The Battle Broke Out, and She Married Feng Qing'er at the Beginning

Giving his unique skills to Xiao Yan, a stranger? And why do you accommodate Feng Qing'er? I thought the protagonist's cultivation level was low. I didn't treat you well in the early stage, and you suffered like an animal, just for the sake of being my wife. Disgusting 🤢

I don't really understand The protagonist's power is Yin Gu and his master, the highest Seven-Star Dou Sage (the protagonist is equivalent to the Young Sect Master). Why does it feel the same regardless of whether he has a background? Feng Qing'er's master doesn't value him, so what's the use of writing this background? Moreover, the protagonist's strength has not been mentioned from the beginning. I only found out it is a 6-star Dou Sect after reading the comments. Please explain. Also, is the protagonist a bit too clumsy? If you say it's a sign of loving his wife, then I have nothing to say. I don't understand this kind of performance. I can only say respect. I hope the author can explain it😏

When I first met Xiao Yan, my attitude was a bit licky, but don't give up and look back slowly. Brother, I'm not writing a licking novel. I'm just writing about a coward who hasn't finished reading the original novel, and it's just the subconscious hugging reaction when I first met the protagonist of the original novel😊😊😊

You are a Dou Zong, and you are afraid that a Dou Emperor will give you up. Forget it and retreat.

I can only say that the first few chapters written by the author are not very attractive. Most of the people who read the fanfic are just for the fun of invincibility and stallion. There are too few people who really want to read some of the original novels and like the supporting characters. Anyway, when I read the fanfic, I hope that the characters I like will have a good ending in another world (novel) instead of sharing a man with a bunch of women and then having no IQ to become a pendant and an outlet for desire. In fact, it is quite good for people like me who like to watch single women and more emotional dramas. I think it's okay if the male protagonist licks the turtle. When you like a girl very much, you will make her do all kinds of things and don't want to make her unhappy. It's normal to be controlled in front of outsiders. I think if you really like it, you won't care about it. Instead, you will show off to outsiders that you have such a beautiful wife who likes you. I can only say that most people are stunned when they read the novel The Invincible Stallion. I hope the author will work hard and the next book will continue to be single.

There is no need for the author to lick Xiao Yan like this. His master is a 7-star Dou Sage and a Celestial Demon Phoenix. Is it necessary to lick him?

Let me tell you my opinion. First, writing fan fiction does not mean readers will agree with you based on your setting or the personality of the protagonist. These two are the most important things in fan fiction, not the reasons the author uses to block readers' opinions. Secondly, there is the issue of the protagonist's character. Why do people in the comment area dislike the protagonist? Let me talk about a few bad points. ① He has a high background and a strong talent, and even has the "curve miraculous effect". The author has set a very high level of force. This kind of Tian Hu can obviously do a lot of things in the beginning. Not to mention that the author also made up for it by saying that the protagonist is jumping to read novels, but he has no vision or strategy in such a big power. He is like a fool and does not explore it. It is a miracle that this kind of character has not been killed by his peers in a big power. ②The protagonist is too cowardly and has no plans or arrangements in this context of strength. He is like a six-year-old girl who gives up on a good plan. Where are your plan B and plan C? Just like playing house. ③What is the difference between sticking to Feng Qing'er every day and Xiao Xun'er in the original work? Are you writing about Feng Qinger or the protagonist? Is the audience for female channels or male channels? ④The protagonist is so talented and has a deep background. Master Dou Sheng just asks him to marry a bird, but he doesn't tell the protagonist what his intention is? (I guess the author will make up for it later, but it's hard to say) The protagonist himself can't do anything about it, but where is the plan to arrange and borrow the donkey? ⑤Do you think your strength will increase if you eat more like the divine bloodline of the imperial clan in the original work? Why can the Imperial Clan survive for a long time because of a bloodline that no one else can match, no matter how talented they are? The protagonist is talented and capable, but why does he get this status and training resources without fighting for it? If the author says that there is competition and competition, okay, then doesn't this conflict with the protagonist you wrote about the cowardly character of a girlfriend? Can this character and IQ defeat this native of the world who respects force? One muscle becomes blocked at both ends, which is self-contradictory. In the original work, Xiao Xun'er was able to act like a fool because he had a top-notch father, and his divine bloodline was secondary. How about you, just relying on a master? Why are people so nice to you? There is no support from parents. IQ is also worrying, The character is also hard to describe. As we all know, if the writing is not strong enough to reflect the brilliance of the protagonist, then the IQ and expressiveness of the supporting characters will be reduced. At least it can still be watched, but it is a bit difficult to write a plot with everyone's low IQ.

It's so good. The other Dou Po fans are all about changing their marriages. I almost vomited when I saw it. Big cheers for the author.

The hole I buried is quite big. If you feel uncomfortable somewhere, you can just say it directly. There are many pitfalls, uncomfortable points and unexplainable places. I will correct them later. If you don't, I will admit it if you guys scold me.

It's not suitable for you. Dou Po is a passionate novel. I felt aggrieved the whole time when I saw the Sifang Pavilion Conference. I won't say that it will turn you into Long Aotian, but at least you will become an expert in this world.