Douluo: Travel Through Huo Yuhao, but the Witch Path

To be honest, I don't understand. In the past, I could accept other male-to-female transformations, but the author's male-to-female transformation is the only one that I really can't stand for some reason. Maybe it's because the protagonist really thinks of herself as a woman? The ones I watched in the past were basically like women in their hearts, but at least they would be tough-talking, and there was a transformation process, but the protagonist did not accept it directly at all. Although the author gave an explanation, it's still a bit too strong for me.

I couldn't stand it anymore and kept competing. It was really something Douluo fans had to try...

I can't say anything nice. I don't know how to say it if it doesn't look good. Anyway, it's very awkward. There is a kind of candy that tastes bitter if you eat half of it.

Let's turn Tianmeng into a female, so we don't have to worry about the Ice Emperor anymore.

The only shortcoming is that there are too few words, which is not enough to read.

Various descriptions are still too blunt, some descriptions are not quite appropriate, some of the characters' answers are strange, and the emotions are not well written. There is no sense of depth, there is no foreshadowing, and the writing will feel scattered. Without thinking about many things, it will feel stiff. In terms of emotions, you can use charm and instigation as an auxiliary, but you can never use it as the main body. Emotions with reasons are in line with the common understanding of people. "Witch Path: Harley" feels better in this aspect. Also, the protagonist's love for his mother is too abrupt. It's very strange for a time traveler to automatically transfer his love for his mother to a stranger. You have to at least write down a specific process to describe what the mother did to make the protagonist feel maternal love, so that the originally uncomfortable protagonist can accept this mother. There is also the missing process of the protagonist integrating into the world. The protagonist has been observing the world from a God's perspective based on past experiences, which will make it difficult for readers to get involved.

It looks good. I love watching it. Please update more and don't stop updating.

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It's pretty good. Why did you cut it and open a crappy one?

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