Wu Dong: I, Practicing Internal Scrolling, Scrolling and Crying Lin Dong

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1. In the inner volume of the cultivation novel, the feeling started to show up in the first 30 chapters, and then it became a stallion novel. There are too many female protagonists, and the protagonists are accepted one after another. I feel that there is no need to fight for opportunities. I can just meet a beautiful one and take it. I feel that the author has written the protagonist as a seeder in Tianxuan Continent. I have a feeling that the book is finished and the protagonist has hundreds or thousands of descendants. 2. Based on the development of this story, the protagonist will also accept Ying Huanhuan and even Ying Xiaoxiao in the future. In the original work, Lin Dynasty was able to accept Ling Qingzhu and Ying Huanhuan at the same time because of the various experiences they have experienced together, plus the halo of the protagonist, otherwise he could accept them at the same time. What the hell, two of them. They are all top-notch people in Tianxuan Continent, with equal talent and beauty. They are not the protagonists, and it is impossible to accept them at the same time. The protagonist of this book also accepts so many women whose talents are not at the same level, and Ling Qingzhu and Ying Huanhuan also accept them. It feels impossible. 3. This book talks about physical fitness, understanding, etc. The upper limit of Ziyue and Xuansu's talents is there. Even if they are fed pills to survive, they will still be in the Nirvana state. Unless the system gives them something to improve their qualifications, their cultivation will not be able to keep up. However, judging from the protagonist's current stallion, how much the system will give them. 4. It feels so charming, so tasteless, and none of the women in Wudong Qiankun are superficial, so I wouldn't write it as someone who recruits girls later. The girl will fall in love with the protagonist when she sees him. It's so tasteless, it's better to just brush it off at the beginning. After looking at the charm + a few, I don't know what to say. 5. There is also a skill transfer, pass the seal of the Devouring Ancestral Talisman to Ziyue, and you are sure nothing will happen to you. There is also a deacon of Jiutian Taiqing Palace who is looking for the Devouring Ancestral Talisman. If he encounters Ziyue, you are sure nothing will happen to the family. 6. There are also talisman puppets. The Yin Puppet Sect does not have that many high-level talisman puppets to play with. Now that the family has expanded and has not even reached Dahuang County, can the family have only one high-level talisman puppet? 7. The protagonist of the Big Tomb suppressed three major families by himself, and did not go back immediately afterwards. Instead, now that he is practicing in the Big Tomb, Lin Langtian will not take revenge. He is already stronger than him at this age. It is not normal for Lin Langtian to take advantage of the protagonist before he has fully grown up, and pull his lineage to take revenge. In the original work, when Lin Langtian suppressed Lin Dong, Lin Dong was still The Great Perfection of the Yuan Dan stage definitely did not pose any threat to Lin Langtian. Later, Lin Dong was allowed to go out with his aura, and the matter of grabbing the spirit treasure was over. When he fought Wang Yan later, it was Ling Qingzhu who saved Lin Dong, and Wang Yan didn't look for trouble. Here, it was just a matter of waiting for the protagonist to strengthen a wave, and then he would kill him when he was held accountable. 8 And what Xuan Su said, I don't like you because you are beautiful. Do you believe this protagonist? It's simply a quote from a scumbag.

A chamber of commerce that doesn't even have the Formation Realm can collect materials to make high-level talisman puppets. Are high-level talisman puppets too cheap? A woman who is not even a supporting actress in two chapters can give you such an advanced talent. What can a real supporting actress give you? God-level talents or spiritual martial arts, heavenly martial arts, or divine weapons. When did these talents, martial arts, and divine weapons become so cheap?

From the beginning, it seemed okay, but later on, he really fell in love with a woman, and he fell in love with the protagonist like a complete fool. It is true that any protagonist who travels to the past can always give the chosen harem heroine a sure blow to her wits.

It's best to have a big halberd. They're all swords. I'm tired of looking at them.

Do you have to work harder on the ones with the fewest words on the new book list, such as updating 50,000 or 100,000 words in one go to catch up with them?

Author, please change it. You are using the system and enjoying the benefits. The system has not made any mistakes. Why are you going crazy and criticizing it?

Average Let's practice writing. The author's description of the emotional line is not very good. He wanted to write about the harem but he has a tendency to be a bit eunuch. The author can't control it well and keeps pulling it.

Come on, come on, this book is better than the last one. I hope you keep writing and don't stop updating.

The pace is too slow. More than a hundred chapters are still in the novice village, and it has always followed the main line of the original work.