Douluo: Incarnate as a Poisonous Beast and Cut Off the 30,000-year Journey of Hu and Tang Dynasty

But maybe he won't listen

I see you have written dozens of chapters, and most of them are original. If you want to get the traffic of Douluo, don't write such nonsense. If it doesn't work, you can just write a separate book instead of the four different chapters you write now. You can't see the feeling of Douluo fandom at all.

The protagonist is either being beaten, or is crushing the protagonist on the way to being beaten. Some of the plot designs are far-fetched. For example, the protagonist is absorbing soul bones and is suddenly attacked. Why can he be suddenly attacked? How does he know the protagonist is here? The character of the protagonist is also not very careless and careless. After killing Xiaobai's deputy, he didn't take any defensive measures, or he moved the body and slowly devoured it in front of others on the battlefield, and then was stabbed to death by Xiaobai with a spear. I can tolerate these things. What if the author actually changed the protagonist. At about 60 chapters and nearly 70 chapters, he actually changed a protagonist. The consciousness of the previous protagonist has dissipated and died. It is just a new consciousness that has inherited the memory and legacy of the previous protagonist. This is the shortcoming I see so far.

It was so poisonous that a group of titled Douluo didn't use their own martial arts to fight with a trident. It was really unbelievable and even more inexplicable. They couldn't use any soul skills to release poison, they could only release a field and draw an A. Also, you said Tang San only ascended for more than 20 years and there was a soul guidance ship on Poseidon Island😐 Also, when did you invent all kinds of high-tech soul guidance technology on Poseidon Island that was so good?

I haven't read it yet, so I read the introduction. Others are either beast gods or evil emperors. Snow Emperor, how come you are called Blue King? They all sat at the children's table. The soul beast has been king for ten thousand years, emperor for one hundred thousand years, and emperor for two hundred thousand years. You have no chance of being called Blue King.

For example, those who were reborn after the collapse of the Spirit Empire during the Dou Yi period or who could not emerge from the world. During the time when the Sun and Moon Continent collided, the Poseidon Pavilion Master of Ultimate Fire and more than thirty helpers

There's no plot in Against the Heavens, it's all composition.

Which software did you use to write it? I want to play with it. It's really good.

Each level of a banned account before having a soul core increases its lifespan by 100 years. But with the soul core, the lifespan of a Titled Douluo can only reach 200 years. When establishing human power, should we let them give up their soul cores?

Soul beast style is still about killing monsters and upgrading. I quite like reading it, author, please don't stop.