Martial Saint of the Mountains

The plot writing is a bit poor, and the main character is the main character. Why does it have to do so many things? It's not like the cottage cannot survive without food. This kind of golden finger is probably innate after just a year and a half. He ventures out to cause trouble just to develop the copycat, but what practical benefits can the growth of the copycat bring to the protagonist? The tree will only attract wind and increase the danger, and it will have to be a babysitter for the younger brother. So this opening plot seems very awkward! It's also the golden finger itself, the data flow golden finger, but the skills learned are not digitized. I haven't started to practice Kaishan Palm for two days, and then suddenly become a minor? This kind of suddenness makes readers feel so uninvolved! There is also the terrain of the cottage. If the location of the cottage is so obvious and the strength is so weak, how did it survive? Especially when you have repeatedly robbed big families in the county, how can you have the confidence to rob other people if they just send two Houtian warriors to easily wipe out your village? At the very least, a large mountain stronghold that is as powerful as the nearby rich clan should be set up above the protagonist's small stronghold, and the small stronghold should be handed over for worship in order to gain protection. On top of that, setting up the terrain of the cottage is very complicated, and outsiders, even acquired warriors, can't touch the cottage without anyone to guide them. It must be easy to defend but difficult to attack, and possessing something like a city-defending crossbow or rolling logs and stones can allow warriors to form a team to attack without fear. Otherwise, just set these copycats to be more stubborn and not dare to take action against the nearby wealthy families, or the copycats have colluded with the wealthy families in the county and are protected. Then the protagonist needs money, medicinal materials and other resources to support his martial arts training, so he spends his time building a copycat in order to bring in a steady stream of martial arts resources. But in the author's book, these settings are not available, which makes the plot development too rigid.

Looking at this style, you have to be a hottie to have the right taste.

I really like this kind of subject matter, come on

Well, at least the writing is quite comfortable to look at😕

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There is also a Qingqing who likes the protagonist and wants to start a harem? What will happen if the protagonist's confidante dies of old age in the future🤗

Your golden finger adds 1.8 Points of strength a day, which is 50 points a month. Brother, in five years you will be invincible.