant beast, the golden-horned giant beast is the main body.

Bad review, Luo Feng is worse than the protagonist. The Lord of Chaos City actually doesn't accept the protagonist as his apprentice just because Luo Feng is the protagonist of the original work? Author of Xiba

In the early stage, I was chatting with two girls. Are they here to watch you write daily love stories or to write about Starry Sky? Isn't it better to make one, or it's okay not to have a female protagonist? I have to make two. The world of Starry Sky is already quite large, and there are basically no women in the middle and late stages.