Peerless Tang Sect, Starting from Changing Dormitories with Huo Yuhao

I hope the heroine is Wang Dong alone. Otherwise, the so-called truth of the male protagonist will be lost in this way. I can't accept it after this I just read a fanfic about Douluo Yi before The male protagonist is really the childhood sweetheart of the female protagonist Ning Rongrong The heroine has been with the hero for so long But my fiancée I gave everything for the hero As a result, Qian Renxue came and accompanied the male protagonist through a spiritual test. Then the male protagonist slept with Qian Renxue (It's Qian Renxue's ancestor, the devil in the fairy world) It really makes me sick I couldn't accept it for a moment I just hate those gods to death. It really annoys me Obviously a lot of things can be allowed to take their own course. Just for your own benefit Forcing those so-called protagonists I hope the protagonist of this book will not be disturbed by the divine world Otherwise, you really want to give me your three views from the front. It feels like they are all excuses. Please, please, the author.

Damn, the author, you update, update, I'm here to urge you to update, you want to update, you know, I read the update every day, but you just don't update. If you cheat me, I will... I don't dare to send you the blade, my dear, don't cheat me, I will cry for you.

There are quite a few typos. Doesn't the author know how to correct them?

After watching another movie about making a fuss about Shrek, I found that it's better to torture Shrek.

1. First of all, the overall plot of this book is okay. It seems to be a single female protagonist so far, and she is sincere towards Wang Dong (the protagonist likes Wang Dong or Wang Dong'er, not Tang Wutong. Wang Dong shows sincerity to the protagonist earlier than Dou Er, because the protagonist knows the plot, and his attitude towards Wang Dong is different from Huo Yuhao in Dou Er) 2. Then this book smeared some characters to a certain extent, which was not in line with Dou Er's setting. 1. It was first said that Beibei joined the Tang Sect because of sex. 2. Then he smeared Xu Sanshi. The protagonist repeatedly blocked Jiang Nannan's feelings for Xu Sanshi, and emphasized in the plot that the part where Xu Sanshi risked his life to save Jiang Nannan was directed and acted by himself. 3. There are also some criticisms of Huo Yuhao (which do not conform to the image of Huo Yuhao in the Three Young Masters) 4. While the protagonist likes Wang Dong, he also hates Tang San and secretly breaks the statue of Tang San. I don't know what Wang Dong will do when he faces his father and lover. By then, Wang Dong will no longer be a human being, even if Wang Dong is not exactly Tang Wutong (there is a sense of déjà vu like Bibi Dong, there is a difference, don't make a fuss) 5. In the end, the book contains a lot of critical comments on San Shao (actually, this part is not bad, most fan fiction has critical comments on San Shao, but this book has more, it can be said that it runs through the whole text) In many embarrassing situations, I couldn't help it, so I tried to protect everyone before quitting the trap. Of course, if there is someone who is good at it, it can be said to be a recommendation. Anyway, I was disgusted (one star is because I was disgusted and quit the trap)

Ah ah ah, Da Da is finally back and updated. Don't worry about others, just follow your original ideas. If you don't give up, I won't leave. QAQ, come on.

Damn, you can write more slowly. But please, really, Don't cheat, Woohoo, I just want to read a complete book with Wang Dong as the heroine. Why is it so difficult? Originally, there were very few Douluo fanfics where the heroine was Wang Dong. Even Wang Qiu or others are less likely than the heroine to be Wang Dong. What's more, it's a single female protagonist. Even if there is, it is incomplete and has been abandoned. The ending is also poorly written. There are really too few, I can't find a few articles. It's so sad, Why doesn't everyone really like Wang Dong? She is obviously a arrogant little cutie, She is really a good person, I really like her the most, It's a pity that the third young master later wrote about her completely. As a result, many people don't like Wang Qiu even if they like her. She is also very pitiful, She said that Tang San got it for her and gave it to a second-class god. Did you say that Tang San found a godly husband for her? Do you really love her? But why was part of her soul separated? Why was my life arranged? Why does Huo Yuhao really love her? What on earth are Orange's children? Save her and let her go again and again, Even helped save her, And what does Ma Xiaotao mean? Is it really to suppress the evil fire? Do you become a sister when you sleep? Do you even want to help and care for your boyfriend? I really don't have three views. I can't deny that the fights written by San Shao are really good. However, many of his plots are a bit ruinous to one's outlook on life. This is how it is in Douluo Yi, There are really a lot of illogical things going on. Some are really forced, Also, the male protagonist is engaging in some deep love scenes, Please, who is not engaging in ambiguity... Okay, okay, I can't control it. I'm a little angry. If anyone has a point of view that I don't agree with, I won't agree with it. Anyway, that's it, Everyone has different opinions, Please don't force my thoughts, Just pretend you didn't see it. Finally, I just want to tell the author, Please, please, really, really don't give up. QAQ, I love you

I haven't opened this software for a long time. I just discovered the author's lifetime series today. It became a debt-laden series, Updates are much more diligent. But you deserve to be proud? Do you still remember how long we have been waiting? If you are wandering during the summer vacation, We will really let you become A Piao. Woo woo woo, Author, you really can't cheat me. Check out the updates on your book. Look at us again, There are still people who fall into this deep pit from time to time. Do you think of us occasionally? Update it occasionally, Have mercy on the poor child, I, I really want to finish reading this book, Miserable, miserable, miserable, It's just incoherent anyway. Let me give you a final summary of the theme: Just two words: update, Please give me an update. I'm urging you to update. Take a bow and give you an update, Otherwise, I will curse you: During the summer vacation, the air conditioner has no electricity. It's so hot for you, hum.

What is a protagonist without a protagonist halo? Is it interesting that the protagonist's aura has always been emphasized? Haha, Wang Dong's speed is just as fast as Huo Yuhao's, it's simply ridiculous! Huo Yuhao ran at a speed that was advantageous to him. His physical condition was not good to begin with. Is there anything wrong with running like this? Wang Dong can also run at a speed that is advantageous to him, and if he insists on running like Huo Yuhao, will he be ignored? Are there any problems with the self-created running skills? As long as the writing is not too outrageous, I can accept it, but how are my antibodies? You still emphasize this? Isn't it normal for Shrek to pay attention to martial arts? They have always won the soul master competition and have never been defeated. Will they care about soul guides? You're just standing in a third perspective I quite agree with you, the author, about Tang San. Accept the rebuttal. After all, this is just what I saw. I stopped reading after reaching chapter 12, I was tired of it.

The heroine Wang Dong? If you want to eat shit, Tang San will let you have your wish? If you set a trap for yourself, how will the original Huo Yuhao be played? Do you think you've had enough fun? Orange is a woman with a baby. Tang San, a god king, can threaten to erase his memory. For the sake of his own daughter, his soul will be torn into pieces and melted into a soul beast. For such a ruthless person, you want to have sex with other people's daughters. Huo Yuhao is not allowed to touch her. Be cautious when entering the trap