
Douluo: Reviving Lan Ba
About This Novel
Yuxing was originally an orphan without a father or mother. He was adopted by an old man since he was a child. Just because when the old man picked him up, he was wearing a jade pendant, so he took jade as his surname. After the old man passed away, Yuxing also died in a car accident while saving others. As a result, I didn't expect to travel to the first part of Douluo Continent. , Became the direct descendant of the Blue Lightning Overlord Sect and the biological brother of Yu Tianheng. With the existence of Jade Star, a super mutated martial spirit, will the Blue Lightning Overlord Sect still be destroyed like in the original work? And his jade pendant is also unusual. Recommended two other books by the author: Douluo: The Return of Xiaoyao Villa and The Unparalleled Scholars of the Country
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Official(69)Scraped 11d ago
I ask all readers to give me some time. I don't want to be a eunuch, but because I don't have a stable income, I can't stick to it, so please wait for a few days. If possible, I will re-serialize it next week. Please understand and be able to provide support.
The writing is too messy
Why not leave it to his grandparents, father and mother when he has time? The protagonist clearly knows that Bibi Dong wants to destroy the family, so if he doesn't hand over his kung fu to his grandfather, why don't you take the fairy grass and bring one to his brother!
The first part is OK, but the second part is useless.
Seeing Yu Tianxing being raped by that woman Ruoyun makes me feel so damn sick!
It feels too messy
I feel like you, the author, are going to fail. There are a few lines that are difficult to write. The first is the ending of Yu Xiaogang and Bibi Dong, which is not easy to write. The protagonist you wrote has a good relationship with the master, but Bibi Dong destroyed the entire Lan Dian clan, and I don't know if you can kill him or not. As long as you win the elite competition and don't join the Spirit Hall, Bibi Dong will definitely find an opportunity to kill him. You, the second is the line of destroying the Wuhun Palace. The Wuhun Palace is still decent in the hands of Qian Daoliu, but it is useless in the hands of Qianxunji and Bibi Dong. What the Wuhun Palace looks like in the hands of Qianxunji is not written in the original work, but in the hands of Bibi Dong, it is Xiao Zhang and vicious. Take the genius aspect, if you don't join the Wuhun Palace, you will die. (Personally, I feel that Bibi Dong It is to take revenge on the Douluo Continent, as can be seen from the soul hunting, and to establish the Wuhun Empire to unify the Douluo Continent (but in the original work, she was for the Shenjiu Examination) (assuming there is no Tang San). Anyone who has read history knows that it is easy to conquer the country, but it is difficult to defend the country. The Wuhun Palace established the Wuhun Empire and there were no developmental talents. After she ascended to the God Realm, the war would be The third is whether to join Shrek or not. The relationship between Yu Xiaogang and Yu Xiaogang written by the author is pretty accurate (fans who join Shrek can write hundreds of thousands of words). The fourth is the emotional line, which is a bit confusing. Those who have read Xiaoyao will know that the author's emotional line is very good. The above is what I personally think. I welcome you to discuss it with all my fellow writers.
single heroine
Does the author have a single female protagonist in this book?
nausea
Either you have sex with each other when you meet them, or you only love one and have unclear relationships with other women. It's really disgusting.
Well, maybe it's not suitable for me. I was raped🤐. It's easy to get together and get away. Come on, author😍
come on
Emmm, this is my first time to write a review. I read the author's big book Xiaoyao Mountain Villa and found it quite good. I haven't read this one yet, but it should be good. Keep it up.
grass jelly hanging
Why don't you go get those fairy grasses? Since you don't want to lick Tang San, you should get them when the opportunity arises. Besides, you also have a team. How about you get two or three kinds? If you just consider the relationship between the protagonist and Tang San, you can just keep him and Xiao Wu's share. The protagonist has a relationship with the other five monsters, and he has never met them before, and they are forced to give him a chance.
It's too redundant to write here! It starts again, it starts again, sending girls! ! ! A bit disgusting. . . Just leave after taking care of her, cut it off completely, and don't have any interactions with each other, understand? Don't delay
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Official(69)Scraped 11d ago
I ask all readers to give me some time. I don't want to be a eunuch, but because I don't have a stable income, I can't stick to it, so please wait for a few days. If possible, I will re-serialize it next week. Please understand and be able to provide support.
The writing is too messy
Why not leave it to his grandparents, father and mother when he has time? The protagonist clearly knows that Bibi Dong wants to destroy the family, so if he doesn't hand over his kung fu to his grandfather, why don't you take the fairy grass and bring one to his brother!
The first part is OK, but the second part is useless.
Seeing Yu Tianxing being raped by that woman Ruoyun makes me feel so damn sick!
It feels too messy
I feel like you, the author, are going to fail. There are a few lines that are difficult to write. The first is the ending of Yu Xiaogang and Bibi Dong, which is not easy to write. The protagonist you wrote has a good relationship with the master, but Bibi Dong destroyed the entire Lan Dian clan, and I don't know if you can kill him or not. As long as you win the elite competition and don't join the Spirit Hall, Bibi Dong will definitely find an opportunity to kill him. You, the second is the line of destroying the Wuhun Palace. The Wuhun Palace is still decent in the hands of Qian Daoliu, but it is useless in the hands of Qianxunji and Bibi Dong. What the Wuhun Palace looks like in the hands of Qianxunji is not written in the original work, but in the hands of Bibi Dong, it is Xiao Zhang and vicious. Take the genius aspect, if you don't join the Wuhun Palace, you will die. (Personally, I feel that Bibi Dong It is to take revenge on the Douluo Continent, as can be seen from the soul hunting, and to establish the Wuhun Empire to unify the Douluo Continent (but in the original work, she was for the Shenjiu Examination) (assuming there is no Tang San). Anyone who has read history knows that it is easy to conquer the country, but it is difficult to defend the country. The Wuhun Palace established the Wuhun Empire and there were no developmental talents. After she ascended to the God Realm, the war would be The third is whether to join Shrek or not. The relationship between Yu Xiaogang and Yu Xiaogang written by the author is pretty accurate (fans who join Shrek can write hundreds of thousands of words). The fourth is the emotional line, which is a bit confusing. Those who have read Xiaoyao will know that the author's emotional line is very good. The above is what I personally think. I welcome you to discuss it with all my fellow writers.
single heroine
Does the author have a single female protagonist in this book?
nausea
Either you have sex with each other when you meet them, or you only love one and have unclear relationships with other women. It's really disgusting.
Well, maybe it's not suitable for me. I was raped🤐. It's easy to get together and get away. Come on, author😍
come on
Emmm, this is my first time to write a review. I read the author's big book Xiaoyao Mountain Villa and found it quite good. I haven't read this one yet, but it should be good. Keep it up.
grass jelly hanging
Why don't you go get those fairy grasses? Since you don't want to lick Tang San, you should get them when the opportunity arises. Besides, you also have a team. How about you get two or three kinds? If you just consider the relationship between the protagonist and Tang San, you can just keep him and Xiao Wu's share. The protagonist has a relationship with the other five monsters, and he has never met them before, and they are forced to give him a chance.
It's too redundant to write here! It starts again, it starts again, sending girls! ! ! A bit disgusting. . . Just leave after taking care of her, cut it off completely, and don't have any interactions with each other, understand? Don't delay













